Hmmm. Didn’t think I’ve said yet what Carl’s dad does. But it’s not a cop. That’s Kurtis. Paul’s dad is a staff sergeant, but also not a cop. You’ll have to wait 2 chapters to find out what Carl’s dad does.
I love how you not only picked up the Meat Loaf reference, but you also hit the Jim Steinman connection. He wrote all of those songs.
I amaze myself when they keep going on past how many chapters I initially thought. Since the hazing takes up part of the next chapter as well, 12 is likely, if not more.
5 others. Some of the rest have become more clingy. I think they know something happened to her.