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Lee Wilson

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  1. I use a couple others in 10, so I’ll squeeze her in for 11.
  2. I never said the trials would be nice.
  3. Hmmm. Didn’t think I’ve said yet what Carl’s dad does. But it’s not a cop. That’s Kurtis. Paul’s dad is a staff sergeant, but also not a cop. You’ll have to wait 2 chapters to find out what Carl’s dad does.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Merry Christmas

    Again, thanks for the praise.
  5. I’m glad you enjoyed seeing things from his perspective. We might see that again in a later chapter.
  6. Lee Wilson

    Going Home

    Thanks. Sometimes I wonder where all this comes from. I was never very creative earlier in life.
  7. I’m glad you feel that way.
  8. I’m glad you liked it.
  9. New tradition requested.
  10. So do I. From the kids’ perspectives, it’s simply a size domination thing. The adults, we’ll see.
  11. Mine was two years older than me, a small skinny kid. But he never did anything. Our father would have let him have it.
  12. Fire would probably be the way to go. Maybe he will in the epilogue. The last question, intimidation.
  13. I love that you want more. I had a couple down days this past week, but chapter 10 is one more read through before my editor sees it.
  14. But which one will get it worse in the end? Hmmmm.
  15. Always possible, but I foresee that peer pressure my play a bigger role in Carl’s “punishment.”
  16. Right there with you.
  17. Kurtis might surprise you.
  18. Ground, not floor, but yes.
  19. Takedown. Interesting term to use. Maybe even prescient.
  20. I love how you not only picked up the Meat Loaf reference, but you also hit the Jim Steinman connection. He wrote all of those songs. I amaze myself when they keep going on past how many chapters I initially thought. Since the hazing takes up part of the next chapter as well, 12 is likely, if not more. 5 others. Some of the rest have become more clingy. I think they know something happened to her.
  21. I’ll answer more later. Freddie Boom Boom Cannon, Rick Davies of Supertramp, John Lodge of the Moody Blues,
  22. He does. I think there may be parental pressure from Mr. Osbourne.
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