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Lee Wilson

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  1. Sunday October 16 We'll mind-meld with Rod for this chapter. My mom comes to visit the next day, but I'm ready to be discharged. She calls the school and speaks with the Dean. Fortunately, he has decided that circumstances drove me to make my decision. I may come back to school but will be on probation for the rest of the school year. Mom repeats this to me. I've already resolved to get my act together; this is just one more incentive for me. The Dean wishes to meet with me and my pare
  2. I guess that makes sense. Awful lot of of extra effort, but you know your process best. I have no problem sharing the blame.
  3. Another great chapter. Guess I missed a couple typos. Probably didn’t read through this one twice. It’s so hard to comment on the early chapters when you know what’s coming. But editing for Jason was enjoyable, so I’ll suffer with adding lame comments 😇
  4. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 12

    Apparently so, or @Ronyx did. Great chapter by the way. Who is going to win the Alex sweepstakes? Will Neil get the silver medal with Gerry? Did Lucas really run away? Does Owen even know Neil is staying with his dad temporarily? Looking forward to the answers to these and more.
  5. No problem. I know I can’t please everyone. Thanks for the time you did give it.
  6. Someone needs to continue coming back for new chapters to find out, doesn't he?
  7. I actually used something like this in a previous story:
  8. My pleasure. And yes. I think you will reach the high benchmark.
  9. It's going to be real weird commenting on this story, knowing the details. I promise to try my damnedest to avoid any spoilers. First time I ever edited. Tyler definitely has some thinking to do.
  10. Wouldn't anybody?
  11. Hang on to your hats, folks. You're in for a hell of a ride. I won't spoil anything, but I will say this is one of the best stories I've ever read.
  12. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Better than infected, I suppose.
  13. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Wow. Excellent point about Rod not knowing DM was his savior. Gotta see about fitting that in somewhere.
  14. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    I’ll drink to that. Oh, wait… Not really touched on again. Aunt Carmela lives in south Georgia, town undisclosed. Same lawyer won’t be reasonable. We’ll just assume they took full advantage. He has ongoing sessions with Dr. Paulson. Again, not touched on, but we’ll wait and see how things turn out for him. Hmmm. Maybe I need to change a chapter. OK, maybe not.
  15. Thanks, much. I’m happy you’re enjoying it.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Good plan. Yep, more to come.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    I’m sure the pay is better.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 58 S2

    Oh, it was definitely closed. And it didn't return as part of Mountain Creek.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Gee, I wonder if Mr. Quincy and Uncle Asshole are related. I don't believe I ever gave the asshole a last name.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 58 S2

    I grew up in New Jersey. There was a place called Action Park that had an Alpine Slide, among other rides, including water attractions. I don't recall it having two parallel tracks though. I'm pretty sure there was one water attraction with identical tubes next to each other. I was almost expecting another injury, but apparently their Alpine Slide was better made than Action Park's, which actually caused one death and numerous injuries.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 58 S2

    A disaster movie, or a disaster of a movie?
  22. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Rod gave the other kid $50. $20 for himself, and the other $30 to buy the booze. As far as sucking the Dean off, that was before Sr got kicked to the curb. Rod was still afraid of the ramifications from dad if he was kicked out of school. Also, a little bit tongue in cheek. Like saying I’ll do anything to avoid this bad thing, without really meaning “anything.”
  23. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Pretend I copied and pasted the above response here.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Rod's Crisis

    Yes, Mrs. Quincy is somewhat of a hero. Apparently, she had enough of Rod Sr’s shenanigans and say buh-bye loser. Thanksgiving will be fun.
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