Phantom

This story keeps getting better and better... Other then that AMAZING job as always and I can't wait for the next chapter!

When I write, I tend to listen to people who tell me to make minor changes to my stories (like switching from Cosmo to a YeagerBomb because it would fit the situation more) BUT I tend to not listen to those who tell me to make major changes to the story (Like writing about a plane ride and the mile high club to a boat ride and the at sea club). I loath those ----- Sidebar ----- Thanks Comsie for GFD! It's ranking as one of my fav stories!

I love the fact that I can make a hetrosexual man jellous at a bar by having three women on my arms when he's sitting all alone (hehe yes I can be a total bitch ROFL)

Here I used to think I was a total whore because I tend to have sex with someone after meeting them (My record is a half-hour... don't judge it was a frat party!!!!) :wacko: But now I take comfort in the fact that me and 14 other people are in the same boat. Yay!

Sigh, I'm cursed I say! I have hair on my chest and I HATE IT! Seriously. I used to be a swimmer so I always keep it shaven, but when I get lazy and let it grow out, my love for my body tends to go down a few notches until I shave it off. Same with my upper legs, though I stopped doing that after I was done with competitive swimming. So yes I keep my chest shaven and I do keep my swimmers build, though because I've been sick, I've lost some of my definition to my abs. WAHHHH!!

So here I am chugging along in my writings when I start to browse some of the hosted authors for ideas in how to elaborate and write in detail on how characters interact when I stumble upon GFD (Gone From Daylight) written by Comicality. This was about a week or so ago. Now here I sit, writing in my blog about two things, how amazing this story is and how I have ADD when it comes to new technology. One. This story is AMAZING in every sense of the word. It's written in such detail that I feel like I'm there. The story is so captivating that I actually stopped writing and have done nothing but read this story. If you haven

But showing how much he knows shows that he's a good author that can research ....or a guy who's read the Anarchist Cookbook one to many times who knows... but it does give each story that little kick to it

Please, i'm not sure I understand the enigma I have myself But thanks everyone for wishin me a happy bday it was fun and drama filled, but fun non the less. Now maybe I can start finishing what I wrote haha My first short story entitles ALONE will be comming around soon on my site and on nifty!

Well... i'll post mine... lol i love being the dramatic/emo/artist type haha PS my third revision (still learning BB code)

I think that this was a good chapter (with a small cliffhanger at the end ). CJames is wrapping up this story beautifully and I can't wait to see what happens in the next. also dimitri... who knows Great Job as always Goatmaster!

But wouldn't that make for a good cover Joe not living with Jerry/Scar? Besdies... Jerry/Scar always seems to have an ace up his sleeve and could've left instructions with Joe to carry out an attack on the band. I'm pretty sure he would know exactly where they would find sanctuary when they're under attack (Jerry/Scar knew so why not Joe?) and the fact that he lived with Jerry at one point and it seems that Jerry has been planning this for a long time (before the band maybe?). And the airforce well... as much as they like to fight with their minds (buncha wimps), they do have to be sufficient in small arms (9mm types) and heavy arms (m-16a2's) so it would be unlikely that an Air Foce personel wouldn't know how to fire or to be able to take out at least 1 or 2 bikers. Ugh I can't wait till the new chapter comes out and I can put my mind at ease cus now i'm really intrested in who this is dead person is...

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Or it could have something to do with the Band and Helen...

Hmmm... I think it's gotta be someone else... because as his goatlyness pointed out in another fourm subject... I think it might be Lump (former lead singer) cus if he lives (or lived) with his dad... he could have access to some weapons that Scar/Jerry might have... and Scar/Jerry could have told his son to attack them with said weapons... and argh my brain broke from the thinking... :wacko: All i know is that this is a damn good series and I wish it wouldn't end

Well... figured I would start a blog on here instead of blogger (this one seems cooler!). Anywho I'm working on a short story entitled Alone. It's sorta based on a period of time that I encountered with both my feelings and my well... emoness. I changed around the names and such but I really perfer to use the settings because I don't want to detract of my original setting. On another note I just got out of the hospital and am feeling better so I hopefully can get Alone finished and get started on another one of my Enigmatic creations lol. Peace and Equailty!

CJames... what is it with the whole goose thing? Did a flock happen to leave their 'business' on your car and your seeking revenge on them? Poor geese...

This story keeps getting better and better!!! Congrats CJames on making an amzing story! It's amazing how you can combine all different aspects (from music to nuclear obliteration) into one story. Please no cliffhangers though... I think people will agree when I say it's evil!

When it comes to writing, I don't play around with the rephrasing of details to make it all nicey nice because it can sometimes detract from the whole meaning of what you write, but sometimes it can be a necessary evil. Here's what I mean I think that its best to not go all into the gory detals (i.e. elaborate about how you rip someones throat out in detail, or go into unnecessary detail about a rape of a character) because it can subtract from the meaning behind it. At the same time though you shouldn't leave those situations out because what if that's how the character got his views on life? Or if that is what the character does to progress the storyline? Sometimes its hard but thats why you always let others read what you wrote and gauge their reaction. Well... thats what I think! :wacko:

Gone from Daylight is by far one of the best stories I

Well... This weekend was interesting... I got a lot of work done and managed to not go insane mainly because my mother was out of the state. Unfortunatly I was met with tragedy. My netbook of 1.5 years died on Saturday with a watery fate. I was by my friends pool working on some things for work when my friend came by and knocked my netbook into the pool. Thankfully I'm an avid backer upper because I didn't loose anything vital, just a movie or two. So needless to say I was horrified and dove in after it and grabbed it before it hit the bottom of the pool. Once out of the water I disconnected the battery and proceeded to scream at my friend. He felt bad and yesterday nt with me to the apple store where he bought me an iPad 3G. Sad to say I really like it, it's made work a lot easier and thanks to some sources at work, I got a few neat Programs to run on it (Dsm-iv-tr, iWorks, WebMD and a few others to name a few). I went onto the iTunes store and found out that the suite of Programs would've cost me quite a few bucks. Also since I use this primarily for work and it's been accepted at work, I can also use this as a tax write off Anywho my life at home is still kinda bad, but it's starting to look up especially since I might be getting a car in two weeks and soon to finish school. Cheers! Eric

Well it's the begining of pride in asbury park this weekend and so far it's been a blast! I met Tara Sanchez tonight of RuPauls drag race and she was fierce/ her performance was spot on and she worked the crowd. I hung out with my friends as well tonight and got a bit drunk off the cheap drinks lol (Kelly knows how to get me drunk and on a budget haha). I made some new friends tonight, and some of them are staff at Paradise lol. It's nice walking into a bar where everyone knows you and like you cus your not a ho bag lol. Oh and to end this blog... I'll tell ally blog followers that i've moved on from Matt officially and now like someone else a lot... Nom nom