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oh, I have such a bad feeling Will is going to lose it on this float trip... The Carmine Experience was pretty hot though, love that Tony walked in on that. Thank you for the update. Will can't really say much about Tony's so called 'slut phase' . Will is the ultimate slut right now too, Tony just had to keep it to himself and Will for ONE weekend and couldn't do it? Not very good self control there. I agree with Kitt's review. Says it all

how do they know this? or just suspect?

Thank you, loved all the St.Louis pics! It's nice to not have to google while you read

Tony is such an idiot. If he truly loved Will why would he have let him walk away? And my heart HURT when he went off with Dana to have sex leaving Will. I can't wait to see what happens next but I am hoping Dana doesn't get pregnant. No one wants a limp haired bitchy child. (kidding! all children are miracles)

ok, yeah. That works for me ohhhh. Can we please Mr. Arbour???

Why is Tony such a pushover? That is so unattractive to me. And why oh why is Will tolerating this? There's supportive and there's doormat.

Stef trips me out, coolest grandfather ever! Also, stupidest. Hot 14 year old in a 21 and up gay club with fake ID and VIP card? Recipe for Disaster! Luckily, it wasn't but damn....that could have been bad. And I say that as a parent of a 15 year old, if I was a 14 year old I would've been in that club dancing too I am looking forward to JP and Brad's reactions to Stef taking Will with him. If anything Cody would look at him and know that he definitely hit the VIP area. Tony is such a .... kitty cat. I can't stand a pushover. Thank you for such a great chapter, I loved reading about Stef and Will's relationship and interactions

Another wonderful JP chapter! It was nice to see Will and Stef through his eyes.Sounds like Claremont is a success. The entire family should be at that event. Kicking, screaming and dragged there if need be. I don't know if it's just a Southern thing but families here pull together for things like this, even the hated, drunk and disorderly manage to look presentable for the day. Claire's attitude when she heard about Will asking for them to attend the party sounds like she may more quickly reevaluate her priorities. There is nothing like a child showing the correct way to make an adult snap quickly back into place. I am hoping Will and Tony will be back next chapter? I almost don't want to read about it but I just know it's going to go horribly wrong and Will will move to Texas to ride bareback broncos in a fit of rage.

I needed to think about this chapter before posting. I really, really enjoyed the drama at the dining table and cannot wait to see the fallout (if there is one). Marie is being a little teenage bitch. As a former little bitch, I can agree that she will grow out of this. Will was right. I don't know that pissing JP off to that extent was necessary or smart in any way but I suspect that a 14/15 year old wouldn't think about what the possible fallout of that action would be until a later date. I'm shocked Erik was on the invite list, he only recently broke Will's nose which was a source of family gossip that Isidore definitely would have been aware. I am so glad my prediction about the chapter didn't come true. I'm anxious to see Claire and Jack's future treatment of Will and why John has been so non supportive of Will lately. Thank you for another great emotionally charged chapter!

How polite is it to start off with 'Mark Arbour is an evil, evil man' ? great chapter, loved (hated) the tease for chapter 7!!!! Will's character is so refreshing and I really enjoyed seeing him with his parents and Hank. Please tell me you will post chap 7 early? or give us a hint.... I'm wondering though... why was Stef grumpy? Thank you for such an amazing series that pulls everyone in to the CAP world!

The idea of Stef, Brad and Will dragging Tony down the aisle doesn't seem all that farfetched I think Will would be better off with Jeff but for now Tony works.

So Tony and Will were so sweet to each other...you can almost hear the 'something bad is about to happen' music. No! I'm almost dreading reading about it going up in flames. I don't know if they are really 'in love' but it sure sounds like it.

This is one of my favorite chapters! I feel absolutely giddy which i am way too cynical to be. I'm trying not to be pessimistic and wonder if this will blow up in Will's face Awwwww, he loves him Thanks Mark!

what a nice surprise to find a new chapter today! Hank's whole money grubbing attitude seems off and gauche. Jeanine's income and such should not be a concern for her. If I were Brad and Hank said she wanted to own the house herself I would ask her to put half down. I imagine 1.5 mil might be difficult for a police officer to get. I hope Will doesn't wind up getting burned with Tony. Does Jeff still live at Escorial?

He broke his nose ?!?!?! no! I have to say he kindof deserved it but couldn't he at least get a few punches in? lol I'm SO glad to see CAP back, we missed you Mark

I, of course, am thrilled to have Will back I am eager to read the other family members POV as well.

She SAID she was on the pill..... MethodWriter, I was thinking more along the lines of Jeff's college experiences. He is at a completely different place than alot of kids his age who are more carefree and taken care of by parents (or at least have better support systems), growing up on the streets and hustling ages a person. I'd like to see how he reacts to the new enviroment. And dating Will who is 4 years younger. *cough* I can see Will having trouble in high school from Carter but that wouldn't be overly dramatic, I don't think. I'm sure at some point they would end up in bed together. I'm really hoping that while we won't have a JJ narrator that he doesn't follow in Shane's footsteps either.

I would love to see Will as narrator again. His life doesn't have to be complete chaos for that to happen either. He could date Jeff that has family and school issues that will be dramatic enough. And of course, seeing 911 through a teen's eyes? Someone emotional like Will would feel that huge impact. I'm good with whatever Mark A. gives me but I sincerely hope it's not JJ.

The last chapter had absolutely everything I hoped for and more, Thanks Mark!

That was unbearably beautiful and fulfilling, I have tears in my eyes. Thanks Mark

Damn. That whole chapter was. Wow. Shane Jackson was just terribly sad and such a waste, I really enjoyed his character. The problem that Will is having with Tony and now Kyle just piss me off. I think Brad or Stef should step in and have them knocked off. I understand that bitter feeling you get when you realize you are being used and not getting the full potential, he's not a pay by the hour whore. JJ..... I wonder if he'll end up like Shane? Can you really recover when you are in such a deep mindset? And on the flip side? So happy to have Lark back(mayBE) Now Will can sleep with Jeff's dad since Jeff slept with one of his dads. I think that Lark would have been an absentee parent if he had known about Jeff as a baby but now that he's older and more interesting? I can see them being friends not really father/son. Thank you for posting such an amazing chapter and so early too!

Will Chapter! I just knew he was going to end up in the pool, at least he wasn't bleeding. I am hoping that Will will narrate the next story too, I really feel attached to his character and love the high school drama. How disappointing about the 12 o'clock kiss! bummer. I want to see Will happy with a guy, preferably hot and all over him just to see what that's like for him before everything crashes and burns. Exceptionally great chapter! thank you

I am hoping the next story narrators are Will and perhaps JP or Brad for equal balance. I enjoy all the high school drama and whatnot.

loved the chap especially the ending I have decided that in my mind at least , that Jeff is Ryan's half brother. Although Robbie realizing his long lost nephew F'd him is hilarious.

Will certainly was acting .... odd. I wonder how he's going to react now that the reality sets in. I think Wade needs the submissiveness in the bedroom. Maybe not whips and chains or even light BDSM but he needs to be controlled and told what to do. Although I hope you write about the experiment with being tied down. That was definitely a twist I never saw coming. I hope little Davy's shyness is not the result of abuse. The good doctor didn't seem terribly upset about his son in law's death. I wonder why? I would assume that he'd see signs of abuse if it was happening to his grandkids but I'm sure he would have done something about that. Or did he?