A Storm of Problems - 1. A Storm of Problems

You idea was very successful Wayne. What a descriptive piece. Great job

Funny, I didn't notice the technique until I read your note. I guess that's a testament to how natural you made it sound. A good experiment. A strong series of metaphors. Thanks for sharing.

Now I'm depressed, this is so sad. if I would drink I'd have a tall bourbon, but I think chocolate will do.

Nice. Love how the beginnings and ends of the sentence connect. Hope you have been made stronger with past experience.

I hadn't seen an end line poem before, but it worked very nicely. Good job!

Very well done and beautifully philosophical. Loved it! Thanks for sharing with us.

Wow, I've never seen something like this so it was new to me. (*hasn't read much poetry )

I liked the story but in the end I sorta felt like moving in a vicious circle.

On 05/02/2014 02:31 PM, nostic said:

Wow, I've never seen something like this so it was new to me. (*hasn't read much poetry )

I liked the story but in the end I sorta felt like moving in a vicious circle.

On 05/02/2014 11:26 AM, Cole Matthews said:

Very well done and beautifully philosophical. Loved it! Thanks for sharing with us.

On 05/02/2014 09:19 AM, Bill W said:

I hadn't seen an end line poem before, but it worked very nicely. Good job!

On 05/02/2014 07:12 AM, Ashi said:

Nice. Love how the beginnings and ends of the sentence connect. Hope you have been made stronger with past experience.

On 05/02/2014 07:03 AM, aditus said:

Now I'm depressed, this is so sad. if I would drink I'd have a tall bourbon, but I think chocolate will do.

On 05/02/2014 05:59 AM, carringtonrj said:

Funny, I didn't notice the technique until I read your note. I guess that's a testament to how natural you made it sound. A good experiment. A strong series of metaphors. Thanks for sharing.

On 05/02/2014 05:36 AM, joann414 said:

You idea was very successful Wayne. What a descriptive piece. Great job