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    Plot is getting interesting, yes. Aedan getting a little more experimental with his orientation and giving Jake that 14th birthday present. Jake is supportive of his best friend coming out. I guess I didn’t think of Aedan getting grief at school over his dad going to jail. Might be something that happens between scenes or maybe his classmates know that he is a different person than his dad. Thankfully that Vincent guy from flag football isn’t a basketball player.
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    May 31 2019 I was cleaning out my locker, which was next to Toby’s, in the main hallway of the high school. I kept my sports stuff in the gym lockers for summer training stuff. Cody came up from behind and patted my back. “Hey,” Cody smiled. I turned around and kissed Cody. “You finished cleaning your locker?” I asked. “Yuh huh,” Cody nodded. The blond teen was wearing a purple tank top and white shorts. I had on a grey tank top and some black shorts. I was relieved school was
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    Oct 6 2017 It was a Friday at the end of a long week at school. Jake and I were in the huge backyard of the house playing basketball on the court. Fall had arrived and many of the trees were vibrant shades of yellow and orange, except the pine trees. The large yard also had a big trampoline, a pool (covered for the colder months), a patio, and a large open grassy area. The sun was almost setting and it was almost dinner time, so we grabbed the basketball and began walking back to the house
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    This week's chapter for this story is actually going up Thursday (12/4) instead of today (Wednesday is the usual chapter update day for this story). Had selected the wrong date on accident when uploading the chapter, and I am unable to shift that date backwards, only forwards. Sorry for the delay, but it is only a day. See you tomorrow.
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    Chapter 31

    RichardWrites commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 31

    Interesting ending. A bit bold of a move there on Razi’s backstory given the current issues ongoing between Israel and Palestine and the current illegal immigration issues. Glad Killian didn’t get into a near death situation like the other times. He was in danger but ended up with just some cuts in the face. Glad to see the Pepper Spray worked; it probably saved Killian & Micah’s lives.
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    Chapter 30

    RichardWrites commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 30

    Our little friend Razi returns to the plot. Definitely time to rescue Tad. He needs somewhere safe ASAP. I’m no cop or investigator, but I feel like Jake’s mentioning of Razi as a possible suspect in the chain of murders at least warrants some kind of visit from the DC police. Hopefully, Razi isn’t doing anything too terrible to Micah, but based on what I have heard, Micah’s in danger. Also, yes, Killian’s reckless vigilante actions are quite dumb, illegal, and immature, but it certainly makes for a good story, and he gets the cases solved. Hopefully with more training as Novak’s apprentice, he can learn how to deal with these things in a more appropriate manner.
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    Chapter 1

    RichardWrites commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I’m glad Rob and Ivan get to be together. Nice one-shot story.
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    Oliver's mom is displeased with the fact that one of her two sons is gay and especially that he was skipping school with his boyfriend. Definitely not acceptable to use the term, but explaining her point of view. Who knows how she would react if she found out Oliver and Cody gave each other BJs at the lakeside beach that morning!? XD
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    Aedan is in a bit of a tough time in his life. His parents, as abusive as his dad is, are divorced, and he isn't taking it well. Seth will be in trouble offscreen for his action. Aedan got in trouble for his violent outburts when he should have kept his cool and reported Seth's verbal bullying without shoving him into a locker. Jake is upset with Aedan over this behavior (and leaving him behind to deal with the aftermath). This was one of the chapters that changed a bit from the original version with the added scenes about him fighting Seth and running away. So. hopefully that was worth the change for you readers.
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    May 10 2019 “Oliver, get up, you’re gonna be late!” Mom entered my room. She was surprised to see Cody in bed with me. He had been over yesterday to help me with trig homework and I invited him to spend the night. “Mhhh...” I mumbled groggily as I sat up and rubbed the sleep out of my eyes. “What time is it?” “It’s 7:45. School starts in 15 minutes,” she crossed her arms. “Also, Cody, what are you doing here? Oliver, I’ve told you the rules. He can’t be in your room with you.”
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    Chapter 29

    RichardWrites commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 29

    Well, at least that villain Fenton Black is dead now…. I wonder who murdered the people in the house… There’s still a chance it could have been Jake depending on the gun he had on him. And I guess we’ll find out who Fenton hired to kill Paul. I don’t think the two sets of murders were by the same person.
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    August 27 2017 After I finished unpacking all my clothes in my new closet in a spare room at Jake’s house, I heard a knock. “Come in!” I called before sitting on the bed. Steven Grant, Jake’s dad, entered the room. “Hi, sir. Thanks so much for lettin’ us live here for a bit…” “I trust you are settling in okay?” He asked in his British accent. “Yessir,” I nodded. He looked around for a moment. The walls in here were a navy blue, which contrasted with my grey and red bedding.
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    Yup, some people haven’t gotten the memo yet about treating people well. And yes, Oliver was a little slow, but he now knows about Logan’s feelings for him. Cody hopefully was able to figure it out at some point, but he didn’t let it bother him.
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    Nina is Aedan's girlfriend, so I guess he feels the need to tell her more than Jake. He's also an irrational 13 and a half year old so logic isn't always there XD Yeah abuse can often happen without others noticing. Aedan thankfully followed Jake's advice and told his mom so that has helped reduce the abuse. The coach may not have seen it happen to Aedan but Aedan definitely did the same thing back to Vincent, so neither of the boys are innocent there. Aedan's name means "little fire" so it's a bit fitting with how reactive/hotheaded he can be sometimes. But, yeah, teachers/coaches/etc aren't always the most observant to everything going on with troublemakers/roughhousing etc.
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    Chapter 24

