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Lee Wilson

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  1. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Maybe longer than you think, I'm not making a lot of progress on chapter 26, but then the hearings have all been written.
  2. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Very true.
  3. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    I left Sandy out of the “crawling up their asses” comment because I suspected she would have enjoyed it too much!
  4. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    I suppose we'll have to wait and see what this crazy author has in mind!
  5. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Maybe. If it's a girl, though, I can imagine the tight reins they would put on her after failing so badly with Sandy.
  6. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Definitely not. Don is new to the picture but quickly saw Sandy's faults. Even though he fell prey to her mouth, and would pay for it, he is making sure that she does too.
  7. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Potentially only sperm and egg donors.
  8. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Nope, this is like the Ray Liotta movie, 'No Escape.'
  9. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    She's on the wait list until the newest movie makes a billion. Pennies.
  10. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    It may even get deeper.
  11. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Hmmm, making them crawl into Mel's and Don's asses?
  12. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    Crossing my fingers that torture won't be necessary!
  13. Lee Wilson

    In Deep Doo-doo

    I thought the in-fighting among them would be a nice touch.
  14. Mr. and Mrs. Dixon showed up at the hospital and asked about their son. They were shown to the room in the ER he had been taken to and were surprised to see a police officer sitting outside the room. The officer was actually between two rooms, one of which Melton was lying in. The other was Don's. "Excuse me. I have to ask who you are." Mr. Dixon responded, "We're his parents, Matthew and Audrey Dixon." "Thank you. Before you enter, I am required to inform you that your son is pen
  15. An awesome story. A simple review. A Life Worth Living is A Story Worth Reading.
  16. This is so true for many of us, I believe. Most of my ideas come to me lying in bed, trying to fall asleep. Keep doing it. You’ve spun a great yarn with this one, I’m sure you’ve got more in you. Favorite part? Probably all the stressful places where aspects of Jonah’s future were in doubt, and the way you got him through in very believable ways. Okay, maybe Victor got off too easily. But that’s me. I treat my antagonists like shit. Meraviglioso! (wonderful!)
  17. Not going to try to speak for everybody, but it's not unusual to "hate" the characters in a story but still like the story. How many people cheer on Jason Voorhees, Michael Myers, or Freddy Kruger? If one writes characters that are so far from what people expect, they're going to want to tear them apart. I've written a number of disdainful characters. I love seeing that my villains are hated. Maybe Dylan isn't a villain, per se, but the disparity in the two personalities "seems" to make Dylan the bad guy.
  18. I guess on the bright side, at least Dylan isn't going to fuck Troy dry this time. Maybe we have a kinder, gentler Dylan. Or not.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 19

    As good a candidate as any.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 19

    Only one word is needed to describe this chapter. WOW!
  21. Glad you think so. Fun is good.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 18

    Hopefuly soon. The last two installments were 2 weeks apart, today is 2 weeks again. 🤞
  23. Was definitely planning for adoption as the decision. Unfortunately, I don't believe sterilization would be an option in this country. Her charges are discussed in the next chapter, so it won't be a long wait to see if I agreed. Thanks. Yes, that would not be a miscarriage of justice.
  24. Inner @weinerdog, that sounds… just so wrong.
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