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🔥🔥🥹😆 I am speechless. This chapter encapsulated all my hopes and dreams for Raithion and Azula; You did not disappoint. From the beginning to the end of this chapter I was captivated. This will definitely be a chapter I will frequently revisit when I reread this story in the future. I gotta commend you for the way you're able to convey the emotions of the characters. I believe this is one of the reasons I love your work so much. Reading this story feels like I'm in my living room watching a beautiful love story with a side of politics and intrigue inserted. I can visually picture the scenes and feel all the emotions of the characters. You're an awesome writer, and I hope you never stop. Thank you so much.
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Beautiful chapter!! It has everything I wished for, and so much more. Things are definitely heading towards the trajectory I hope for, in terms of Raithion and Azula's relationship and how it's progressing. All that is left now is for Raithion to provide the thief and facilitate a meeting for Azula with The Basileus. I believe those actions will cement the final barrier broken, for Azula to fully trust Raithion. Also, it will make things easier because the Sura Clan will trust Raithion, which will make them becoming a couple less of a problem. Thank you so much for another great chapter. P.S. Yuri and Azula's bond is so cute and fluffly🥰
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This chapter was definitely a tearjerker. It was so wholesome to see the reunions, especially with Azula and Torak. I have the feeling that seeing him alive was like getting back a piece of his dad. It was definitely hard to hear about all those who died, and the harrowing journey the survivors went through before Raithion was able to provide them with safety for over five years. I think with Azula finding out about this, he now will truly trust Raithion and believe in him again. Now they can truly start to rekindle the romance that was igniting between them. Also, it's sad that Wolfe lost his son, but at least he has a piece of him in his newly found grandson. Thank you for the wonderful chapter, and I'm excited for the next chapter.
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Beautiful Chapter😍😍. It gave everything I hoped for, and more. You wrote the scenes of the farewell ceremony and Azula disembarking from his ship with his league of assassins, so well, that I could envisioned it as if watching scenes from a movie. Ruri's reaction upon realizing the blessing ceremony was for Azula was very heartbreaking, but seeing him become brave and participate along side his uncle was awesome. As for Raithion and Azula, their interactions this chapter was chef's kiss; The chemistry between them is off the charts. The scene where Raithion went to Azula's room while he was sleeping naked asdfhjk. Also the ending of the chapter "😭😭😭." Looking forward to the next chapter with much anticipation. Thank you so much.
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This was a beautiful chapter that gave me all that I hope to see; The interactions between Raithion, Azula, Ruri, Yulin and with Skye and the ladies off scene were beautiful to hear about as well as witness. There was humor, lightheartedness, fun, caring and some seriousness intertwined. The ending scene gave me the shivers, with what Azula said to Raithion. Even though what happened before was not Raithion's fault, it feels like things have come full circle, and he's been given a second chance both professionally and romantically to get things right. Thank you for another awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next one.💥
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This is getting so could💥😍. The council meeting went a lot better than I thought; I think it's because the people has so much respect for Azula, which is why they didn't object to his plans with more force. Also, I enjoyed the subtle interactions between Raithion and Azula. Azula gave the OK for Raith to bring people from his ship to land, so I hope we see some interaction between the kids, Raith and Azu. Thank you for another great chapter.
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Awesome!!!💥😍From this chapter on, will be the journey of rekindled love, forgiveness, redemption and justice. This chapter was everything I hope it would be, and much more. Just as I predicted last chapter, Alise was the facilitator of getting the ball rolling for Azula and Raithion to finally have a proper conversation. I can't wait to see what happens at the council meeting and what that means for the Lyrian Kingdom and Sura Clan. Also, Azula have balls for wanting to meet the head honcho that is the origin of all that has transpired up until now. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. P.S. I was hoping Ruri and Yulin would meet this chapter. I hope they will very soon.
