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Chapter 2 - Road Trip
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@drsawzall I'd like to think that we all can learn from our experiences! -
Chapter 2 - Road Trip
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I'm just not sure if the kids name was ever mentioned. The graphic was one I found online, which I did tweak a little. Jamie had a fling with the kids mother, but they never married. Hope that helps. MP -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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Thank you @Philippe Not having seen it here in Oz I was kind of flying blind when I saw it in the show, so was guessing a little. It was a great scene. I used to love how Beth and Rip would be arguing, or they would be arguing with the other family members and everything would be going to shit, with just John Dutton and Carter sitting there wondering what the fuck was going on. (lol) And of course, Carter always asking for more. The Carter / John Dutton relationship was an interesting one ... the tough rancher, the loud-mouth street kid with attitude. They kind of complimented each other. I also loved the way that Carter was gradually brought into the family, with the parenting instincts of both Rip and Beth gradually emerging..... -
Chapter 2 - Road Trip
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@Summerabbacat oh yes, I know of George Straight . . . he is the undisputed King Country Music in the US of A . . . even revered as a God to some! He also starred in a great country music movie called Pure Country. I could go on, but I won't bore you! lol You'll find that Rip is a man of many surprises. Just when you think you have him figured out, he comes out and does something, or says something, that will surprise you. Just how he reacts if/when Carter steps out for the first time, only time will tell! 😜 I'm getting some extra help with this one, an American friend @Bensiamin who is familiar with the lingo and the region, so between the three of us, hopefully we'll be able to get things close enough to being right! -
Chapter 2 - Road Trip
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A looong, looong time @Ivor Slipper -
-- Chapter Two -- The sun had only just cleared the horizon the next morning, when Rip and his coffee mug stepped outside onto the flagstone verandah along the front of their home, on the new Dutton Ranch. Beth was still in bed, and Carter would be joining him soon, before they began their day; which would be filled with the start of preparations that would be needed before they began their long haul north for the branding. As he settled into his favourite chair, Rip heard the familiar
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Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
@Summerabbacat I can't really do two a week just at the moment --- at least until I have some more chapters in the bank. Next chapter will go live tonight, then for chapter 3 (almost finished) I'm working on it going up Wednesday. That would give 3 chapters every fortnight ... one every 5 days or so. I'll see how that goes for starters ... at least until I have some more up my sleeve. So that'll make it Monday --- Friday --- Wednesday ... rinse and repeat! -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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@Summerabbacat ohhhhh . . . . . harsh!!! LOL -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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Haha ... I remember it well. It was a hit, but I still thought it was shit! What year was it? 80's I think, maybe? There was some 'questi9able' performances through that era! lol -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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Errr ... no, I haven't tried it. Something that you mix with mins, I think, to make beef patties! It's kind of a running gag thought the show! -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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OK, first things first ... you really need to watch the show to truly appreciate Beth!!! She is the toughest, most potty-mouthed, rough-n-tumble princess you will ever come across. Take no shit from ANYONE ... and will kill for family! You have been warned! LOL Next... Jamie ... yes, he is deceased, but the only people who actually knows this are those involved with killing him (it WAS self defence!) and the person who helped clean up the mess. To the rest of the world, Attorney General Jamie Dutton is just "missing" ... apparently consumed by the grief surrounding the assassination of his father ... There, that'll have to do! LOL Rest assured, this story won't plunge into the same murky depths as the original ... but heaven help anyone who lays a finger on Beth's baby boy! 😁 -
Prologue - In the Beginning
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Prologue - In the Beginning
Yes, watched it on Streaming ... and bought the DVD's of the whole series! And some of the spin-off series (so far). Yes, Evelyn was dead before the series started. Lee died right near the beginning of the series. There are lots of "flashbacks" with older dead characters appearing, which fills in the gaps. From memory Evelyn was killed in a horse riding accident and Beth felt guilty about it. There are also flashbacks with current characters (Rip, Beth and Jamie in particular) from when they were kids, largely about events from those times that help shape the current -
Prologue - In the Beginning
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Unless you were a real fan you probably wouldn't have heard too many other CDB songs. 'Still In Saigon' was probably their only other big hit on the pop charts... -
Prologue - In the Beginning
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It wasn't quite as good as the original. Just remembered another one from that era that I loved ... Burt Reynolds in "Stroker Ace" ... a played similar character to his Smokey character, except he was a race car driver who ran moonshine to make some real money. Based on a song of the same name by the Charlie Daniels Band. -
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Every Which Way also spawned a sequel ... Any Which Way You Can ... which I also loved! lol -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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The 'Merican Kayce is pronounced just like Casey -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
And later KC formed a band, called KC and the Sunshine Band and sang about an Afternoon Delight! Edit: Hmmmm ... apparently it was someone else who sang Afternoon Delight! But KC and the Sunshine Band did... -
Prologue - In the Beginning
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@Summerabbacat have to admit I loved all of those movies back in the day ... Smokey and the Bandit, Every Which Way But Loose . . . and even Dukes of Hazard, I'm afraid. Yes, I was a redneck teenager! LOL -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Yes, absolutely! There will be a number of new characters, right across the board. As the journey progresses we'll see a lot of changes and moving around, and confusion and fear, and, I dare say, even a bit of conflict. Stay tuned! And yeah, cool t-shirt! haha -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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Just so long as it's not a trip to the Train Station!!! -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Shit! I'll have to think of something else now!!! -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Well, @Summerabbacat there were a LOT of deaths in the Yellowstone series. A LOT! Some were family members. Some were ranch workers. Most of them were bad guys though . . . REALLY bad guys! One of them was Jamie Dutton (Beth and Kayce's adopted brother ... he got what he deserved though. Trust me! lol) There won't be any of that happening here though, I can assure you. As for Tate setting three places ... yeah, his mom, Monica, died. Sometime between the ending of Yellowstone and the premiere of the follow up series, Marshalls. I haven't watched that one yet, so I don't know what happened. -
Prologue - In the Beginning
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Hmmmmm ..... @Summerabbacat ..... I'll try to keep that in mind. Yes, they will be on a ranch. Yes, there will be a cattle muster and a branding ... but there will also be some tender moments, some exploration and coming of age / awakening and ... stuff ... so I hope all this doesn't scare you off??? 🤞 -
Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
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@DallasCubRob thank you so much!!! ♥️ I know this story won't be everyone's "cup of tea" ... and as an Aussie trying to write an American story, I know it might be a challenge to get it right ... but as I've said, it's an itch I've wanted to scratch, so here goes! Hope you enjoy the ride!!!- 47 comments
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There was a time when the Yellowstone Dutton Ranch seemed as permanent as the mountains that surrounded it. Generations of Duttons had lived and died on that land. They had fought for it, bled for it, and buried their dead beneath its soil. To some, it was a kingdom. To others, a symbol of everything that had been taken from them. But nothing lasts forever. In the end, the land returned to the people whose ancestors had walked it long before the first Dutton ever set foot in Monta
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