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Great chapter. But geez, you said, "We’ll crack on". It's my new boss' favourite saying in our staff meetings! LOL MP
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Great chapter . . . I sense there is a past that will (hopefully) be shared as we step into Harry's future. Looking forward to reading more.
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Thank you @Carl Accolla, and as the story progresses you will see that struggle continue. Apart from settling in a new town and living with people who were, up until quite recently, complete strangers, young Levi has a great deal of stuff to contend with: his teachings, his feelings, his attractions, and of course those annoying hormones that we all had to contend with at that age. I hope you enjoy the ride!
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@weinerdog there was mention made somewhere that when they were cleaning out the old house, he had "pulled his childhood posters off the wall" (or something like that.
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@Summerabbacat and everyone else . . . there will certainly be a lot of soul-searching needed for Levi as he adjusts to life in T'ville. I hope you enjoy where it goes. There will definitely be a few twists and turns along the way!
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Hmmm . . . not one I'm familiar with! Thank you!
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-- Chapter 14 -- ‘Hey, you made good time,’ Luke said, pulling Matt into a quick hug before turning to Levi. ‘How was the drive, mate?’ ‘Long,’ Levi replied, while managing a small smile. ‘But okay . . . if you don’t count his singing!’ ‘Yeah, tell me about it! So, how about we get your gear unpacked and stowed away before it gets too late?’ Luke suggested, then turning to Matt he said, ‘I thought we could drop it all into one of the guest rooms and he can sort out what he wants to
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Turmoil Chapter 2 – London and a helping hand
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 2 – London and a helping hand
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Chapter 1 – Is it a scam?
Mark Ponyboy Peters commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 1 – Is it a scam?
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Off the top of my head, without going back to check, I think Zack was about 16 at the end of AGP, and that was set in 2011. OOTB is set in 2017, so Zack will be about 22-ish now. I can say that they will meet ... but I'm not sure at this stage just how much interaction there might be ... I'm still writing it and haven't got to that point yet! lol
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Friday!!! MP
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There won't be any delays ... the story will just roll on into the next part, with chapter 14 to be posted on the same schedule (Friday). Cheers MP
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Oh yes, "Vinnie's" is pretty big here. I remember when I was in high school we used to spend some time "volunteering" at the local store.
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@Ivor Slipper let's not go jumping to any conclusions!
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@CincyKris ahhh . . . but does he? LOL
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-- Chapter 13 -- They spent the following day continuing to go through the contents of the house. Levi moved quietly from room to room, deciding what was still worth taking. The process seemed to have been going on forever. Matt Snr. had suggested that selling most of the furniture might be worth considering, but that was too hard a decision to make right now, so most of it would go into storage initially; or at least those pieces that were good enough to keep and not throw out. His gra
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@weinerdog oh, absolutely! And especially that one . . . he knows it's a favourite!
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Thank you @Summerabbacat and to all the other readers and commenters! Your support is greatly appreciated! And if I recall . . . you did predict this, did you not?
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-- Chapter 12 -- For Levi, the drive back up to the country felt different this time. Somehow, the world seemed so much bigger now, at least when compared to what it had been just a few weeks ago. Matt drove while Levi sat in the passenger seat, one arm out the open window, holding his hand out with fingers splayed, as the warm inland air rushed past his fingers and through the car. The mountains rose again in the distance, familiar and yet strangely distant now, almost like a foreign l
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@Summerabbacat all I can say is that sometimes I miss putting stuff in that I know should have gone in! 😋 You readers are good at making suggestions though, and you never can tell when some of them might just get used! 😉
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Hmmm . . . @Summerabbacat I wouldn't read too much into that!
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@Summerabbacat and @Charles26 ... have no fear, you will all find out more about Levi's background and past as the chapters progress
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-- Chapter 11 -- It seemed that word of Matt’s son arriving in Thompsonville had travelled fast. First, it had been Father Costas who mentioned that he had heard the news, then, by the time Luke and Levi had arrived home from church there were other friends of Matt and Luke’s who were already there, wanting to meet him. As they pulled to a stop, they noticed Matt sitting with two guys on the rear deck, all with beers in hand. ‘Who are they?’ Levi asked, while sounding a littl
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Yes, I remember a few movies (I think he was in Ice Castles wasn't he). Read an article on him a while back. Not much acting these days, but yes, he was a hot silver-daddy from the photo the had.
