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Lee Wilson

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  1. Sounds like I did a pretty good job wrapping up this aspect of the story. I don't think I mention Sam and a therapist, but like you said, we can assume it happens off screen.
  2. True in both cases.
  3. At least it was just a fictional life.
  4. Happy is my middle name. OK, not really.
  5. No carry over attitude expected.
  6. I don’t think so. Just a few: Sam: Fuck you, asshole! Bobby: Drop dead, you butthead! Sam: Can we go now?
  7. Better late than never. Although I like writing court scenes, I hadn’t done much of that when this was first written. I knew he’d be going away for a long time regardless, so the plea agreement made sense. Seth got in well and his parents came around quickly.
  8. Definitely a kind of mixed emotions chapter.
  9. True. He wasn't a very good person, but he was far from the worst. At least he wasn't squashed by a semi trailer 🙂
  10. Steven I'm thinking that after dad has his hearing with the feds, he might get moved to a federal facility, who knows where. Since he's still reasonably local, if I want to go confront him, now is the time. This weekend I'll take a trip to the jail to visit him. The drive to Forest State Penitentiary isn't a short one, almost 90 minutes, but this is a one-time deal so I can handle it. Saturday rolls around and I visit the prison. After going through what seems like 75 levels of securit
  11. Things definitely went well for the good guys in this chapter, and the apparently bad guys that aren't really bad. Leon steps up quite a bit in upcoming chapters before he takes a back seat for a while. I'd said it before; Leon is a good guy.
  12. Thanks. I hadn’t really thought of it that way, but you’re right.
  13. I was writing and posting three longish stories once. I had to be real careful proofreading to not mix up names. Now the only time I’ll post 2 at a time is if one is a single chapter, like for an event.
  14. I can see one exception. You’re meeting a group at a seafood restaurant and you have a seafood allergy. Bringing in drinks… yeah, I got nothing.
  15. I did make Art’s dads pretty nice. Yes, Seth has been sheltered.
  16. I had sleepovers and sleepouts, but the messing around never happened. Otherwise, similar childhoods.
  17. OK, quick wit there Jason.
  18. No argument here.
  19. I wish I had some of those days….
  20. OK, after reading that, somebody please tell me they didn’t ask themselves, “How does he know what rabbit ass tastes like?” Or am I the only really sick-o here?
  21. FYI, chapter 17 was the last part of the original posting. 18-20 were a sequel, but I combined them here. So, 4 to go.
  22. Yep, this is a good bunch.
  23. All true. I’d say it all went pretty well.
  24. I’m not even going to ask what you might want the dirty underwear for! He was such a drunk, I can believe that.
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