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Chapter 54 - Epic-log Part One
RichardWrites commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 54 - Epic-log Part One
Super happy Luke had the courage to come out to his mother. She knows the truth and can now choose to either support him like she should or risk developing an estranged relationship with Luke. Jackson had a panic attack over the confrontation between Cindy and Luke. Panic attacks are super scary. I had them before around his age 18 to 19. I’m glad be got calmed down and didn’t pass out. -
Someone correct me if I’m wrong but this might be the first time Jackson referred to Luke as his boyfriend when talking to someone else. Even with his parents and friend group I don’t think he used the term lol. Anyways, Luke being a little rebel and getting a tattoo. And Oliver seems nice. I hope Jackson continues that friendship especially if they end up swimming together at Georgia.
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I feel bad for Matt tummy bugs are no fun, especially during an important event. At least Aiden cares about his little bro even if no one else. The meet isn’t over for Jackson though hopefully he does well and maintains the scholarship.
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The principal is surprised Jackson didn’t tell him about Georgia, but it’s on a Monday morning and Jackson just found out himself over the weekend just before prom. Jackson was being a jerk about the signing though. Felt like a regression back to cocky chapter 1 Jackson The school should be involved because Rick the coach was training him, and also definitely Tony’s swimming center as well for being a part in getting him a scholarship to a major school.
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Wow, the boys got pretty busy in that attric in the trading post xD. Luke has quite a few secret hideaways he’s shown to Jackson. This one seems to be the most important to him because it’s where he had to come to terms with being gay, which is a hard thing to do for religious people. Unfortunately, Luke didn’t have the grades to get into Georgia, but he’ll be going to school with Derek and Toby nearby so he’ll have friends there. I was worried Luke’s parents might not let him go to college (or have him go to a religious private college at least).
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Proms are a lot of fun. Mine was a little more than a few years ago now at this point, if I’m going to age myself lol. I went with my friends and had a good time. Thankfully no drama or Cindzilla situations. I’m glad Luke was able to stand up to her. She went way out of line ruining Olivia’s dress.
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Wow this is probably the longest chapter I have ever seen xD Some thoughts: 1) Congrats to the swim team everyone got 1st or 2nd in their events at the swim meet! 2) Jackson’s swimming has improved a lot in the handful of months he’s been working with Emily and Tony. 3) Cindy is rude enough to confront Jackson in the middle of a swim meet but she at least wants him to do well so I guess her rudeness has boundaries xD 4) Tony vs Cindy would be one hell of a confrontation! He’s probably one of the few who can put her in her place lol
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I am a bit late responding to this, but a lot of biblical conservative Christians are in major disagreement with what is taught in public schools and universities. Especially around science (geological history, evolution, climate change) and history since this all disputes their biblical ideology that the Earth is 6 thousand years old and that god created all living things instead of life evolving over time. And they don’t want their children being taught that, hence why some extremist Christians send their kids to religious private schools or homeschool. As for this chapter, I am glad Luke and Jackson are getting away for a date. Things seem to overall be stressful for them in day to day life so a little getaway will be good for them.
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Just when his behavior is in a long good streak, bam, he starts a food fight….. not your smartest play, Jackson… at least Luke isn’t grounded anymore.
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My “wow” reaction goes multiple ways 1) Wow, Luke is so adorable when drunk. I’m glad Jackson took good care of him while he was hammered. He’s gonna have a nasty hangover though. 2) Wow, Cindy really is a word that I wouldn’t dare use in the presence of women. Both start with c tho… heh… 3) The counselor was really pushy about the Gay/Straight alliance thing. He said no and has his legitimate reasons to not lead that club. Mainly around protecting Luke.
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Definitely don’t blame everyone for falling asleep in school after pulling an all nighter. I’d be brain dead too in that situation. And probably wouldn’t have gone to swim practice (if I was Jack) and told Tony I was sick haha. Definitely worth it though to have such a fun prank and getting laid in the back of a car afterwards.
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What a fun senior prank! XD At least Connor was able to get the police on board so it’s all legal lol.
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No Jack don’t run away from your emotions/feelings/problems. It doesn’t help anything. :’( it is the instinct for guys to do that though. XD
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Luke went a bit cold the previous chapter likely to protect himself from being caught by his mom who is now an ELA teacher at the public high school. Jack freaked out a bit and it messed with his swimming. The boys also had their first time together so that was nice.
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Luke is getting a little more mischievous I see xD. Snowy nights also make for a very romantic atmosphere. And a very nice necklace he gave to Jack. A bit surprised about Jack’s mom being pregnant. But I am glad Jack will have a baby brother or sister soon. Might be a sudden shift though since he’s been an only child for 18 years.
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This time it was Luke who went too far following Jackson to the swimming center and jumping into a pool he probably knew he wasn’t supposed to get into. Not gonna blane Toby for outing the boys because he was drunk but Ally being upset about it seems selfish. After Jackson and Ally broke up, she went straight into a relationship with that Bailey guy so she shouldn’t be mad at Jackson for getting into a relationship with Luke… And I hope she keeps quiet about it for Luke’s sake…
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Cutting off Luke from the world under house arrest is not doing him any good, Cindy. Let him go back to Public School where he has opportunities to socialize, make friends, and get involved with extracurricular activities. Also, no cell phone for him? If Cindy did get him a phone she would have a way to track him with the GPS (not that I would support that of course but I’m surprised she didn’t do it for that reason)
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Jackson REALLY got Luke out of his shell this time. Luke did really well on the horse for his first time. I’m a bit surprised they went to gallop speed for first time riders. Luke and Jackson’s relationship is coming along well though and they had a fun time on their first date
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Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
RichardWrites commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Begins Part 2
Luke is so cute sneaking out like that xD And kudos to Jackson for taking swimming seriously. I think he’s doing well at improving but I’m no expert I barely know how to swim myself. Also, speaking from experience, I’m glad Jackson is being patient about him and Luke coming out. A past boyfriend of mine didn’t understand that and was being pushy about it with me. He came from a more accepting progressive background and I guess he didn’t understand that other people have homophobic families who wouldn’t be into that. -
“Toby and Derek told me you needed help with your wood,” hehehe! 😂 i am glad Luke and Jack finally could discuss things about their feelings for each other. Luke is still scared of his sexual orientation but hopefully that becomes more comfortable for him.
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I sympathize with Luke here. He’s scared of his sexuality. As a teen a while back, I started having feelings for guys in my middle/high school and it scared me because in church they’ve always said it’s sinful. I’d assume Luke’s church and parents have a similar mindset.
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A very quick turnaround for Luke! He quickly forgave Jack and revealed his feelings for the rebellious bad boy.
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Luke seems to be enjoying the taste of freedom that Jack is able to provide. The church kid is learning a bit of rebellion. XD
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Jack and Luke have a fun dynamic between them. Maybe Jack can help Luke have a little more fun and Luke can help Jack stay on the straight and narrow
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Started reading this. I get a good idea of who Jackson is: a spoiled rich kid who can get away with a lot worse than most teens can. Hopefully he matures and tries to stay out of trouble
