Mark M

This was a Cliffhanger.....the other one didn't bug me as much!! seriously mark i think you need to give us a peacefully break, it's only making me think the end is near!! :'( but on another note.....very well done chapter! thanks mark! Bitchy..again i also mean bitty best have some firepower if she wants her kids...like seriously....wow...5 or ten perople will millions in the bank and she thinks she can just up and take them from them...Think again. She will probably be dead before then i bet.

Hmm strong one?? darn i'm thinking i'm talking to a muscle hunk now -.- i'm jealous! working at walmart is definatly toning me out though since were understaffed we run everywhere all the time haha fun stuff. lol

Ill just stick with my phone provider...and not vote at alll but last year i got Bill W to make 100 votes for David A!! Saddend that he didn't win....seriously i thought it might be the "gay" reason again even then because how many many white men other then JesseMccartney and Justin Timerlake....there's only a few. but it's getting more accepting....taking forever for people like Jesse to hit the big timelike Timberlake.

Good notes: Hmmm chapter13 was another cliffhanger as usual lol...these stories always get intense at the worst of times. Anyway i liked the fact you sent lou to my country only....i'd die if he was real. lol. Shirtless in the winter! bahahaha not many do that anyway....it's usualy inside where it looks like winter. lol I like the fact JP and steff are together but i find the whole thing wierd...haha more surreal for steff.... Bad note: Sorry, but i find myself getting very bored with the story, it's all family crap that i don't have making me feel i duno jealous of fictional characters....so i'm wondering if there is an intense story you or someone else has read on here that has the perspective of going from nobody to a family. like JP but he just sort of transfered from his parents family to his own.

Bruno with HIV....now that i think would be ok. But i think Marcel needs a Scare, like a Mistake saying he's got it...then a correction saying no he doesn't like JP had back in though's old days :'( As for steff well true he's very anilitical but why can't he be outwitted for something he needs before he retires haha.

Hmmmmmmm I find them quite entertaining...."Terry Goodkind" The Author Of the Sword of Truth Series....or the Basis for the T.V Series "Legend of the Seeker" did an awesome job at writing in two differnt people at the same time. I pretty much know his Characters Kahlan Amnell and Riched Rahl like no tomorrow, and i love them both. Very good! Now i hate movies like Lord of the rings who tried to do the same thing.....Frankly i skip all the Hobbit parts and get to the WAR! lol Seriously it sucks now but i love the movies. I love Descriptive stories that really get into the technicall aspect of reading people and Society and well everything. The Technical Aspect of Stefs Business Intrigued me totaly, although i'm surprised he's only had one SCARE and never any more....I think Stef could use a Money scare again!!! Maybe Throw Some Stones Brads way who i adore for a Character! Max....i love too....Cody, still a little off about him....i don't trust him....i think he could come between JP and Stef Now!! How come AIDS is Out of the picture These days also??? no one close has died yet....i think someone needs to die again and creat emotional trama & disaster in the family only to bring them closer.......Clair with a Stillborn?? That would be so Painfull! But that's just suggestions and things that may give you ideas on how to go with future stories. lol i don't want to change what you have i love it all!!! But since your rewriting maybe this will create a very different ending!! Great work Mark #1 (That's you Tiger #1 lol)

Yeah i definatly Got a little kick abou the lezbian thing...i do wish we could be in brads persona again....he was developed so perfectly....although JAcks persona would be interesting....although we know he's straight maybe Cheating is in the mix? haha if only. It was nice to see Clair again. Uhhh Cody is cool....Devolped wierdly though and i can't pinpoint it either...he gives me a feeling that he's dangerous and untrustworth. i Feel his relationship with seff is fake... Oh by the way you left us on ANOTHER hook....Seff walking away from JP after he Drops that BOMB. lol One other Thing have you ever thought of Writing a Parelle Novel???? like Jeffs Side to him meeting JP or Rogers or Erics or Isadore's even Robbie's. Orson Scott Card did it with the Book Ender's Game, with Enders Shadow...if you get a chance to read....VERY good. But Fiction!

0.0 there's a list??? i hope it doesn't exceed 124857382935723849237401243487234X0 +10.............if you did catch that it Equals 10... i'm SMART! haha Well i'm glad i pointed it out then. lol

Phew like seriously how i'm supposed to check on stories like "If it fits" or "The Wardroom" or "Max and Josh" if i can't see when there posted...it would be so saddening if they were posted and i didn't know!!! haha jk jk but i definatly love the idea of a recently posted list. Makes life Easy, but i thought i was definatly going mad. haha But No Problem i can wait as long as i know my computers arn't messing more stuff up haha

Ok so now i've tried Two Different Computers...one with Explorer 8 and one without. So....My problem is with Recent posted stories on the home page.....thing is....it's showing posted stories from april of 2008 for me....now i'm not sure what the heck is going on but i have noticed some site changes so hopefully this can be corrected. If it's a problem on my part please tell me what it might be