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YAY!!! Another awesome chapter. I liked Alise and Azula's conversation, because it instilled in me even more optimism for a rekindled romance between Raithion and Azula. Azula telling his sister what really went down between him and the Draeya Prince was a big weight off his shoulders and it made him truly consider his feelings for him under all the betrayal and guilt he feels for harboring such emotions towards the 'enemy.' Alise basically gave him her approval to consider getting romantically involved with the Draeya Prince and I believe this will be the catalyst that shed light on all the misunderstands and conflict between the two. Also, despite his being angry, I'm happy Azula is rational enough to deduce that while Raithion might know who killed his father and caused the downfall of the Sura Clan, he is not the reason it happened. I'm also happy little Yulin is almost out of the woods, and has a high chance of surviving the poison. It will be lovely to see interactions between Raithions' kids, Azula and Ruri. Thank you so much for an awesome chapter
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Thank you so much for another awesome chapter. Finally, Raithion and Azula have met after five years of not seeing each other. The reasons for their reunion is not pleasant, with Raithion's son being at deaths door. As expected, Azula was not very welcoming even under the circumstances, which is understandable, because he believes Raithions' 'betrayal' led to the death of his dad and the downfall of the Sura Clan. Despite the chasm between them, I believe strong emotions, even while negative, is a sign that deep feelings still exist towards that person. Even though their relationship might seem impossible, I believe the start of a beautiful journey together is on the horizon and I'm glad to have a front row seat to Raithion winning over Azula. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters with deep anticipation and excitement. Thank you so much🥰
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OMG!!! Thank you so much for these two chapters. I got to say, I had kind of given up on new chapters being posted. This was a very happy surprise. I reaaally hope I won't have to wait too long for the next chapter. Please, I beg you🙏🥺. I'm so excited to see what's next. Thank you so much.
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Same. I was like, what is this?. I don't remember this story. Like you, I reread a couple chapters, and it came back to me.
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Five Years?!!! I'm very happy to see what's going on with Azula and the Sura Clan. Azula and Alise grieving really tugged at my heart, but I knew they were strong and would overcome their grief. Five years later, and they seem to be striving, where Azula is now called a prince. I can't wait to see what the reunion will be like with Raithion and Azula. I predict it's going to be explosive. Thank you so much for this new chapter. I hope we will get new chapters more frequently. 🥰
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I'm so happy to see a new chapter, but at the same time I'm said that there was no Azula and Raithion interaction. I can't wait for them to be reunited. With that said, the investigation Raithion conducted was very bad ass and I know it made Gesi Ajai and Dio's grandmother squirmed in their seats. I hope the wait won't be as long for the next chapter. Thank you so much.💥
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These last two days have been so good. To have gotten updates on two stories I have been waiting on, is such a treat and a early Christmas present. This chapter has given me hope that Raith and Azula have a chance in the near future. I like how clear Raith is about what his end goal is, and also how through his actions, he makes it clear that it is no love match between him and Naeri; She's just another pawn on her fathers' chessboard, and I feel sorry for her. As for Soriel and Dio, I like that it seems like they might come to really love each other, so I hope he gains strength and grow in power so he can protect his wife against his mother. I'm glad his aunt seems to be on their side. I like her, even though her appearance was brief. The only downside, is not having Azula present. I hope I won't have to wait as long for the next chapter. Thank you so much, and Happy Holidays.🥰💓
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Oh No!!!🙁😢 A chapter well worth the wait, but very heartrending. So sad for Azula and Alise. To be collateral damage in a political war, that led to the death of your father and Clansmen is so sad. Even though it's terrible what happened to the Sura Clan, this tragedy will make them stronger and wither the trails to come. I hope Alise comes out of her despondency, so she can be there for her brother and Clan. I really hate Dio for only thinking about the so called "greater good," rather than the damages he caused by allowing things to play out the way they did. That's why I hate politicians and people in power, because they only care about the grander scheme of things, rather than the people who suffer to reach their end goal. I also think Raithion parents are stupid, especially the dad, for not trying to come up with another solution rather than just seemingly caving to Dio's scheme without a fight. They basically threw their kids under the bus for political power. Now, they basically ruined three peoples love lives. I say three and not five, because I believe Soriel already has been prepared to marry not for love and it was Dio's plan. Naeri gets the shuddy end of the stick, because she's marrying a man who seems to care considerably for someone else already and is resentful of the machinations that led to them becoming married. I'm pretty sure Azula has feeling for Raithion also. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you
