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its impossible for you to write alberts story without having him tell his story right? is h3 gonna tell his story on the next episode? i wonder if youll tell it with 3rd pov.
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i wanted to hug albert he seemed really frustated with what damien did.poor guy. he seemed tired and exhausted and barely getting by.
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why does this feel like the eye before the storm. it feels great reading the end part but something istroubling me.like something bad will happen. dont get me wrong, albert and damien's feelgood interactions makes me want to grab a man in the street and cuddle with him. but i feel theres a jumpscare somewhere.
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I hoped in my heart that we were not held back by the memories shoved deep in the trenches of the yesteryears, and that we’re not the sum of any old scar that we accrued. i forgot to quote this. this was really beautiful.
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im happy to have my heart broken with your quality of writing. keep itup. keep breaking our hearts
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i can't help but feel giddy that at last something is happening to their relationship. this isthe first time they slept on the bed...i'm really excited for things to come.
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this just hits hard. i hope someone erects a wall in front ofnme when i'm sad. but seriously this is just goodwriting. i applaud you sir.
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why do you have to write like this? this is so sad and so good.im not saying i teared up a bit but if ever i did, its your fault.
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Plastic Love But It's In Da Club
stefan7891 commented on LJCC's story chapter in Plastic Love But It's In Da Club
i didn't mean to insult you. sorry. cause stories posted in serials usually get bad in the middle.this story seems to be getting better and better along with the writing. also 50 cents in this remix soundtrack is hilarious. -
Plastic Love But It's In Da Club
stefan7891 commented on LJCC's story chapter in Plastic Love But It's In Da Club
i will stick around if the quality ofthe writing is the same.or better. -
But… jealousy isn’t bad. When you’re jealous, every fibre and bone in your body is telling you not to lose this person. Every part of you is aching to have them back. And that you're being reminded of the things you’d lose once they’re gone. Because losing this person is more than a heartbreak, more than some petty feeling you’d forget the next day. Losing this person means losing a part of you. And no one wants that—to live the rest of your life living some part of a half. this made me go aww. the wordplay is great on this one. really captures the essence.of jealousy
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Plastic Love But It's In Da Club
stefan7891 commented on LJCC's story chapter in Plastic Love But It's In Da Club
you're very talented with words. since the frst chapter everything has been very cohesive and has structure. the funny parts are balanced by serious ones. i think it will get darker from here. i love the story so far.
