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Palantir

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  1. Palantir

    Chapter 7

  2. Palantir

    Chapter 6

    Maybe! - Keep projecting.
  3. Palantir

    Chapter 5

    Beth says thank you!
  4. Palantir

    Chapter 19

    Wanna is definitely within reach, way before the 200 year future of the story.So too the self-cleaning pool. The grav-sofa is a different order of request as gravity control is very much a leap of faith on my part. It was needed though for the habitats to function. Intelligence? - I could offer you an implant though there is a bit of a wait, and I seriously doubt the deficiency claim. Villainous is a great word. Thanks again Stephen.
  5. Palantir

    Chapter 19

  6. Oh My! I feel like I'm responding to a professional critic. Thanks for all your time and effort with this. I really feel as if you've thought about the structure of the story more than I have. I think some of your comments have already been covered in my reply to fmd. I would have to emphasise that reality and the events in the story are very much at odds. The story was purposefully written as your 'feel-good story', with situations resolving in an ever so happy manner, and with my attempts at humor thrown in. I'm with you in your comments about the ending. I had the same feeling that it wasn't quite a match for the rest of the story, but not having a 'traditional' type of 'what happened to them' ending didn't feel right to me. Yes,there were numerous characters and situations which weren't developed, particularly Andy. I had a plethora of ideas about him, but they were more adversarial and not matching the tone of DTT. At any rate. I'm delighted that you gained enjoyment from my work. Best wishes and thanks for your consideration. Iarwain.
  7. Palantir

    Chapter 4

    Great to hear of your enjoyment. I hope some of the situations bring a smile to your face.
  8. Palantir

    Chapter 3

    lol - and when they're put together the sum is worse than the two parts.
  9. Palantir

    Chapter 2

    A shock for anyone.
  10. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Welcome to DTT. I hope you enjoy the journey.
  11. Have a great day Curti!!!
  12. Thanks for that Mike - Totally awesome.
  13. Palantir

    Chapter 19

    ATTUNGA Part 19. *** “Wirrin, Thom and Calen. I am the Planning Assistant for your new home on Warrakan.” “Hello Wanna. Is that still your name?” “You are correct. Construction is scheduled to begin three months from now and you can make any changes or refinements you wish in the intervening period.” “We like the plan we have here, so we think we'll keep it almost the same when we move.” “It is pleasing to hear your satisfaction but the basic stipulations for your new residence suggest the
  14. Palantir

    Chapter 3

    Well, this story certainly has a sense of pace and action. Keep up the great work.
  15. Palantir

    Weekly Wrap Up!

    Best wishes for your health process.
  16. Palantir

    Part18

    Hmm! Very good question. I'll weave a fuller explanation into a later posting.(probably not the next one - but I'll have a look at it.)The reason for implementation? - recognition for the ways the trio has helped the Attunga society. I'm working on another reasonably quick posting but then it might return to the two to three week norm - the next stage of my health stuff kicks in next week. I'm delighted that the story continues to give you enjoyment.
  17. Palantir

    Part18

    There will be more detail about the extensive marine environments in the new larger sized reaches.No more sharks? - that remains to be seen. Sonic's health. yes, despite the super science on Attunga and Warrakan there are still things unknown. Lol - I wonder how the doctor knows these ancient terms? Thanks again for your reviews Stephen. Cheers back at you.
  18. Palantir

    Part 17.

    An Attunga fix? Lol - well I'm glad it makes you feel better.- a small contingent shared the Attunga reach to lighten the burden on the Warrakan one. Foiled yes - but only temporarily I'm afraid. I's not in their nature to 'live and let live'.
  19. Palantir

    Part 17.

    Thanks Foster_ great to hear you enjoyed it.
  20. Palantir

    Part 17.

    Tnx for the review. Lol - and I can't even make an excuse for him not looking at the DNA now that he's got total clearance.
  21. Palantir

    Part18

    Attunga Part 18. *** “Guess what! We actually get to go to EdCom tomorrow.” “EdCom? What's that?” It was a week since their last EdCom session, even longer for Calen, three hectic days since the Comet docked safely, and the first evening they weren't arriving home late from Warrakan. The routine of life for the mass of dolphins in the great forty kilometer reach on Warrakan was starting to sort itself, mainly due to Sonic's leadership and help. Puck and Flute had stayed with the smaller cont
  22. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Hmm! You've caught my interest. (apart from the strong language - which may be there to indicate the toughness of the character) I already like this bad-ass character with the good soul. You've portrayed him well. What can this dire message that's alarmed him so much be about?
  23. Palantir

    Part 17.

    Thanks Daddydavek. Yes, I is a bit short I agree, but 'due to unforeseen circumstances' there has been a holdup in the production of the story. I went for the option of a shorter chapter rather than a longer wait.
  24. Palantir

    Part 17.

    Attunga Part 17. “We won't see Sonic for the rest of the trip?” “You can watch him Thom, or go with him, but he'll be too busy to come to the Control Centre. I can see that he hasn't stopped moving around for even a minute yet.” “What's he saying to them?” A small section of screen showed Sonic in his transport module, communicating with his special InterWeb console, and anticipating Calen's request Wirrin brought up the sound. “...He's telling them all there's nothing to worry about. ...A
  25. Yay Kewljim!! Best of luck and BEST WISHES to you.
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