I'm also under the impression that Luke is the eldest of the siblings? Can he not gain custody of the kids? Contest his father's will? It's obvious the children would not fare well under their grandmother's care.
6 years, I'm under the impression that Luke would have been 18 or so when he left the home, if not before then. I'm also curious as to what all these lies were told and whom they were told too, that part was not clear. I think perhaps CPS? (Child Protection services). If the youngest daughter was 6 and is now 12, that places Luke at 24 (give or take) How old is Jonathan? I'm under t he impression that he is still a young teenager, along with the elder sister? She's what...20...22? Yet to me she is still poison, but there was also a phrase that made me think she was older then Luke.
But, I rather like my idea. He's the eldest child, and went through a lot of self sacrifice... Kick the evil granny's butt out and get custody of the children...Luke can do it wo-man! And so can you...
PLLEEEEEAAZZZZZEEEEEEE. I'll finish my anthol story if you write this new story.
Besides, think about all the challenges that have to be overcome. A wicked granny, courts, past blames and accusations, self doubt, not only in the MC (Luke) and his partner(??) Adin, but in the other siblings.
We want the story...and...I'm sure there are other people that want it too. (and I'm totally not going to leave you alone until I get it buahahah)
Soooo... Who is
Speak up peepz.
That crazy kitty