Mark M

whens the next chapter...i thought it'd be monday night guess it'll be tuesday....well sice it IS tuesday now.....:'(

Oh sure i betcha just looked at my edited Display piture.....well the lion is pretty hot...myself i'd pick the wolf because of the fearceness it provides and calm and slyness I love tho's characteristics.....like in Underworld, or Laura Croft......both Awesome Women who display this.....that's why i'd only turn straight for three women.....kate Beckinsale....Angelina Jolie...and Beyonce!! hAHA.....HEY SWEET MAYBE WE'LL START HERE REFERRS TO MOern music...like hilary duff.....then destine's child...then beyonce alone....then miley cyrus!!! i'm so pumped the hannAH MONtana will get into your storys mark. Don't you worry!

Oh sure i betcha just looked at my edited Display piture.....well the lion is pretty hot...myself i'd pick the wolf because of the fearceness it provides and calm and slyness I love tho's characteristics.....like in Underworld, or Laura Croft......both Awesome Women who display this.....that's why i'd only turn straight for three women.....kate Beckinsale....Angelina Jolie...and Beyonce!! hAHA.....HEY SWEET MAYBE WE'LL START HERE REFERRS .

hrm!! can't wait till tomorrow night so pumped...unless your switching back to MAC.....which won't lie is not near as intense right now!!! so whatever you decide i'll love ya still the same P.s-Please identify which mark your talking tooo..haha i'm a litte confused with the it's getting shorter....evil smirk thing!

Oh my Dear lord.....that chapter 6 was orgasmic....with idealtistic drama!! f**king loved it!!!!!! Like....ahh wow!!! .....Next one will be Monday night....i'm excited....so f**king excited how this may continue to turn out.... P.S Worst thing was that it had to stop and it got juicy at the end.....f**king hate these short great chapters!!

interesting it looks as if i did start a debate on this one...but i want the next chapter ;p

yeah i did rant on you ABOUT THAT i think i'll stick with it alough i know JP and Stef almost Inside out... this is ok.....but once he finds out that JP is his Grandfather in law....technically........That could prove to be problimatic for JP Psyche haha! ;p Maybe stef too....but hey Stef did want relations with robbie for a while there....now he technically did....my question is how Robbie and Brad's Family will Be able to take this Trama.... Although will and Matt ight be best buds....as i'm assuming will is about 6-10ish... because robbie is like thirty....meaning...won he have to have been f**king this girl in college.....i'm sorta lost with the ages but maybe someone can correct me?haha

anyway i'm saddened now....there's no more questions....we know alot of the history which is saddening now we just wait and see how it plots out. lol

so exciting....rather a short chapter but excited!! love ya mark it's an awesome Read....Ohio....who do we know in ohio state??? Clarmont? uh oh....if it's BITTY or JP's Mom....who is dead....so lets rule that out....but if it's BITTY or.....i don't even know! then there will be hell to pay Whens next chapteR?

OH REALLY WHERE?!?!?! I NEED TO FIND IT NOW!!! I"M SO EXITED!

Just throwing it out there but what if it's wrinkler all of a sudden? the poor boy has no sexual release that we know of...so maybe??? But Calvert is the Most likly one to do it, if it's fellows....who yes at 35....and 18...still a little wierd...but then i think of the "Sir" making a person Fat and Old rather then a Respectfull term to use anymore. Either way i find the situation rather useless cuz fellows is not Grangers Soul Mate, nor do i think Travers or Calvert are either anymore, i'm begining to think Granger is still looking for that one person who will solve all his sexual needs...... Like Greg for Stephan in CAP. But i won't like this man needs a big dick, to be slightly versetile, and one hell of a smart man. and amazingly hot. None of this Scrawny stuff....should be similar to travers....Little Fat, Bulging Muscle.....If any of you have seen Craig Honer from Legend of the Seeker That would be perfect! Picture of him here, Take at own Risk...though it's from a google.ca Search and i used it http://yansored.typepad.fr/.a/6a00e008dcef0a8834010535cbba3e970b-800wi Anyway i bet Wrinkler now

Chapter 8 failed to impress me much....fellows...well discusts me...i think it's perverted for that big of an age difference to enjoy one another, but i wouldn't condem it entirly. (assume fellows is 50+ while Granger is 18ish....i wouldn't even know though as details like his age are left to the wind). Calvert and Granger are totaly awesome, but i miss travers, when o when will he be back! No Music for a while either?? where's the singing...i wana see a sailor who has a soprano Voice and Shocks the Crew! Anyway... i am off to bed! it was a wonderfull read be4 sleep

It is awesome that Calvert and Granger are together!! If your Sharpening your Claws...I'm Sharpening my Teeth....(i had a Vampire Picture in my DP from Halloween before!) If Travers Dies i'll be sad. If Granger dies i'll be sad. If Caroline or Calvert die. I wouldn't be to terribly sad. Though iknow Granger would be heart Broken