Hey i need to snatch myself one of these tops haha sounds fun! lol

yay not a whole week!! i liked it too now that i know what kind of a kid he started out to be, now i just gotta read the depressing 1968....well....here i go!

lol! Still i enjoyed it and Stefan was totaly a slut...i'm currious when he met greg

Tuesday...like what happens in the middle of a week? nothing!! so somethings gotta give

Well i guess it took me to Read 1962 between the posting of chapters 10 and eleven of the Ward room and i must say this is an exceptional good story, it peices together alot of things in be rad i never even thought possible! Although i never actually thought JP was Brad's Godfather as it wasn't mentioned in Be rad or MIM. I'm pumped for 1968 even tho i know it's depressing as hell or so i've been told. Anyway Anyone else who has read this or is currently reading this have any thoughts? Great work Mark!

Todays chapter....18, REALLY GOOD! love it....excited for the next....any idea when that may be by chance?? lol

Whoa 3 for 3 on Robey! and guess what i betcha it's probably not!! lol You got the Hard list there, i thought for sure it would probably be bell....or aurther tesdale but i guess not. I duno i'm glad someone dies, it gets my heart racing....just don't make someone bugger the body hahahahahahahaha

hahaha shit that's just hilarious.....and Chapter 11 eh....hmmmm

How lame is that!! lol i think i best find a new read if someone important dosn't die yet! lol no big deal tho....i'm thinking of going back to reading the before be rad story anyway...give myself a break....maybe there's alot of action in 1963

Well as far as i'm concerned it's all made up....now i guess if i really wanted to i could catch up on history and see how this turns out, but why bother when u'll tell me anyway within the next so many chapters. He could been thinking it! haha But seriously. Hang someone already! lol

Mark are you actually using real names of history for your story?? I have never took this in any classes so i wouldn't know. I do know you do your reshearch on the events you portray but is it actually history with your own made up twist?? One other thing....how come there's all these gay sailors and none have been hanged yet to make it more dangerous...??? I'm so confused...it's like losing it's potency of the threat...seems only wilcoxes are the ones who want to hang the gay guys. Oh and i think this sentance is wronge when granger meets bell

Set the record straight?? well....i duno how many records there are here but mine is definatly not straight sorry. lol haha

I guess i should also say i'm not really that surprised that Granger met James.....There both in the royal fleet....if he met captain jack sparrow then i'd be probably jumping outa my chair with surprise lol

Love it i've decided that having the same name with you is an Honor. I've also decided i should like Block G.A for a month, come back and then like 30 chapters of whatever stories your working on are up cuz the wait is seriously not for me....lol... i'm one of tho's avid readers who will open a book and not put it down till it's done..... i've read books like Brisigner (Christopher Paloni, Eragon eldest sequel) in thirteen hours straight. it was awesome read....i have yet to read it again but i'm scared to open the cover yet...maybe tomorrow night i duno depends if wardroom is up As for Story wise, i think granger needs to be like shipwreaked....and in distress or something for the longest time with a Wilcox and others and learn to adapt or something.....anyway! That's my oppionin for the day! enjoy

JJFlame...if that's you in your DP your are HOT! I would say i'm a self proclaimed nerd....but truly i'm not as in depth as "real" computer nerds. I know the World of war craft, Runescape, Starcraft, Battleformiddle earth....and various other games.....yeah i'm a gamer i love to think of new ways of doing things how to make things easier.....wish i could somehow do it at work at walmart but....it's just plain phyiscal labour after that it's just nothing. I am a definate socialight when i get out of my shell, and i apperantly have a big one....lol takes a while for me to get totaly comfortable around people....especially people who smoke!! arg being in a smoke free Province is cool and all but even if they do it at home it just makes me think less of them now....smoking is totaly turned the wronge direction from cool anymore. I am closeted still so that i guess says i'm not a drama major because i hate being in the middle of drama, and frankly i'm scared i could lose i guess the only person to still look out for me....being my Dad.....oh and the dog ruff....dun wana lose the dog either....but he'd probably hump me anyway.... Ok now for the ridiculas part i literally laugh at everything!!!!! even if it isn't funny!!! (not when i'm reading....cuz then i'm consentrating and figguring things out...) but socicalizing....Laughaholic right here wheres MAL??(mothers against laughaholics) They made fun of me laughing at everything at my Graduation introduction. "Mark will laugh at everything, even if it isn't funny" so what do i do? LAUGH and then try to hold my face into a pissed off face! seriously it's hard....people think i'm lying all the time cuz i tend to get a BIG smile even when i'm totaly telling the truth. Last i'm Teeth obsessed....myself i wish i could have the perfect smile.....but i do have some faults with my teeth evern tho there better then most, meaning there alligned and white as hell, but i have chips that dissapoint me.