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  1. stefan7891

    Little Freddy

    i refuse to believe this is just a short story. i wanted to read more. why do you do this to us. why? also the grammar is impeccable. hats off sir.
  2. when are you posting the entire story? been waiting for this for ages.
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    CHAPTER 1: MISREAD

    you better finish it. you cannot, not write this. this deserves some tlc. like you seem to write as a hobby but you really have talent when it comes to storytelling. that thing is definitely clear.
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    CHAPTER 1: MISREAD

    the way this story slithered out of my radar, lol. i hope you get to finish this. you literally have 3 pending stories to finish now. crossing my fingers this one gets its happy ending.
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    PROLOGUE:

    no joke, damien sounded like a guy i dated after college. the whole broey angsty narration is very on brand. im really excited for this story.
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    CHAPTER 1: MISREAD

    ok. fine. I get it. this has got to be one of the best first chapters I've read in this site. and i'm very picky about the stories I read. but this honestly reads like an actual story I could pick up from a shop. you're a real talented writer. and i finished the mr and mister series and this one has a literally a different tone from this that book. and the way you captured the country accent...i want to read this story now. like right now. this is a rewrite right? is this already over as a series? i have to know since i'm a fan of your stories now.
  7. haha. no. i am patient. patiently waiting.
  8. this is the only story that made me want to come out of the shadows and be an active user in this site because of how good the story was written.and im still waiting for the sequel.will it come out in 2030?
  9. here you go making me fall for characters i'll be reading months from now. i hate you. ha ha. but this teaser is really really good. like im actually watching a netflix documentary.
  10. i can't click fast enough. i have a feeling that this is going to be a very epic story masterfully written like you always do. like i'm really excited for this. is this already complete? cause don't you dare tease me with something this good. how dare you make me feel happy for a moment. ha ha.
  11. a walk to remember meets double 007 and blind assassin. the author has real integrity when it comes to his masterful writing and prose. it's very rare to read lgbt themed spy/thriller novels that are a decent read and i think anyone who loves this genre will enjoy this offering. set in london, our hero, a single father becomes an escort to help his family, and later on through a series of tests manages to become a spy for england. lots of sex, romance and spycraft in the end, this story makes it an important read for lovers of the genre.
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  12. The suspect, whose true name is André Gauthier, is now on trial and wanted for the August 12 murders of Wesley Carrion, three Chinese counterintelligence operatives, and a British informant in Montmartre. so after all this time, greg's final mission circles back to the beginning of this story. this is really masterfully done how you've managed to tie it to the start. like bravo. this really feels like a spy novel. Henry Schneider, the suspect's British-born spouse, and Gustav, a notorious terrorist linked to several terrorist attacks across Europe, were last seen in the port of Trouveille-Sur-Mer aboard a fishing boat headed for Morocco. French detectives have not yet concluded if the husband was involved in Wesley Carrion's death. In the meantime, the accused suspect and well-known terrorist had Moroccan port officials on high alert. so im assuming greg is Henry and Gustav is who??? you really got me thinking about this. so the prologue of this story is actually the end of this series. im hooked. and the prologue to book 2, i want more! like I want to read it now. and greg's secret...i was not expecting that. so that's why he left the police force and why he acted like he has ptsd because he has ptsd and his murderous alter ego came to be after his assault. this story is really well done.i salute you for this and i can't wait for book 2. please don't stop writing. you have a gift for storytelling.
  13. i don't want this story to end. there's so many unanswered things that hasn't been answered.
  14. i'm wondering why this agency wants him. Greg’s really gone through a lot of shit and now they put him through the ringer with this. i thought Greg would rape the old man.i was squirming as I was reading it and i was like nooo don't do it greg! there's always a way. now it made sense why he seemed to have PTSD. for rape victims like him, a year of therapy isn't enough. I feel like he needed more time with a therapist i think to sort through his trauma.
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    EPISODE 12: KITSCH

    i forgot to ask, the people behind this series of tests, are they tied to nathan? is nathan the head boss for some reason? you don't have to answer. i'm just airing it out in the open. he he
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    EPISODE 12: KITSCH

    But this could be my chance to say time-out; my hold-on-a-second-there buddy; stop the recurring nightmares that will haunt me; this could be my Vietnam. this made me laugh so much, his vietnam.and baron hensley is just ridiculous that I love how you painted him. and the scene, greg slapping his butt is just hilarious. with greg thinking of nathan like that, really makes you think how they're so meant to be. wishful thinking here.
  17. His face was turning red, bloody red, unrecognisable from all the murderous jabbing and trashing my fists had brought on to his heel, and I felt the plumpness of his swollen eye with my fingertips. Why did they have to awaken this side of me? Did they want to die? I certainly would want to kill them now. ok. im really worried for greg cause he sounds like he has ptsd.he was nearly about to kill a man and he still wants to kill more? this scene right here made me so uncomfortable. coming from greg being that nice dad and son so this, it really shows exceptional writing on the author's part. and that rape scene.....what the heck. that really made my blood curdle.
  18. so is there going to be a 6'6 ginger burly bear in this story?i mean, greg has taste. christian seems to be an adorable man based on his description. also what's going to happen to greg? come on spit it out
  19. so much to unpack here. firstly that was so hot.i never knew i'd be so tuned in to two men kissing. secondly, nathan's really tall. so if nate's 6'7, how tall is greg?lasly, so with nathan coming into greg's life...came with the betrayal of a friend, the death of a loved one, and dastardly revenge for a heart torn asunder? is this going to be addressed here? is nathan a bringer of bad karma for greg or not? ha ha.
  20. my bad. i thought brady had no way to contact his father. i forgot the boy's a genius.
  21. he had missed calls?letme read it again. ha ha
  22. ok, but why was brady left alone with his grandfather? that seems weird to a leave a child unattended.
  23. "Yes," said Nathan, "I am his boyfriend, Nathan. And we’re happy. We have intercourse every chance we get." this made me chuckle.i nearly spat.my coffee. ha ha
  24. right out the bat... Despite the partly cloudy skies, the afternoon sun that irradiated the jumbled outdoor crowd of chic bohemian lifers sitting in the alfresco area was an allusion to Renoir's Luncheon at the Boating Party. Incongruously hammering with sounds whittling from a distance by nearby scaffolders and picking off plates of charcuterie, to a cat caterwauling harmoniously from a tree climbing through a narrow wooden gangway onto an open window with an old record player humming the tune of Pavarotti’s Nessun Dorma—this was a scrappy, toffee-nosed contradiction of a charming London I had never seen. For this area was a leafy enclave for the wealthy. The perfect destination to observe the grazing habitat of the rich was also the consummate place for posh pricks to convene. you really have a way with words.the wordplay is excellent. also, what happened to his mother?theres so many questions about jessica and why he really quit with the police force. and their banter and chemistry is just through the roofs.
  25. thanks for answering. i find it interesting where you draw your characters from.
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