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Hahah, what a weirdly erotic way of coming out. I can see the major oops factor in that. J

Another story with a straight boy's pov. I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry. And yeah, I was picturing the in the closet scene (I even found that rather ironic too, at first) and what was going on in the room. I still think Mike shoulda gone out there and kicked Devon's butt for taking advantage of his little brother like that, totally. ::nods and imagines a buttsore Devon:: Jon

Excellent story. Eric giving notice was a surprise. I'm interested in where they'll end up at when they get on the cruiseliner now, especially with Felecia's plans. Will Eric and crew end up meeting the general and his son, along with Pvt Johnson?. Brian's new role is also interesting. I didn't see that one coming at all. Helen being an expert on dating surprised me as well, I'm almost ancient and I still don't know crap on dating. Can't wait for the next chapter (and chapters) when they get written and put up on the site, time permitting this, of course. Good luck on your trip CJ, and stay safe. Regards, Jon

Don't forget the mountains blowing up again...and a nuclear explosion. I fear young Jansen and Keith's budding relationship is bout to be smashed. . Least the scenes between them two were HOT. Jon

Great. Now everyone's going to die. Good thing I ordered pizza for the pre funerary party. Ah well, was still an extremely good chapter. I'm thinking I'm gonna wait till the story is published before I come back to it, all the cliffhangers are killing me. Evil goat, giving a guy a heart attack.

Yay, Loved the chapter. Mom coming will definitely be a surprise. Sooooo.....who is gonna take who's last name? Is Chase the "wife" or is Brandon? Hrm....Chase Wolf...or Brandon Carlisle? Heheh, the Carlisle Brothers! Now...all I have left to say is..... Everyone should join EJITE!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, things are definitely starting to take off. Jon

yeah, that made my day, thanks Off to write more of chapter 5 Jon

Hrm, what do you do if you're trying to have a conversation with an extremely shy person? I'd find it awkward myself, but I'm usually that shy quiet person, and everytime I open my mouth I feel like I'm saying stupid or coming across as stupid. Makes trying to get a 2nd date out of someone rather hard, heh, especially since it takes me a while to warm up to someone. Wonder if my behavior in this manner is a defense mechanism or something. Anyone know a shrink? Extremely Shy ~Jon

LoL. I think I agree with you guys on this, I just find it ridiculous that I have a three bedroom house all to myself, and am able to cover all the bills and payments on my own. Mayhaps I won't have anymore roommates after all, just figured I'd try and make some money off the deal, alas, I think it's gonna cost me more money than what I was getting out of the deal. Hrm...so Kevin lives alone huh....Want a new pet? (I mean me) I'm quiet and clean up after myself, I even cook and clean, do back massages, etc. I also get along with other pets (I mean the furry/swimmy/slithering kind). Children are optional. LoL, Jon

I can totally respect that, especially if writing it brings up painful memories that com doesn't want to remember, and while the end of chapter 10 doesn't quite say so, I have a funny feeling that at that point in time Zach is gonna start fighting back and stop taking his father's crap, and everything will be fine. Jon

Did this story end at chapter 10 or is there still more to it? I want Zach to end up happy and the bastard father of his to end up in prison or something, seems like it'd be a fitting end for him. Just checking, Jon

LoL. I think he's just a tabby cat, course he's bigger now, but they tend to grow Jon ::sniffles, my baby is all grown up::

see if this works

Ouch, sorry you got evicted cause other people were uncomfortable with him around. I guess I should explain something here, the landlady is my mom. This used to be my dad's house and I'm paying to buy it from my mom. The roommate is also my cousin, and after I wrote this he got bailed out from jail and came back to try pushing me around a bit, but we ended up talking a bit like human beings, so I think we'll be okay, unfortunately the minute he put his hands on me was the minute I made the decision that he's gone one way or the other. Touching someone in an offensive manner is a definite no no in my book, especially after he started breaking stuff in the house itself. One of his friends though was polite enough and respected me enough to keep him away from me after he shoved me around. Soo..so far we have: Don't shove your roommate around Don't have parties against a roommate's wishes Don't call the police on your roommate without fair warning Don't allow family to move in with you, they'll try to walk all over you and get pissed when you let them know they can't do that anymore. Do have respect towards one another Do establish ground rules before anyone moves in. Do make sure you're compatible with one another. Am I missing anything? Jon

heh, I think some people do it just to start a fight. The roommate I'm kicking out of my house and his girlfriend do it to each other all the freaking time. It's annoying listening to them fight. Jon

