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My “wow” reaction goes multiple ways 1) Wow, Luke is so adorable when drunk. I’m glad Jackson took good care of him while he was hammered. He’s gonna have a nasty hangover though. 2) Wow, Cindy really is a word that I wouldn’t dare use in the presence of women. Both start with c tho… heh… 3) The counselor was really pushy about the Gay/Straight alliance thing. He said no and has his legitimate reasons to not lead that club. Mainly around protecting Luke.
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Definitely don’t blame everyone for falling asleep in school after pulling an all nighter. I’d be brain dead too in that situation. And probably wouldn’t have gone to swim practice (if I was Jack) and told Tony I was sick haha. Definitely worth it though to have such a fun prank and getting laid in the back of a car afterwards.
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What a fun senior prank! XD At least Connor was able to get the police on board so it’s all legal lol.
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No Jack don’t run away from your emotions/feelings/problems. It doesn’t help anything. :’( it is the instinct for guys to do that though. XD
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Luke went a bit cold the previous chapter likely to protect himself from being caught by his mom who is now an ELA teacher at the public high school. Jack freaked out a bit and it messed with his swimming. The boys also had their first time together so that was nice.
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Luke is getting a little more mischievous I see xD. Snowy nights also make for a very romantic atmosphere. And a very nice necklace he gave to Jack. A bit surprised about Jack’s mom being pregnant. But I am glad Jack will have a baby brother or sister soon. Might be a sudden shift though since he’s been an only child for 18 years.
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This time it was Luke who went too far following Jackson to the swimming center and jumping into a pool he probably knew he wasn’t supposed to get into. Not gonna blane Toby for outing the boys because he was drunk but Ally being upset about it seems selfish. After Jackson and Ally broke up, she went straight into a relationship with that Bailey guy so she shouldn’t be mad at Jackson for getting into a relationship with Luke… And I hope she keeps quiet about it for Luke’s sake…
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Cutting off Luke from the world under house arrest is not doing him any good, Cindy. Let him go back to Public School where he has opportunities to socialize, make friends, and get involved with extracurricular activities. Also, no cell phone for him? If Cindy did get him a phone she would have a way to track him with the GPS (not that I would support that of course but I’m surprised she didn’t do it for that reason)
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Jackson REALLY got Luke out of his shell this time. Luke did really well on the horse for his first time. I’m a bit surprised they went to gallop speed for first time riders. Luke and Jackson’s relationship is coming along well though and they had a fun time on their first date
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Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
RichardWrites commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
Luke is so cute sneaking out like that xD And kudos to Jackson for taking swimming seriously. I think he’s doing well at improving but I’m no expert I barely know how to swim myself. Also, speaking from experience, I’m glad Jackson is being patient about him and Luke coming out. A past boyfriend of mine didn’t understand that and was being pushy about it with me. He came from a more accepting progressive background and I guess he didn’t understand that other people have homophobic families who wouldn’t be into that. -
“Toby and Derek told me you needed help with your wood,” hehehe! 😂 i am glad Luke and Jack finally could discuss things about their feelings for each other. Luke is still scared of his sexual orientation but hopefully that becomes more comfortable for him.
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I sympathize with Luke here. He’s scared of his sexuality. As a teen a while back, I started having feelings for guys in my middle/high school and it scared me because in church they’ve always said it’s sinful. I’d assume Luke’s church and parents have a similar mindset.
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A very quick turnaround for Luke! He quickly forgave Jack and revealed his feelings for the rebellious bad boy.
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Luke seems to be enjoying the taste of freedom that Jack is able to provide. The church kid is learning a bit of rebellion. XD
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Jack and Luke have a fun dynamic between them. Maybe Jack can help Luke have a little more fun and Luke can help Jack stay on the straight and narrow
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Started reading this. I get a good idea of who Jackson is: a spoiled rich kid who can get away with a lot worse than most teens can. Hopefully he matures and tries to stay out of trouble
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I am glad Kalum and Jasper can get the healing they need. And I’m glad Kalum seems happy now to choose his own path after being tormented by Jasper and Simon. And his friends are great. I had mixed feelings about how unaware they were but I’m glad they know everything now and can support Kalum.
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Oh yes finally Jasper admitted to his crimes. ^.^
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Omg…. 😭🤭😳🤬😢 So Kalum is actually Simon and Jasper is hell bent on punishing him for [inappropriately harassing] the real Kalum who is dead. I assume the reason he doesn’t know is maybe amnesia from his fall down the stairs. I’m thinking the falling down the stairs wasn’t an accident and maybe Jasper’s doing.
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Kalum and Jasper need to switch places again. Kalum can go free (and probably get some therapy to deal with all this trauma the poor kid has now) and Jasper can get locked up behind bars where he belongs.
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Boyfriends for Christmas
RichardWrites commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Boyfriends for Christmas
What a nice wholesome story.- 17 comments
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Omg Kalum why did you leave the library?! Poor boy is so brainwashed into being Jasper’s slave… 😭
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Hopefully Jasper gets stopped before the school s#óøting he plans to pin on Kalum…. Also, I am concerned about the other friends in the group. They seem absolutely oblivious to what is going on. They aren’t even slightly suspicious of Kalum and Robert’s injuries that only seemed to happen when with Jasper. They need to wake up too.
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Jasper needs to be locked away in jail.
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They’re actually triplets and the 3rd one Simon died. i wonder why the staff of the home seem to want to hide it from Kalum…
