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    Mark92
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  • 05/14/2011
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Mark's Poem Archive - 3. The Senses

Closing my eyes and breathing in deeply the visions begin,

My hands on my head “no touching” I say, “no touching”,

The first whispered nothing then soft breath on my cheek,

Holding my breath in a gasp as lips touch mine,

The dart of a tongue tip adding a spark as my breathing changed,

More ragged more urgent as I began to writhe,

Chest heaving a groan as those lips parted mine,

“No touching” oh please oh please “no touching” I rasp,

The kiss becoming firmer parting my lips more,

Then a tongue inside delving searching for mine,

Arching up high as the aching grew “no touching again” I knew, I knew,

The lips moved on, over my jaw to stroke around my neck,

“Oh more please more “my moans fill the air,

Hands now clutching my head the urge so strong to move them,

As my body writhes and squirms, and so hard it aches,

The lips move back up and up to my ear breath now ragged like mine,

The smell of cologne filling my nose adding even more fire to my loins,

“No touching” is whispered again and again as I pant out the words,

Back to my mouth and the lips pressing hard moving over mine,

Then finally the taste bitter yet sweet the final of the senses filing my brain,

Groans and whimpers fill the air around me as I pull at my hair,

“No touching” “no touching” emitting a deep growl as the deed is done.

Copyright © 2012 Mark92; All Rights Reserved.
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Mark92
On 05/15/2011 05:06 AM, GuiltyPleasures said:
This is the most turning-on and sensual piece of work I read in years. Kepp up the good work!

 

 

DIVA

Hi Alex,Thankyou so much, you know i'm blushing right? awww man thanks lol :) Mark
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Agaith

It was a very sensual piece of work and once again it was very vivid. Very nice work Mark keep it up! :2thumbs:

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Mark92
On 05/16/2011 09:36 PM, Agaith said:
It was a very sensual piece of work and once again it was very vivid. Very nice work Mark keep it up! :2thumbs:
Hi Stuby , Many thanks, one does try LOL, your a star Thanks again :) Mark
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comicfan

Your work has become extremely erotic. You have gone from a place of pain to one of sensual overload. I wonder who the lover is in this piece but then again not knowing is half the fun.

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Mark92
On 05/17/2011 12:51 AM, comicfan said:
Your work has become extremely erotic. You have gone from a place of pain to one of sensual overload. I wonder who the lover is in this piece but then again not knowing is half the fun.
Hiya Comic, hahaha wouldnt you like to know hmmm? Thankyou so much for the review your a good friend :) Mark
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Mark92
On 05/17/2011 12:51 AM, comicfan said:
Your work has become extremely erotic. You have gone from a place of pain to one of sensual overload. I wonder who the lover is in this piece but then again not knowing is half the fun.
Hiya Comic, hahaha wouldnt you like to know hmmm? Thankyou so much for the review your a good friend :) Mark
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Mark92
On 05/17/2011 12:51 AM, comicfan said:
Your work has become extremely erotic. You have gone from a place of pain to one of sensual overload. I wonder who the lover is in this piece but then again not knowing is half the fun.
Hiya Comic, hahaha wouldnt you like to know hmmm? Thankyou so much for the review your a good friend :) Mark
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Mark92
On 05/17/2011 12:51 AM, comicfan said:
Your work has become extremely erotic. You have gone from a place of pain to one of sensual overload. I wonder who the lover is in this piece but then again not knowing is half the fun.
Hiya Comic, hahaha wouldnt you like to know hmmm? Thankyou so much for the review your a good friend :) Mark
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Cailen

Your fantasy lover is extremely lucky, your mind must be extremely sensual to come up with such a vivid poem. I imagine you must be making someone extremely happy. Cheers on another great work.

 

Cailen

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Mark92
On 05/17/2011 04:55 AM, Cailen said:
Your fantasy lover is extremely lucky, your mind must be extremely sensual to come up with such a vivid poem. I imagine you must be making someone extremely happy. Cheers on another great work.

 

Cailen

Hi Cailen and many thanks :) going to keep everyone guessing on this one LOL thanks again :) Mark
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Former Member

Such raw emotion in this. I really enjoyed it Marky! Allthree pieces are awesome but this one certainly stands out. Great work buddy.

 

Don’t stop here!worshippy.gif

 

 

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Mark92
On 05/20/2011 06:39 PM, Carl DaVinci said:
Such raw emotion in this. I really enjoyed it Marky! Allthree pieces are awesome but this one certainly stands out. Great work buddy.

 

Don’t stop here!worshippy.gif

 

Hi Carl, Really awesome Thank you, and the pics will keep me entertained for weeks LOL Thanks again :) Mark
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Mark92
On 05/22/2011 12:39 PM, Foster said:
A lot of tension in this poem of control over mind and body and soul.
Hello Bugeye :) Thank you so much, your a very lovely man, nice pic too :)and I mean that :) Thanks again , your friend Mark
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Mark92
On 05/22/2011 06:56 PM, Marzipan said:
That was erotic. Wows. Kissing can be so much more than a full deal.
Hiya Mars , Glad you liked it, and enjoyed it too lol Thanks so much for reviewing :) Mark
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