This has been a great story. One that I am glad to see will be continuing.
I love the characters and the way that the story flows from one situation to he next.
I will be waiting with eagerness for the next part to begin.
Dom's stories are the first I read. He opened me to the whole world of gay stories. He inspired me to look for more and I have never looked back. He is still the standard that I judge all other authors that I have discovered.
I wish that he finds it in himself to continue for I know that he has more great stories in him to give to us, his loyal following. There are many newbies just waiting for his next instalments and stories.
I really like Will. Of all the characters that you have introduced, I like him the most. To me he best personifies who I would like to have been at that age.
I hope that you continue to develope his character for many more chapters.
You are truly an artist.
As always a great chapter. I hope that you will continue this particular story line for many more chapters. The interplay between characters and the switching betweening story lines with Will is great and adds a significant dimension to the story.
Well done.