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🤣🤣🤣I did not expect Azula and Raithion's interaction to be how it was. With the way how Raithion came off in the previous chapters, I would have never thought that's how their first meeting would go. It was awesome, but unexpected. Azula went looking for a mere lieutenant and caught a General instead, and for free too. He went looking for a small fish, but unexpectedly caught a big one, with not much effort either. As for Raithion, Azula basically fell in his lap. How it worked out, seems like fate. Azula seems to have a penchant for getting under peoples skin without even trying too hard. Anyway, now that our main leads have met, I'm so looking forward for the next chapter. 💥
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Great chapter, filled with a whole lot of info. We meet Azula and his family and the people who're trying to defame his clan. Having now met both characters, it seems like there's an age gap and difference in personality. Raithion seems more straitlaced and serious while Azula seems to be more go with the flow and carefree. He does seem to know when to get serious though, based on his response to the news of the ore being stolen, and his being needed to make the delivery. It seems like the next chapter is going to be action packed. Looking forward.😍🙂
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Ohhh Awesome chapter😍Axel and Jeha's chemistry is off the charts. I liked how Axel forgot his fear and anger about the situation once he saw Jeha. Looking forward for the next chapter.
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Awesome second chapter. I can't wait for the next one. You're entering 2024 with bangers💥. Now I have three stories to keep up with and look forward to. Thank you for keeping me well fed. I wish ideas for you to flow like water and your fingers never tire. 😍
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Awesome story so far. Thank you for starting a new story to look forward to, along with Dante and Talin's. I can't wait read more about Axel and Jeha's love story and adventures.😍
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Thank you for the new chapter. I've been coming frequently to check if a new chapter has been posted for a while new. It's a great New Year's gift to be surprised with this chapter after so long. Thank You. Hope you have a great 2024!!!😄❣️🎇🥂
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Things are getting spicy. I can't wait for Rushi's big disappointment when she realizes that all her plans have failed. Also can't wait for Kastan and Jihan reunion. By the way, that law about having to prove in court your innocence over an obviously defamatory letter full of lies is dumb. Everybody guessed that the contents of the letter weren't true and Rushi was behind it, yet they still decide to hold court and summon Rashan. I gotta say, I love Andiya and Jihan sibling relationship so much. I love how she was able to hold in the pain when her water broke, all to not worry Jihan, because she wants him to focus on protecting his husband and son. Thanks for an awesome chapter. It was well worth the wait
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Great Chapter!!! I can't count how often I've checked for chapter updates. I was very excited to see this chapter, and to know there'll be another in a couple hours. Thank you. This was a great chapter. I can't wait for The Empress, Lord Revi, and Nisa to get what's coming to them. The scene with Kiyan and his sons is so cute. I feel sad for them to have the mom they have, but they also have a great dad, cousin, aunt, and Uncle to support them, and steer them in the right direction. I wish Kiyan would do more to protect his brother and nephew, but at the same time, I understand that he's in a rough spot when the perpetrator is his wife and mother of his kids, and also The Empress. The scene where Andiya gives Kastan a dressing down was hilarious. Also, she spoke truth. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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You made my day today with this new chapter. I've been checking consistently everyday, and was so happy to see the new chapter alert. It was worth the wait too. This chapter had so many awesome moments. Such as, Rashan calling Jihan Papa, meeting the generals and seeing how awesome and loyal they are, Rashan showing his smartness, and Temu finding out how intelligent Jihan is, and that he's not just a pretty face. I'm happy Jihan found out about Ferino, being that he works for that witch Nisa. Also, I hope her plan backfires. She hasn't realized she's lost already, because everyone already love and support Jihan being with Kastan, seeing how happy he and Rashan are. I can't wait for her to be exposed. I bet it's gonna be so explosive, and I hope the empress also gets it too. I can't wait for the next chapter. looking forward to the marriage ceremony and Rashan and Jihan's trip to visit Andiya. Thank You so much, and be well.
