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that explains things. im curious where you got the inspiration to write a character in the autism spectrum.

i have a question, why did Nathan say that no one really knows him? and is he a high functioning individual with asd?

also, the first paragraph. Looking at the busses passing by, there was solace in the confounding truth that everyone was meant to go in every direction. That a path opens and closes for those yearning to seek it, those desperately wanting it, and those trying hard to fight for it. Allowing my heart to crow praise for deeds I have yet to make, I empowered myself to think. You deserve more. You deserve more. You deserve more... That I am more than the cruddy estimate of those in line to wear me down, sloughing the very fabric of my tattered clothes until I am stark naked, feasibly dissevered from the crutches of my own good opinions. I deserve the right to think well of myself. Without it, I am but a floater suspended in space, waiting to vanish and disappear. And I swear to god, I’ll have none of that. wth. this sounded like it was written by jane austen. im saying it as a complement. but when did greg became so literary?

"Nope. I’m afraid that I’ll catch feelings and this will become unrequited, therefore hurting me in the process,” he said sternly. “So I think it’s better if I distance myself. Today might be our last day to see each other." i said something similar like this to someone years ago and the bastard became my husband. Your eyes are the colour of chartreuse—an iris that has the lightest shade of brown in the centre, giving it an illusion that it’s yellow. Central heterochromia is what it’s called. Two sets of eye colours, both yellow and green. They can also wear someone down, looking suspicious for a moment, then gentle, kind, and then shock you with sudden melancholy. All I've seen so far is the lack of joy or the embodiment of it. You may have a hardened expression. But your eyes can speak volumes well before you speak your mind. And that is one mystery I’d like to uncover." this is just beautifully written. i'm in love with nathaniel worthington now.

he better have a break. otherwise I'll keep on reading and hate you at the same time.

i have a question. is paulla going to have a main role? and bucket hat guy is the same guy thatncame out of that billionaire's mansion right? also, why aren't you giving greg a break? he deserves it.

i love ur interpretation of this.

i get it now.this is very interesting way to make your characters complex. really digging where this is going.

ok. another question. why did greg forget to wear a condom? that seems like an odd mention in the storyline.

"Bugger do I care?" he said, slurping at my cock, with his velour gloves on my shaft and his mouth speckled by a frothy emollient of precum and saliva. Seconds later, he was haunched on the bed, positioning his friable arsehole above my stick. The sound was a grunt, a grunting explained by a mixture of being whacked by a fist and a flicking of his fun-sized nipple. this feels like literary erotica for the cerebral kind. ha ha. i may be too dumb for this. also, is Ryan his fuck buddy or he's going to be someone more? also, who is this man in the bucket hat...a stalker? is he going to sleep with mr bucket hat or he's just a side character?

you're crazy. ha ha ha

why is greg not getting the job?

i remember my family being dirt poor growing up. this hits home. i'm cheering for Greg. he needs that job soon. give him that job, please!

wth! i feel cheated. lol. post book 1 first. please?

i can't wait for the second chapter. i'm very intrigued with where this is going.

this is great writing and very good storytelling. tell me you're an editor without telling me you're an editor. i wonder if Greg's going to be a nanny for a very rich family, and then fall in love with the son. don't know where the escorting job comes in. this sounds like the plot to the nanny. lol.

"Daddy’s with you now. Take care of each other, okay. I’ll see you when I see you, my little angel." i hate that you wrote this. i was tearing up at this part. this entire story is such a bittersweet feel to it. you have wonderfully chartered a magical story. i just wanted to stay in this beach and drink beers and watch sunset. please keep writing. itll be a crime if you dont

this whole mon ceour things is very gushy. im here for it.

what im saying is it legitimately sounds like a news article i would read online. i wonder if you work for writing news

did you write the news article from the guardian? it sounds like a news article i would read online

you managed to capture action, adventure and romance in a few words.that says a lot where this is going. i honestly can't wait.

is it just me but the narration in here is vastly different from your previous story like.this one's insanely better? honestly im already hooked.

i am now excited for the next episode. this better be riveting.

his backstory is wow. just wow.this felt like i was listening to alberts narration. im gonna start saying to my husband.worship me adore me devote yourself to me. that would force him out of the couch and start cleaning for once. but seriously, this was really good. so good

thank goodness. i was worried youd shift to 3rd person pov or something.most writers whod done that here tends to be a mess.