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Thanks for the review, Ricky! No three-camera shoot in the baths because, well, they didn't have cameras. :-)
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There seems to be this emphasis on heavy descriptions. There's something to be said for getting to the point, without a lot of flowery adjectives or lengthy descriptions. As a reader, I like it when there's enough vagueness in the description to let my mind fill in the blanks as I see it, whereas overly descriptive passages represent, to me, the author demanding that I see things entirely their way. I also think there's a very good use for common words like "got". Because they are so generic, they indicate that the action, IMHO, is not significant. Someone getting up to go answer the door is a mundane action, and I think the word works quite well there to indicate that it's mundane.
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June 6, 2002 Escorial, CA I woke up and stretched out, and felt some residual amounts of Wade’s cum leak out of my ass. The first time we’d made love, I’d penetrated him. I had thought briefly about using a condom, but I’d been safe in the past. Using a condom had become part of my routine, so it was strange, but pleasant not to put one on. Wade was the only guy I barebacked, or let bareback me, because I knew that even if he was drunk, he wouldn’t let me fuck him if he’d been uns
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I'm glad you liked the chapter. Just because one is married and has affairs with other woman wouldn't keep him out of George's determined clutches, if indeed his clutches are determined. :-)
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Hornblower detests music, and finds it to be tortuous. He'll love the band! :-)
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I'm interested to see what I do with them. :-) I haven't figured that out yet.
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I'm glad you liked it. I thought that would be something Cavendish would come up with!
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Well I'm glad I could give you some hope. :-) Sorry your blond dude was a jerk. It happens.
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May 16, 1799 Cowes, England George Granger looked at the beautiful home John Nash had built for him as the shore boat was rowed toward the Isle of Wight. Granger had received several acres on the Isle of Wight as a gift from his father, and while it included the barony of Ryde, most of the property was around Cowes. Granger had a chance meeting with John Nash on the island some two years ago, and he’d commissioned Nash to build a summer house for him, a place where he could
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I love stats!!! Awesome!!!
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That sounds like a good plan.
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For those of you who want to download 9.11, it is now in e-book format here.
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I nap rarely.
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I inspire Superman? Awesome! Thanks!
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More than good! Thanks!
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Thanks Nikki! I'm glad that you liked the relatively seamless transition. I don't think any of them have much to worry about with Tony, at least for right now. He's probably feeling very guilty, and happy just to go back to St. Louis and avoid all the inhabitants of Escorial and their issues.
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I'm so glad. I've been accused, at times, of being unrealistic with my characters' actions (smirks). Matt is more emotional, and that's probably one of the issues Wade has with him.
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You know, it's interesting in a narrated story that we get the narrator's perspective. We really don't know how much Matt has changed internally, since it's been a while since we've seen his thoughts.
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Wade and Brad...because us older guys like to think that a hot young guy would find us attractive. :-) Matt chose to move back to Escorial because he wants to be with Wade, it's close to Stanford, and Frank and Isidore should be coming back from Lafayette shortly for the summer. No one wants to spend summers there.
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We appreciate your support! Thanks!
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Mark Arbour replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
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Thanks Miles. I think that Matt and Wade started at very different places...the question is how close to each other's position they can get.
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Sorry about that! Glad you found it!
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I'm going to vote: Good.
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Probably because I had issues getting the first chapter posted, and it didn't post until February 28, but it was listed in the queue for February 24.
