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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT?!??!?! if anything something like that tech institute a year or so back, where he gets really depressed and shoots up the school........but i don't think that will happen. Not Suicide. That would be.....I won't lie i'd probably stop reading it right then and there and say good bye to G.A for a while. Anyone killing themselves over anyone is no way to live. I have my Bestfriends Girl Friend already guilty and hospitilized twice because she overdosed....because she couldn't control him..... (He's hot so he is VERY popular).....anyway he gave that all up for her, they were good for a while. then Shit hit the fan and Hosptial is where it went. Eiter way. NO Suicide. And fine make the moment between danfield and Matt meaningless. Arg. Oh well i loved this moment between them, even if its only a one time thing. but lets not lie to ourselves.....it's not.

Well i could come up with a very far far off analysis so i won't bother..... Just kiddinG! Well Cole will appoligise, i like the idea of infront of the whole team & the coach & maybe MAtts new family Danfield and Matt!!! SO unBELIEVEABLE f**kING CUTE!!! I soooooo hope they get together!!!!!....or do something together!!! Mark When your write about Matt and Danfields Sex Scene i DeMAND you do it with intimacy and not "He starting f**king his brains out" :P....... Yes.....i Demand authors on the way they write : Well you remember how it was my Birthday.....a while back....Sept 23.....well that made me 19......why is still says i'm 18 i duno, i'll try and change it. (Plus Legal age is 18 in Canada for Sex )

Remember that's only if their online also. If they are just peace out and not chat. if not! HAVE UR WAY with us all! hahaha

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Vance is my hero too, just wish he'd continue his stoies As for the moderation in chat i get it....But what can ya do nothings perfect i guess. lol

One that loves the Details...pumped for when He gets back from his....well what two year vacation now??? Don't u Dare do that!!! or there will be a REAL death in the world. Don't get what you mean by Jesus though in having a son.....only thing is he know your bisexual?? and whoa....how do you get to spend all this time writing if they don't know (which they probably do?) Did it end Badly??? or Still going Strong??? U don't have to answer that one. Come on G.A CHAT GRR! Tiger thinks u won't

I suppose as Bi, u've had Straight Sex....with your wife???? i believe, and from what Vlista said in one of his storys.....he made all the characters that bottom, Straight Virgins....and all the Tops....well they all had sex with women.

hahaha That thing was totaly on my 2000 Platnium hits CD....probably the 5th ive owned. hah

Well ok at least take a limb though....maybe a finger....cuz Brians ass had teeth :P!!! Only cuz cody was a dumb ass. I love how in the begining Cody is like "Your Dangerous" then at the end the only dangerous one was cody in what he did to Matt. Like comon i thought that was forshadowing they would end up together??? He's not in this story anymore???? Cody?? Hmmm well i can see that...if brians on his way out then cody is gona be in the middle.....hope he's not sacrificing to much, like Brad did to Robbie every time he needed money with Neil. Either way. Hurry up the next chapter :P

haha yeah i think it was a good chapter. though a death in every one? That could be interesting lets start with Brian and Cody

Soooo Mark is as clueless as us when it comes to posting chapters, seems he does not do it on his site......So i actualy decided to Check his site ahead of time rather then wait for the post in G.A.....didn't know i was in for a surprise as chapter 25 was posted already, and Mark is probably sleeping....or something :D Anyway i really liked chapter 25. Cole and Amber argggg......i wana kill her -.- Seriously cole Threw it all away...just for that.........Grrr...i hope he does alot of appoligising (Blowing Matt) When he finds out the truth. But Frankly i don't think Matt should let him move back in either way.. Um. Jp's Wife (as i duno how to spell her name) has taken on a back role, and i was glad she really came out in this chapter. and was that comment abouit Whist funny AS hell or what!! Anyway Canadian Rememberance day is coming up and we have a Red Poppy as our "Rememberance" So it's the colour of blood.........wondering if there's any Planned thing like halloween for Bloodlines???? hehehe....i'm so impatient with the next chapters it hurts.

Soooo Mark is as clueless as us when it comes to posting chapters, seems he does not do it on his site......So i actualy decided to Check his site ahead of time rather then wait for the post in G.A.....didn't know i was in for a surprise as chapter 25 was posted already, and Mark is probably sleeping....or something :D Anyway i really liked chapter 25. Cole and Amber argggg......i wana kill her -.- Seriously cole Threw it all away...just for that.........Grrr...i hope he does alot of appoligising (Blowing Matt) When he finds out the truth. But Frankly i don't think Matt should let him move back in either way.. Um. Jp's Wife (as i duno how to spell her name) has taken on a back role, and i was glad she really came out in this chapter. and was that comment abouit Whist funny AS hell or what!! Anyway Canadian Rememberance day is coming up and we have a Red Poppy as our "Rememberance" So it's the colour of blood.........wondering if there's any Planned thing like halloween for Bloodlines???? hehehe....i'm so impatient with the next chapters it hurts.

probably not...the job sucks hahaha me being one of them!! haha

Very interesting Facts being presented here. Myself i think that people are really getting suspisious of Granger and Calverts relationship, i think Granger's Next adventure will not only be to india but to rush back, because honestly, while grangers home yet even!! I think someone should outright Accuse him of Sodomy, maybe a Wilcox?? possibly at Carlton house, or the kings chamber. I don't know but i forsee Granger either getting Excommunicated (I don't exactly know the Religious Britian at this point of history....much less who is even king at the time.) and either building his estate into a Castle with Guards and a Slight miltary around him, maybe even a home for retired navey officers he's worked with. Or he Sells off the Estate at the Chagrin of Carolines Family and liquidates his assets, and buys a Ship Capable of Transfering himself, Caroline, their Children, and anyone close and loyal to him, to another land and possibly Defend it against Britain. It's a Fictional Story but i'm just dreaming of all the things could happen Thing is i don't think Grager and Calvert will stay secret for much longer, or the fact that Travers is not even home....still in the medditraiinin(spelling ) eventually i'd like to see Dramatic events unfold in the next story. Calvert however should stick with Granger and i do forsee some threesomes or foursomes (Granger, Travers, Caroline, and Calvert??) wouldn't that be a show....

