not everyone cares about proper names in any time period...
example would be Moon Unit and Dweezil Zappa...
or when Prince had that symbol for a name...
Kristin's last name is Hendrickson. JP's bio-dad is Bill Hendrickson (same with Brian)...
Kevin's dad's older brother and Brad's bio-dad is Kevin Charmichael
I'd say Gathan should bring Kristin to Palo Alto to bring up real drama...
Kristin: wow JP, you look a LOT like my grandfather Bill...
But he really needs to stay away from Zach. He's bad news...
spoiled brats:
Ace, Claire, Billy...
What happened to their dog Goldie? Heard about it once and then it was gone.
Didn't Claire had a pony too?
dead pets all over the place I bet
Those who were not physically fit played a minor role.
We knew about Greg but we didn't KNOW Greg. We knew Stef's POV of Greg.
Same with David Carmichael. (This boy WILL have issues if we ever see him again!)
Same with Nathan.
Same with Cole. (oh look, issues that took several chapters to discuss )
17. They can not be physically unfit and has played a sport or works out a lot (jockhead maybe but they are not in jock math)
18. If they ARE mentally unfit, they have issues hidden deep and will not be out in the open until Mark writes 3-4 chapters about it.
19. Cody will have sex with them w/o a condom at least twice. (Hell, just assume the character WILL have unprotected sex with at least two people)
20. There is a cliffhanger at the end of the chapter which brings us to the shocking part of...
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I doubt greatgrandpa JP or grandpa/grandma Carswold (if the dad is Matt) or grandma/pa Danfield will allow Tiffany to starve or be homeless so I am not worried. BTW, if Tiffany is bi, you can make HER the object of Gathen's desire.
funny, I can't comment in the chapter review after I posted comments in a chapter.
but yeah, I aleady knew it was the April's fools chapter when you posted it since it contained about 4k less words then your usual chapters.
had you posted 5-6k words in the chapter, then I might of been worried
and yeah, I laughed my ass off when the plane crashes and Gathen saw the fireball.
Yeah, if you were going to do this, you could of made the chapter like dkstories...
http://www.gayauthors.org/story/dkstories/doingitright/18
but I will say it again... Cody... Unprotected sex again
This is off topic but part of the cap saga.
Here's what Escorial might be worth right about now in 2011...Yeah... 18 acres (close enough) Los Altos Hills, (Close enough) and 25,500 sq feet = $100 Million...
You know, I used to volunteer with a local health clinic to give info about the risks of STD's and AIDS... I stopped doing so (or was asked not to come back depending on who you asked) because I would get in people's faces and tell them how f*ing stupid it was to have unprotected sex with random people.
It's not just about AIDS. It's about all the other random sexually transmitted diseases out there or the chances of getting the girl pregnant! And in this case, it might be Cody that's the daddy. Good Job there Cody! Screw up more people's lives why don't you!