Mark M

OMG do you know how long that read took me??? Like a HALF HOUR!!! or more even! I sooo loved it all!!! what is a Thwart though?? a seat of some sort?? Granger and Caroline are so cute Calvert.....i duno now that i read it, maybe him tagging along wasn't a good idea???? not sure, we'll see how granger and calvert progress, i'm thoughally thinking i should revoke my vote to keep him along though. Oh well. Wrinkler is adorable, keeps all of Grangers secrets....he could definatly be a danger to granger if ever turn against one another. I think wrinkler could be someone of great importance wherever granger goes. okay so Grangers "great" Cabin opens into the gun deck with the 18 pounders.......so does that mean when they beat to quarters grangers cabin has to be torn apart and remodled in short time to prep for the battle??? (Like they do on the Movie "Master and Commander" I Do appreaciate the details i think they have givin something more irresistable to your work!!! If these chapters take longer that's fine, one a week is totaly acceptable or whatever you decide, i want quality rather then have you rush through them. I'll pressure you no doubt if you leave a cliff hanger so please prepair adequatly to tell us to shove off or post another chapter with certain release of the cliffhangers Spencer and Caroline to visit...oh dear lol maybe some drama is what we need, force granger to do something he usualy wouldn't do to crew members that'd be a good plot but i duno i don't think spencer will do to much, Caroline might though, who knows...... i believe it's bad luck to have a women on board though.....or so they said in "Pirates of the Carribbean

REALLY??? DETAILS??!?!?!? i'm so excited mark!!! lol my nagging may pay off we'll just have to see

i'm suffering alot these days

I Agree too more fireworks would have definalty been nice.....but no1 said the senitor still can't plot against Matt and take control of his son again. Like seriously the workings of the rich can be many. I just wish the whole of chapter 40 was the confrontation between the 4 of them (matt, senetor, wade and beau) maybe even mis danfield and really blow the thing up. either way i'm tried of Matts life, these forms are providing to much forshadowing. Much less the story is itself. i want Granger back!

I agree ....love ur sig....black perl! haha to funny Anyway i never thought of the whole here's my father and his husband thing.....just thought matt wanted to take someone to be all goooogoo over but that could work, or JP and Stef that could work too.... but wade and a copy of the video on the country clubs t.v's would be hilarious, and would definatly make the senitor get murdered, with all the rich people watching.

It was a good chapter. i think more of a conversation between Senator and them would've been cool.....and what did wade and beau do all day till 6:15, why skip that? probably could've been a good conversation. Ah enough said, i can finally say i can relax and not be super pumped for the next chapter, extaticly.

okey well he can't be lovy dovy all over steff of jp or brad or robbie so i ruled them out. Frankly i think he'll hook up with Cam or take wade inevitably. Either way i'll be happy with the result.....i also picked cody just in case haaha

don't let the canadian lovers here me say this but we all went naked at least once in the shower in high school in grade 10, me everytime pretty much lol, i even jacked off while the two hottest GUYS ever were in the shower, and i was on the other side of the wall, so i didn't see them, they didn't see me. Untill they came out of the shower but then i was done and they were clueless as to what i just did haha!! Some of the guys didn't, specifially two, one was really big and concerned about his weight, after him i was the biggest for weight but i am not really concerned about my weight, only Acne, i had/haveish a bad case of it at time, amost to look like i got hit with a paintball or something. but as rumors went i was the biggest, and 3 out of the 8 guys were cut, me included in the cut section. and they were all exibitionists so i had to only hide when i felt myself getting hard, which was pretty much every time, i actually had a few full blown boners but they didn't say anything so i dono if they noticed but every time they bent to pick there towel up....oh my god...i died..100% lol. so hot,....sadly it ended after grade ten, because we combined with grade 10's the next year so we were all either uncomfortable or something i duno what stopped it, but it sooo saddened me.

Acting like a Prince to a police officer.

Having an overabundance of stuffed animals and dildo's

YAY!!!!!

can we have another chapter....pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeee :D :D :D

then yeah i agree with you, and when a girl got pregnant she usualy was married off before the shunning started back then i feel old....just kidding i just here stories and then pass them on and act like i'm smart

ok now you got my attention....small town girls=sluts (when they have any more then one partner, two is to many) Funniest thing is when there in a relationship with the ONE GUY and never even did anything to suggest her with another guy there still sluts too but either way small town girls give it up readily. And from other towns surrounding my own it's the same....city girls....welll Maybe just a little difference...in willingness to give "IT" up

Guys....i've been sorta reading the discussion for who hangs with who and stuff and it's annoying me, in the fact it's relation to bloodlines is minimal.....Mark could've just made the whole world gay (Babies through tubes and stuff) and being straight was the bad thing. Then it's not Reality either, this isn't factual, this is entertainment. Definatly just agreed with Hermatically sealed.... Anyway i think the gay population should stay below 15% of the male population and well 15% for the female population....because i'd rather not have to have a futuristic world where babies through tubes is actually done......only. and Straight sex is just wierd. Or maybe sex in general. Anyone see that movie with Sandra bullok(spelling) and Sylvester stalone? Sex was abolised due to HIV and other things. so i'd rather not that happen although it even does today! Plus the more there are of us the less babies are produces...(there a product ) the less of a fighting human chance of survival.