Well....Bodily fluids was a disturbing ending line. Either way i'm glad caroline is technically O.K with it. She still could ruin his life, take his money, and everything now that he admited it to her. I must say though i enjoyed this chapter alot, no matter the...very shortness of it. I wanted Caroline to meet Calvert again now....Arg....mark...how long till the sequal....i realise bloodlines will continue as usual but i hope we'll have another granger story within two or three weeks. if not sooner. I'll miss you MAC :'( So good....so...sooo.good......im going to go cry as i go to sleep now.... but either way peace out Granger and Caroline for a while.

Are you very well saying that you are ready for it to end?? i cannot believe it....CAP series is like 6 books right now while Bridgmont is only 3? i think. It definatly cannot end. But i forsee that this will be the LAST book with granger anyway....and Frankly i couldn't think of any character we've met that i'd like to see take character #1, unless its maybe one of Grangers children....maybe they'll be developed more? maybeone of his sons will catch him with granger....who knows but IT CANNOT END!! i'll be so mad. if it ends well....CAP is all there is left..

there's not 33?????? i thought there was.....where was i when 32 was decided? haha I'm Pumped!! U have no idea! .....oh and i said Cia was worth $1,000,000 on chat, she asked $1,000,000 what? I was uhhh well there were rating before in "DongS" and i though of something worse....at first it was dollars i thought then i was like AH HA! cow pies.

Enjoyed....well at least it's clean and your 1,000,000 cow pies are nowhere to be found in the middle of the ocean. :P

That'd be cool if he was knighted.

Alright well if you say it's not going to well then it won't but that's freeking stupid. I disagree. Anyway. So Granger is a Captain of a Frig. What's next for Promotions.....Switching Back and forth Between Frigs??? or as a Captian is Any Ship available to him now?? Or still no? I really am not attune to the Bel yet as we duno the problems......damn untied strings....watch Pirates of The Carribean, there's 10000000 loose untied strings. Although, even the Dog had a Role. Hahah BTW why then in Pirates of the Caribbean is Commodor...whatever his face is...look like he's in ....never mind.....even commodor is in your 40's... Just talked myself into that one -.-** Anyway untill we know the problems (hopfully not Buggery on the last captain :S) Post, post Post a Chapter gently down the Stream, marily marily marily, i only hope to dream

You still didn't get my drift. 1 point i must stress! WHO CARES!! The Fact is this is Mark A's Story he can do whatever he wants.....make him captain of the Flying Dutchman Perhaps?? So far no Legends of ol have Crossed our paths....maybe Granger will walk into them.....frankly i wouldn't mind pirates to be more involved. Anyway to my point Granger could get Admiralty very Quickly Because of the mob .....if not that....well then maybe a captain of a 96-gun Ship , With Travers as acting Gunman . Who knows Mark can take this anywhere i'm currious . Lets just not rule out the option of a FIRST EVER 22ish year old Admiral .....Damn....old people these days....don't believe in the young. Maybe the British lose alot of ships all of a sudden due to a massive french assult??

Definatly enjoy this story, not gona lie it's up there with the best, chapter 14 was rather short for you, and i'm sad to here that it'll take longer then two weeks for another chapter, i love the story, but i'lll wait! remember you already have a fan club so now you just keep writing away. I'm currious though with the lenght of the time in between chapters do you work?? have other commitments?? Just Currious I do not like the fact that you relate the story so much to everyday life well with Amber and Kiley(spelling) or Max and you having Diabeatas....not too thrilling to here that, one because i know very much what diabeatas can do to a person (sucks) Just don't into Duce Bipolar or anyhthing to do with getting a bypass.....i never had them but i've had them in my immidate family and it sucks. Anyway keep Writing and Great Job!!

Well it still hasn't snowed to the point if it actually staying around yet....so i'm glad for that. but it's dark at 6:30. anyway i think Calvert should go to Travers....somehow....hehehe and comon guys who cares how young Granger is, he has the mob of England, he could Easily do some unbeatable feet, and come up with a solution and be promoted rather quickly (a year). It's Fictional, but if Granger did he'd be the First, people would hate him, some would like him, either way, i think Granger Will Make Admiral or Flag Captain(lord hoods job??)(unless that's what he is now)

Well id prefer Slivers then a bunch of sexualy transmitted things that Could appear between Granger and Calver....the poor doctor would wonder what the hell was going on. I Say Do not promote him as anything, perhaps even put Calvert on Traver's Ship??That would be one interesting.....turn out....grangers lovers taking a turn for each other, while granger finds someone new that is litterally a God, maybe an Italian stud?..... :D I think that's totaly cool!! i love my idea. Calvert should live though

Alright so Granger does know where travers is. But still i duno communication is key i guess....i'm surprised Granger doesn't Purchase Intrepid for his own use, i almost thought he might. Anyway Thursday twos right ?? :D