    RichardWrites commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Joel has GUTS…. Brave as hell to pull off something so stupid wearing the Tempton clothes and doing the Tiger yell in the cafeteria. He was asking for it with those football jocks. Jax definitely started it, but Joel and Roy definitely antagonized it. Got a bit of a laugh out of it, but yeah they’re in trouble with that principal. He and Roy are getting closer as friends though, which I like to see. Other people mentioned a “New Joel” and yeah he kinda flipped a switch overnight it seems. He went from reserved to bold at his new school. Maybe tomorrow he’ll say screw it and come out as gay.
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    April 21 2019 Cody walked up to me in the front yard of the Divine Conception Catholic Church a couple miles south of Jacksonville. “I’m glad you could make it,” I lightly pecked my boyfriend on the cheek, earning a rude glare from an elderly couple walking by. “And you look great,” I admired my boyfriend’s attire of khaki slacks and a short sleeve grey plaid shirt. I had on jeans and a bright pink buttoned up shirt with short sleeves. “Well, it certainly took some convincing. My mom
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    July 5 2017 I woke up to more sunlight streaming into the window. It was 9:30 AM. It was nice to sleep in, cause I needed it from being sick. I stretched my arms and stood up. I stuffed my dirty clothes bag into my duffle bag. Jake was still asleep, snoring and sprawled across his bed, sleeping on his stomach. My stomach growled. It had been a while since I last ate, so I made my way to the kitchen where breakfast was ready. “Morning, Aedan,” Mrs. Grant greeted me. “Jake’s still aslee
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    Chapter 24

    RichardWrites commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 24

    I’m no psychologist, but it seems like Jake has survivor’s guilt. It also seems like this escort business isn’t as clean as Micah assumed when he was an employee there. Fenton Black… erm… Neal… whatever his name is… is some kind of predator. He never met his escorts, but he knows everything about them and has pictures of them, and I don’t like what that implies. Hopefully Novak is on Fenton’s good side, so Killian can catch a break or he might be targeted, too.
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    Black olives are my second favorite pizza topping (after mushrooms) lol. Pineapple is definitely a weird topping though. Toby definitely knows more than Oliver and Cody about what's going on with Logan. Logan's been quite hostile to Oliver and just distant and cold to Cody.
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    Chapter 23

    RichardWrites commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Neal has some kind of alter ego as “Fenton Black”. I wonder how many different aliases he has.
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    April 6th 2019 “Happy birthday, Oliver,” Cody hugged me outside of my house. Toby and I had a couple friends over for our 17th birthday, and they’d be spending the night. Basically, it was just Logan and Cody who were hanging out for the night. Cody was wearing a navy blue t-shirt and black sweatpants. I had jeans and a green t-shirt on with my shaggy dark hair gelled. Toby and I had recently showered after playing a baseball game earlier. We had made the JV baseball team last month before
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    Chapter 22

    RichardWrites commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I learned a valuable lesson to not begin posting stories until I conclude them in my word document(s). I might need to make minor changes (spellibg etc) as I post things, but no major edits. Or else I just keep changing plot points in my brain and then I feel the need to retcon everything else lol. So now stories I post will be pretty complete and set in stone.
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    Jake made a promise to not tell anyone. Aedan is his only friend, so he’ll be keeping that promise. Jake wants Aedan to talk to his mom about it though. The boys go back home in the next chapter, so he won’t be around Jake’s parents as much for them to be noticing things, if they don’t know already.
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    Chapter 21

    RichardWrites commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Noah certainly doesn’t take no for an answer. He knows Killian is taken yet he flirts with him and tries to kiss him. Killian played into it too by dancing with him and flirting back. Hopefully, Micah doesn’t come to check out the party if he gets off work a little sooner than expected… Kane is quite the charmer lol! Kane, Killian, and Noah are all super brave going in those costumes. I would never have the confidence going out in public wearing anything skimpy or suggestive. 😳
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    July 3 2017 I woke up late in the morning feeling groggy. My nose was stuffy and I felt a little shaky. I must have gotten a cold from being in the chilly water last night. My stomach growled, however. This cold clearly wasn’t ruining my appetite. I got dressed while Jake continued sleeping. I was eating some oatmeal for breakfast when I heard a knock at the front door. “I’ll get it,” I announced. Jake’s parents seemed to be busy with other stuff. “Aedan?” Katie asked as I open
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