Mark M

So why was this not expained in the storyline?? i think the Purpose of Sir and knowings it's History much less the hole history would be nice, as i said before i like the detail, and surprisingly as a history major you only give us bits and pieces in the story and a mountin of Great Detail on the outside of the story? To bad! this i find to Very Important. Like In another book Series i read (Sword of Truth, Terry Goodkind) He explained how in the Land called "The Midlands" Women who held the most prominant offices had longer Hair, Servent Girls usualy had Shaved heads, while the longest is the Mother Confessor who's Hair Is half way down her back, and a queen's is actually only a little below her shoulders. It's rather interesting the politics of these stories.

Awe a lover not a fighter!! Some lucky Person to have you are!!

Whoa duke and dutchess have the power.......well the duke....women in this time have little to none exept for the gossip and influential. They have no vote and no rights, Granger could Beat Caroline and No1 would Care, Exept since his father brought him up, i bet he would care. Anyway i think Granger definatly should be knighted by the time he's twenty five otherwise he'll not live up to his awesome navy skills. Alreay it's been about two years on the intrepid! like i think he needs a new ship. Since he isn't a Commander yet...I think a Promotion is soon on it's way! and a bigger ship P.S the movie dutchess with kira Knightly is a Good Movie of that Time!!(maybe a little before/or after though)

Couldn't agree more! I think he's much like a Praying Tiger! Rawr!

Holy F that'd be so cool, but i think it shoud be more memoriable like granger forced to duel with bertie or even his older brother because of a big scheam found out, frankly i think granger could almost make king, but alas i'd rather him not. But wilcoxes would just be for fun then anything serious...i like serious risky plots a wilcox has no power anymore other then the few ship captains left.. either! way it would be exciting!

well if you say that matt has no clue then he has no clue, you are the writer after all haha! anyway, i think cole can work his way into matt. funny on how matts goal is to get to know how big cole is by the end of the semester!! haha! anyway! ready for the next chapter..and i'm heading into midterms so i'll have alot of free time!~

well as i purposely stayed up to read this next chapter! it was EXCITING but no drama....so not so exciting in that aspect........I betcha Cole and Matt are definatly something, friends being the last thing on the list i think! Loved it mark! Can't wait for Whatevers Next!!!( Bloodlines or MAC)

Ah! never thought of Sorry! but now that i think of it i can't think of A Canadian who doesn't say it like that! haha were such good apoligisers! only cuz we mess up alot!

Loves Canadians! awe i feel loved Anyway! I'm Waiting for Chapter 17.... :D But Some Canadians use EH the prairies do not, and we find it funny when we travel to amerca. And it's Funny Most americans also No very little about Canada, myself i could name all 50 states and Most(minus a few) could probably not Name all the provences. and i definatly didn't take American history either....only Canadian.

It was totaly Cody EH, i believe it is cody! Now about the EH that the Canadian EH'er Said! In this chapter I frankly am insulted. The fact we as canadians are Sterotyped to say EH, is very inapropriate! If somethings true, like americans lacking in education(your f**king stupid i mean) then Ok. The American part i beleive is true....the school system ain't top notch anymore in america. As for the EH, some of us do it some of us don't Obviously someone did and now it's labled to us forever. At least were still the nicest people in the world !

I knocked him off! i think he's a... (Fill in word of horribleness here) i wouldn't mind some major trama happen....like some guy he was f**king Directly gave him aids(rape?) while he is part of it!! Then slowly...or quick maybe this time.... He dies! Exept instead of AIds taking him Brad pitt shoots him! .....Brad pitt is totaly on the SCENE now....why is he not in any stories yet! i wana see him f**k someone!!

A Party!! about time! havent even had one for the little kids of Brad though, and hell i expect them to have a PARTY! I'm Liking Matt almost at much as i liked Brad! Seriously i guess the age that there at in there lives is where i am! but still i love teenagers/young adults. As for these new hockey players.....some of them have to have the best butts ever.....hockey players usualy do! Cole?? is it?? The tag along boy anyway is so cute!! I wish i could make out with him right now!! ....funniest....no one ever just makes out...it's straight to sex....haha Funny! Anyway! Ready for next Chapter!!

definatly his dick....but i thought he was still 30....frick...it's 1998? and my dad is older yet! haha

Well it's about time for some music! the violin! how wonderfull....and someone who is really good at it too!! loved this chapter

i love it so far! keep it up!

Hey thanks mark, that was an amazing Chapter!!!!! JJ is cute...and what the hell....how come these little ones don't get the parties and weed like brad/robbie did in HS? i'm a little disapointed. Plus non of them are very musical which i find surpriseing.....and brads art hasn't turned into a career to fall back on if this dot com thing is a bust. Some suggestions to think about re-adding to the story? ANyway GREAT CHAPtEr and i love matt.

whens the next chapter...i thought it'd be monday night guess it'll be tuesday....well sice it IS tuesday now.....:'(

Oh sure i betcha just looked at my edited Display piture.....well the lion is pretty hot...myself i'd pick the wolf because of the fearceness it provides and calm and slyness I love tho's characteristics.....like in Underworld, or Laura Croft......both Awesome Women who display this.....that's why i'd only turn straight for three women.....kate Beckinsale....Angelina Jolie...and Beyonce!! hAHA.....HEY SWEET MAYBE WE'LL START HERE REFERRS TO MOern music...like hilary duff.....then destine's child...then beyonce alone....then miley cyrus!!! i'm so pumped the hannAH MONtana will get into your storys mark. Don't you worry!

Oh sure i betcha just looked at my edited Display piture.....well the lion is pretty hot...myself i'd pick the wolf because of the fearceness it provides and calm and slyness I love tho's characteristics.....like in Underworld, or Laura Croft......both Awesome Women who display this.....that's why i'd only turn straight for three women.....kate Beckinsale....Angelina Jolie...and Beyonce!! hAHA.....HEY SWEET MAYBE WE'LL START HERE REFERRS .

hrm!! can't wait till tomorrow night so pumped...unless your switching back to MAC.....which won't lie is not near as intense right now!!! so whatever you decide i'll love ya still the same P.s-Please identify which mark your talking tooo..haha i'm a litte confused with the it's getting shorter....evil smirk thing!

Oh my Dear lord.....that chapter 6 was orgasmic....with idealtistic drama!! f**king loved it!!!!!! Like....ahh wow!!! .....Next one will be Monday night....i'm excited....so f**king excited how this may continue to turn out.... P.S Worst thing was that it had to stop and it got juicy at the end.....f**king hate these short great chapters!!

interesting it looks as if i did start a debate on this one...but i want the next chapter ;p

yeah i did rant on you ABOUT THAT i think i'll stick with it alough i know JP and Stef almost Inside out... this is ok.....but once he finds out that JP is his Grandfather in law....technically........That could prove to be problimatic for JP Psyche haha! ;p Maybe stef too....but hey Stef did want relations with robbie for a while there....now he technically did....my question is how Robbie and Brad's Family will Be able to take this Trama.... Although will and Matt ight be best buds....as i'm assuming will is about 6-10ish... because robbie is like thirty....meaning...won he have to have been f**king this girl in college.....i'm sorta lost with the ages but maybe someone can correct me?haha

anyway i'm saddened now....there's no more questions....we know alot of the history which is saddening now we just wait and see how it plots out. lol

so exciting....rather a short chapter but excited!! love ya mark it's an awesome Read....Ohio....who do we know in ohio state??? Clarmont? uh oh....if it's BITTY or JP's Mom....who is dead....so lets rule that out....but if it's BITTY or.....i don't even know! then there will be hell to pay Whens next chapteR?