Hello everyone, and welcome to this evening's discussion of roommates: Do's and Do Not's. My name is Jon and I'll be your host. Sorry for the sarcasm. I'm just curious, at what point in time do you draw the battle line between you and your roommate. My roommate has been living here for a couple of months now and and he seems to think he can sit here and party with whomever whenever he wants until 5 or 6 in the morning. Because of this, I've ended up adjusting my sleeping hours to reflect this, and find it to be a pain in the butt. He feels because he pays 5% of the rent and 5% of the bills that that entitles him to do whatever he wants, even though his name is not on the lease. The last time he had a party here an xbox 360 that didn't belong to him or myself was stolen, and it was at that point in time that I told him he could no longer have a party here, and the Landlady said he couldn't either or she'd come pack his stuff up herself. Tonight he ended up throwing a party anyways, even though after I tried warning him that I would call the police myself, due to the fact that he is a minor and most of his friends are minor's as well. Needless to say I ended up calling the police myself and I'm trying to figure out if I'm in the right or wrong. Just curious what everyone else's opinions are. Jon

I forgot about the picture part in the story. I'd agree with that too, that's a violation of privacy too. If I remember correctly as well, I think that was the first time Taylor had ever been in Luke's apartment, so some of what Taylor did I'm gonna pass off to Taylor trying to learn more about his "kinda boyfriend". Jon

In Hello Stupid, Luke told Taylor to let himself back in when he got done walking with the dog, and while he was kind of snooping a little bit, I think more of it was out of curiousity than anything else, I don't feel he was truly violating Luke's privacy within regards to that. Answering the phone wasn't really a violation of privacy either, as he left a message for Luke that Rory had called. If someone was at my house and I was unavailable to answer it than I would hope they'd pick up. Now snooping through someone's phone messages and txt messages is an extreme no no. I'd be seriously pissed if someone did that to me. Now, Taylor didn't snoop through Luke's bedroom, just through the common parts of the apartment that guests would be hanging out in anyways. If he'd gone into Luke's bedroom without permission, which is considered a private area, than that would also be extremely different, seeing as how I get pissed when people come into my bedroom without my permission, even if I have the door shut. Jon

Shhhhh, don't give him anymore horrible ideas

Definitely another good chapter. I do hope Jansen and Eric hook up . Hope everyone survives their various situations as well, it'd be pure evil to be killing em all off. I think Brian and Keithers would be good for each other too That way everyone ends up happy ever after. Least we don't have nuclear warheads involved (yet) Not such a cliffhanger after all. I'm sure the boys and Jim and his wife will escape the island before the volcano erupts, which'll put a screwball in Eric's wedding plans for Brandon and Chase, but oh well. They shoulda gone to England instead. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, Jon

Merry Christmas and happy new years CJ Jon

Ooh, I missed the reawakened volcano. this chapter is pure evil. It's definitely a cliffhanger. Mayhaps we'll get the next one New Year's Eve...... Now that we know Keithers is gay, and Jansen and him are brothers, the question remains, is Jansen gay? Hrm.....I do hope Brian and the General survive. Thanks for the chapter, can't wait for the next one Jon

I love ninjas And I'm relatively new around here too..like...12 days ago I think I joined, so i decided that's it's still not to late for me to actually say Hi Jon

Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Gonna be a quiet night for me though, (I hope) I'm to old to be partying like i'm a teenager anymore, the hangovers get to be too brutal. Instead I gonna go listen to my cousin and his girlfriend argue at my bday dinner in an hour instead, but that's okay, cause my 19 year old cous baked some brownies as my bday cake lol Thanks much, Jon edited to add: My cousin has a marine friend who came back home on leave from overseas, brought a few bottles of absinthe with him. I gotta say, nasty stuff...blech. So that was my birthday shot

I tried to get into the prologue to start reading the other series C James wrote (i ran out of stuff to read and hit a point where i wanted to stop and start thinking things through on the story I'm writing) and ran into this problem...Is the prologue not there anymore or what? HELP please...Thanks Jon <H2 align=left> Quality Gay Fiction Stories</H2> window.google_render_ad(); Error 404 - Wrong Page OOPS! The page you are trying to reach: /http://cjames.gayauthors.org/FTLhtml_files/ftlpro.php was not found. You might try using .php instead of .html Your IP: REMOVED THE IP ADDIE HERE, NO ONE NEEDS TO KNOW IT Your Broswer: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 7.0; Windows NT 6.0; FunWebProducts; SLCC1; .NET CLR 2.0.50727; Media Center PC 5.0; .NET CLR 3.0.04506) <H1 align=center>Gay Authors Home</H1><H4 title="Stories at Gay Auhors Site Navigation" align=center>Gay Authors Navigation</H4> Home Forums Blogs Stories Authors eFiction GA Store Anthology Story Archive Teens FAQ Friends Site Map