Uh so High tech into the depth of the research for this story. But the minor Details are moreso Ignored.(my ownly Critic) Anyway i'm Pumped for the Next Chapter....By the way the development in my COAP Disease is worsening...I finaly started puking Flem....My nose is stuffed also and my Sore Throat is lessening..a little. Tomorrow a Cough will probably develop. then....Either i'll have the COAP Cure...Or i'll worsen into HIV and Hep A,B,C and Craps...and Herpies...and who knows...SWINE FLU?!??! AHH!! MAYBE SARS!??!? my death is imminate

Interesting! i assume this storyline will continue much like Chronicals of an Academic Preditor....buy the way i'm suffering from COAAP!!Its a deadly Disease! Eventually i'll die. So far No cure has been Made. Anyway i mean continue because there's a long way for Granger to go, but Frankly if he just Rockets to the top....whats the point of the story? there has to be a bigger purpose then what i'm forshadowing. Granger must have something big coming up....Calvert or Travers... Politics would be ok, but to write about would be horribly complicating. I hate the fact that Granger really has no say in his orders, just does what he's told, i wouldn't hate you if a dispute on orders game around.....like Promoting his brother to governor....what if he's taken a "Hitler" Stance and has taken over the colony forging Good Reports....Stealing money from the british themselves....now that....would be something! Anyway i'm just Babbling and Day dreaming of what could happen! What ever does happen i'll be Excited with Nontheless!!

I don't really know what will happen, Calvert probably will or has fallen for Granger. But Granger with his resilliant streek can destroy Calvert so to speak. Calvert seems to be putting alot on his navey career....same with Granger......like personally wouldn't a backup be ok for Granger to plan for his future?? like being so young on a ship of his own, what the hight of his power? king? Comander of the Navy next to the king?? Calvert made an interesting propistion to Granger that i'm currious to see how it comes about, Granger as he is very intelegant should heed this advice and use it. Otherwise he'll be Commador in no time.... as for his libo....SETTLE IT DOWN haha

Well i'm pretty happy with the story, i just watched the Show Master and comander with russle crowe, Good movie. There are things that you are failing to keep prominant in this story though, 4 chapters and Granger has yet to pick up his flute. can Mr. Calvert play anything??? The whole show master and commander was with violin playing. and the ACHRON(spelling??) is a awesomely designed ship. I think we need the INTERCEPTER in this story line......with Commador Granger at the helm! lol. That or some pirates.......but they don't need a prize now anyway.... they would need to keep all there men would they not?? Anyway i'm excited for the next few chapters.

COMON THAT WAS A CLIFFHANGER! haha Best chapter! lol

SinceBrian is said to be a younger version of JP, i cannot see brian being his son rather then brother...i just don't get why they just jumped to conclusions...like wouldn't JP think it out and MAKE 100% sure that it's Bills son? DNA test? Jp's Vs Brian.... I duno i'm excited for the next chapter but yet it could be something i don't want....or something that i do? i duno! although i love how brads getting alot of talking in there and is a vital Character to the situation.... When is the next wardroom or Captian Voyages chapter gona be up...(made up "Captain Voyages") lol

Well well well finaly some DRAMA!!!! was not expecting this ever to drop haha....anyway great chapter...horrible cliff hanger!! lol the look poor clair must have gave JP it must be insane....anyway! Great!

wow people truly read this for the SEX??? Ugh....i feel so not a sexaholic......you must be young Paya! I like the storyline more then any of the sex...unless it's brad and robbie....then i'll for sure Read!!

i'm only like 4 months into this website...only cuz Be Rad Dragged me in.... but yeah i liked chapter 20 alot...very refreshing...i came out to my dad last time i was in my hometown he doesn't understand how i can be attrackted to men...but i just say the same feeling when you look at a good looking women....is what i get when i see a good looking man...lol. It's Cool....i know that....4 people for SURE know i'm gay....other then that....i wouldn't know haha... It's cool having Parents who are accepting not gona lie...it's sweet cuz i was terrified of my financial situation cuz my dad supports me alot through school...so i was like errr...do i tell him or not?? i didn't want someone else telling him or someone else spray painting FAG across his house or something. Great chapter Mark!

ah brad i love Brad...to bad there's robbie in the picture....to bad these characters are fictional i'd rape alot of them haha!!! The Boat manuver was awesome very awesome!! As a Critique though, there is not much description of the surroundings the characters are in. It's like "they go down stairs to play playstation" why not "They head down the starcase of the ship to there bunks in the lower compartments to play playstation" or when you describe Escorial in other storyes...i know theres a pool....and a main hall....a kitchen....JP's Study....but all we know is that they came into the room....frankly i betcha there all empty too!! haha. Like i duno i sometimes like the Description of the place it sets the mood. Stefs Living room......."They sit on the Couch" Assuming that stef is so rich and stuff it should be like.....longer..... Bitty and the Social worker enter Stefan's Living room though the ordinate doors into a brightly lit, furnished with black leather couches and a handcrafted from france coffetable with remarkable design, showing stefs wealth. As they continue to look in amazment as more of the living room comes into sight with a marble encased firplace.... etc etc For some reason i feel as if Escorial is yellow also....is that true? haha

yay a few to go thenm:D

Uh oh.....i'm getting peach all over....WAIT WAIT that's the natural tone of my skin....hmmm is it inner ilness