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It's been a pleasure to read this novel. Again,please...

A very good start...

It's been a pleasure to read this story. You'll fall in love with the boys and their lovers. Inside you'll find life, with danger and pride, with fight and forgive, with misunderstandings and comprehension. And, of course, the pleasure of a story really well written.

Very well written story. It's been a pleasure to read it and to follow the characters through their lives. Thank you Laura, I'm going to your next story...

Ahhhhhh! Love with all the trimmings !

I like Mike very much: he deserves love first. Adrian has few things to put in order and Jared must be careful with Chris. But I love them all...

Mike will meet him again...

Pure sex with some concern and a bit of feeling. Booooom!!!

A very hot start... I'm reading...

...at last! also the family! complications complications...

so many comunicaition problems between them... but love will set them free... and they love each other very much...

LET LOVE BE!

They are in love with each other... scared so much to show their real soul. But they love each other very much. Let's wait...

Funny, funny, but Heatcliff is falling in love with Aidan... ❤️

Pure fun! Since the first sentence! Pure fun! I needed this! A very good start!

I really appreciated the respect and delicacy with which you treated the topic of first love and love at first sight. Two characters looking for each other will certainly have a lot to tell each other. What we all hope for, or have hoped for: experiencing the power of love and its ability to save us from death before death. A really good story, well described and well developed. Thank you. GoodReader

It was pleasant to rediscover the characters from other excellent stories I had previously read. The setting and the dynamics between the various characters describe well the writing style that captures the reader until the end. Thank you for this Christmas full of friendship and love. GoodReader

Great! Going inside the dark of human brain can be a hard trip. Follow the path of your story was easy/hard, but the characters were always coherent and easy to love. I love dogs, I have two, so for me it was a plus have three wonderful fur friends inside the story. Jett and Kyle lucky people: they found real love. I hope the same for all of us... and for dogs of course! Thanks for your story Good Reader

Hi MrsGnomie, this was the last of your novels that I read, so I finished, until your next one. I really appreciate your writing, the way you paint the characters it's unique. I had the sensation to live with them all the moments they share. Relationships are a challenge in the real world, and you write a real world of real people. I can see their faces and hear their voices, I suffer with them and I jump with them. Thank you with all my heart, for all the good time I passed with your lines.

As italian, I don't understand anything about baseball, but characters are soooo funny... so let see what happens...

Nolan is a mess... Jensen is a good kid. Nolan loose his "perfect" life... Jensen is growing. They meet from opposite directions and change directions. Age? Bah! They found a common language... at last. Or, better, at the right moment. Thanks Mrsgnomie

The right conclusion of a perfect story. In the end love will save all of us... Thanks again Mrsgnomie

I had to wait a few days before I started writing these lines. I had never read anything like this before, yet I have always been an avid reader. Beyond the characterization of the characters I really enjoyed the work of their creation and their reality. Jay and Loren are two of us, albeit with different histories, but realistic, real. Mrsgnomie constructed two realities that he wanted to bring together. He combined fate and will: fate brought Jay and Loren together, but their will led them to the ending and the beginning of their lives together. The exploration of both protagonists' lives and the addition of other characters as the story unfolds makes it all three-dimensional. The story leaps off the pages and becomes almost an everyday parallel to your life. The skill with which Mrsgnomie stitches it all together is truly extraordinary. The deep desire of both protagonists to become fathers - albeit with Loren's reticence, albeit increasingly weak - I think engages all readers, gay, straight or whatever. Children are a constant presence in the story, testifying to the couple's desire to leave the future a testament to themselves and their lives. Loren redeems his terrible childhood by building a world of economic and work security around him, into which Jay fits at first with difficulty. Jay comes from an affluent family and testifies to a life of love, affection, and respect. The incontro-scontro between the two - albeit in the slow growth of a deep love - becomes a journey, a return to the beginning of their lives to rebuild new paths of understanding and to establish the foundations of a solid bond. Love in itself is simple. Not simple is cultivating it, protecting it and growing it solid and secure. Jay and Loren teach that we all need to communicate, to be heard and respected, and to be welcomed and loved for who we are. Please read it. Tanks Mrsgnomie

Ahahaahh! Sometimes the best, after reading the chapter, are the comments that make me laugh... Thanks to everyone!

Aido Potato forever!