The Legacy

WOW! powerful and gripping start!

can't wait to see where you're going to take this!

On 05/29/2011 12:38 AM, Frostina said:

WOW! powerful and gripping start!

can't wait to see where you're going to take this!

Hey frosty, Thank you so much theres five years of research goes with this. Thanks again Mark

I did wonder when you were going to post something.

 

Okay so this is trifling because it was a very good start - but "The room is lit by torches blazing on the walls, but no heat comes from them, no light, the same with the large log fire"

 

 

How can the torches light the room but give off no light?

 

Five years of research?? Holy crap ** Quickly goes to read chapter 1**

On 05/29/2011 02:23 AM, Andrew_Q_Gordon said:

I did wonder when you were going to post something.

 

Okay so this is trifling because it was a very good start - but "The room is lit by torches blazing on the walls, but no heat comes from them, no light, the same with the large log fire"

 

 

How can the torches light the room but give off no light?

 

Five years of research?? Holy crap ** Quickly goes to read chapter 1**

Hi Quonus, Nice to meet you at last, it does sound a bit strange I grant you, but I was trying to create a dream like state , it is a real room there are torches on the wall and a large open fireplace. Only lit by the dream. Hope you get it. and many many thanks Mark

Well slavery is not what I was expecting. Hmm. Female slavery on top of it. You know I have to read on now Mark.

A nice opening and spooky.

On 05/29/2011 08:38 AM, comicfan said:

Well slavery is not what I was expecting. Hmm. Female slavery on top of it. You know I have to read on now Mark.

Hey Comic, I was 13 when I started this so expect quite a few suprises.LOL Oh you are going to learn so much about me. Thanks Mark

On 05/29/2011 11:58 AM, Foster said:

A nice opening and spooky.

Hey Bugeye, Glad you got the feel of it, we do return there at a later date. Thank you so much for the review Mark

cool... totally looking forward to the update, glad we don't have to wait too long...

On 08/16/2011 10:48 AM, Naptowngirl said:

cool... totally looking forward to the update, glad we don't have to wait too long...

See I told you lol love you girl

A very interesting start. I have been meaning to read this story for a while and am bowing to pressure, not that I need any really, it's just time really. Loving the concept so far