Declaired cliff hanger! Worst one of "life" and i duno whats wronge with my but the whole chapter was really good, but i found it lacking in politics and the drag-out the problem, i'm not entilry sure but the speed these chapters move are getting to be....annoying? there good but when at the begining of a chapter were showering and the next were ready to nail a senator to the wall is just....to quick to really develope the full effect of beau's and wades relationship. (DON"T STONE ME PLEASE :S) I think if we went into like wade and Beau interacting more there would be more of an effect. Mark i may just turn into a writer just to show you how details can control the emotions of the reader even stronger than i'm getting from your stories (sorry again... but there's positive coming....eventually). The technology just jumped in there with the cell phone.....i missed the whole flat-screen refrence because they really arn't something that is used evey minute of every day. plus the quickness of stories and the rather unexpected reliance on a cell phone was just like waaa! Senitor Danfield.......*hit* not impressed. Matt *hug* lovable teddy bear to still....love.....that....and maybe even imlicated....:| mark next chapter please! make it a combo of 40 and 41 but call it 40 that way...they'll take some time to read. and then u'd have 47 chapters instead f 48

Welcome Vacartu, i love your theory, couldn't have said it better myself!! i would find it hard to catch up on the form though, there's 30 pages of comments now.....i must ask....did you read them all?? On another note, so we get more new people Mark i think you should post the link to your chapter and to your form, if you just don't link to the form on your signiture. :o I reccomend this then we can get new talkers in here. Alright guys i give it up you all had cell phones....they just didn't enter my school untill grade 9 so...(2005?) and i didn't get my first untill grade 11. (Postponed it cuz i thought they were just stupid. lol to think now i never leave the house without it...and if matt's carrying something like that nokia around i do not feel at all bad that he smashed it. Either way didn't like how mark introudces the new technology into the CAP series....right now there in the middle of technolgical advancements like no other (Wonder when facebook or myspace will come in??? In high school 4-7 hours a day on facebook is what everyone spent, now it's down too....ohh 1 hour...in total if not less). I didn't even know matt had a cell untill this last chapter so it took me by surprise, either way where the hell is his google stocks at now? 1,000,000,000 yet??

Matt wouldn't like stefs promise though hahah!! Anyway cell phones back then that remember contacts....interesting.... O plus service must have sucked!!

Well there is something else.....Matt turned it on before wade went into the room.....so maybe sen danfield will get it first and watch wade and matt make out??? that'd be badddd....i'd flee for life.... Anytime mark

Cliffhanger for sure, i'm pretty sure there was something that was video taped....but anyway HOLD EVERYTHING. Cell phones in the dorms, in 1998??? Really?? cellphones were back then??? they even STORED contacts???? RIM(Canadian Blackberry makers) Just came around in 2002....with setbacks, and really got into it in 2006. So i Question Matts use of Cell phone technology. That's Pretty rich Equipment, i think it would've been required to mention when he got this cell phone given to him, not every one had them back then...hell no one i knew had one.....in 2002ish is when older people started having them, and 2007 i got my own, and now ages from 7-dead have them. I think as a rich man having a cell phone, i think it would've been stolen, indefinatly. I don't like it at all, wades family.....interesting, Politics i love but that man can die in a horrible penitration horse accident. =.= I WANT THAT TAPE Beau is dissapointing. Not impressed!! Anyway post it fast....its.....national story posting day tomorrow....(one of tho's subliminal e-mails that say it's national skip day or coming out day )

Oh bull, i'm pretty sure that whole family made sure he's not an orphan, in fact i bet robbie and brad are secretly already planning an adoption (not sure where gay couple adoptions are in 1998) Either way, i think he needs to move on faster, honestly mark after a slow moving chapter (although i loved the brad and robbie scene and wouldn't mine more "Parental" scenes like that) i think another should follow sooner....and not for my own pleasures but i get that matt wants physical love....but either way his old parents weren't that physical anyway, other then probably a simple hug. Most familys don't do more then that. and Matt craving physical love rather then being alone is rather wierd. But lets relat this to reality now, i have a friend who was just dumped and fired, brutal combo but he turned to physical....attention to hide his pain.....and i'm like wow.....he's pushing away his long-time friends to do that, i'm super surprised cole hasn't gotten upset he hasn't come visited or Turner or something who's just a friend...(why is there only lovers?? or people he fools around with and not good friends?) I duno i'm blabbering and just dissapointed in self-wallowing right now so ignore me I am one very mess up canadian tonight....Civil war outside...hopefull i can see the world tomorrow....have a good night yall.

Coping....(37) not really impressed at all, all that drama of 36 died out to a chapter of sex.....SoooooOoOOOOooo....cool....well not really, i can't only hope people arn't like that but i'm afraid......they are...even though i don't like it. God Damn.

looks like summer love in definatly the one not in the top 3.

i liked be rad, cuz thats where i jumped in....plus brad is my favourite character. and then summer love is my worst only cuz marcel...isn't my favourite anymore....

hm definatly enjoyed the chapter alot!! nexy is christmas!!!! so pumped. but i hope some more is revealed between wade and matt and matt and his rents Mark m