Thanks for the post!
This story is pretty amazing and well written; Reading it, I felt so many different emotions, such as, fear, happiness, and hope.
Fear- Nate and Sophia are kids on their own, who have know one to turn to.
Happiness- They found a good though jaded man to help them out (which to me is a miracle).
Hope- They have found a safe environment to live in around people who seem to care for them. Maybe life will get better for them and they'll be able to go back to truly being kids.
After reading the first chapter, I totally got hooked.
PS. All your stories are wonderful and I always seem to learn something about life from them.
So far in this story, I've learned about love, courage, togetherness, trust, and bravery.
THANKS! :-)