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Genres: Mystery, Romance, Thriller/Suspense,
Sub-genres: Suspense, General Romance, Light Mystery

With his brother gone and everything he loves at risk, Drew tries to keep what is left of his life safe. Can he take back what belongs to him, and save the boy he has fallen so in love with?

Serious editing going on in the beginning chapters SOME IS PLOT RELATED noting too major, but some of it does make a real difference  It has been long over due. Shouldn't be too awful long before it's finished. Chapters 1-14 have been edited so far. I would suggest not staring this story until the editing is done or stopping at the last edited chapters until it is caught up. I will update this note as editing is done. CHAPTERS 13 & 14 HAVE BEEN EDITED! I suggest that you go back and re-read them. So stuff has been changed and a couple conversation have been added. Chapters 15 & 16 are on the way. <3 you all!
Copyright © 2013 *HJ*; All Rights Reserved.

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Parchment_Of_Love
On 07/21/2011 06:58 PM, cogito_ergo_sum1666 said:
hey pls continue this and damp sunshine *pleads* love the way you write your stories its unique and has its pull in every chapter that just makes you wanna read it non stop. Love ur work pls keep writing. *kampai*
Don't worry dear both of my stories will be continued. I just got done moving and such and i don't yet have internet at my new house, plus i have a mild case of writers block =0. NO worries though. Drew and Luke will have and ending as will jake and Donovan. Thanks for your words of encouragement. Hugs, Holly
Parchment_Of_Love
On 12/08/2011 02:47 PM, Houdinii said:
I don't leave reviews very often (I'm blind at it's difficult on this site) but I had to. My tale was similar but def. not the same (I would be a Luke/David mis) and it hit close to home. I can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out. Kudos on a well written and thought out story :)
I am really happy you like my work. I hope to finish eventually. I am really sorry that this hit so close to home since Luke and David have had such hard times. I do hope you are doing okay now.

Hugs,

Holly

Lisa

Hey HJ, thanks for responding to my comments! lol I forgot to ask: if David didn't shoot Rose, then who did? They didn't figure that out, did they? Are the police looking into it? It wasn't James, was it, aiming for Luke or Drew? From the way James was talking to Jordan about doing something to Drew's car in the morning, I got the impression they lived close by. But I thought they were out of state; Jared said he went to visit his aunt down in Texas, so now I'm confused. Who shot Rose?

Parchment_Of_Love
On 04/10/2012 11:26 AM, Lisa said:
Hey HJ, thanks for responding to my comments! lol I forgot to ask: if David didn't shoot Rose, then who did? They didn't figure that out, did they? Are the police looking into it? It wasn't James, was it, aiming for Luke or Drew? From the way James was talking to Jordan about doing something to Drew's car in the morning, I got the impression they lived close by. But I thought they were out of state; Jared said he went to visit his aunt down in Texas, so now I'm confused. Who shot Rose?
That my dear that is the big question :D. I will tell you that the person who shot Rose (who was aiming for Luke) is the same person who killed Tyler and framed Luke.

 

When James threatened Drew he meant he would have someone who worked for him to commit the act. As for the police, well they seem to only show up when absolutely necessary.

Parchment_Of_Love
On 02/20/2013 12:58 PM, Daithi said:
i loved it, I knew there had to be another person in tylers death and everytime I thought I figured it out you would point out fact how it couldn't be that person. I can't wait til you bring out the rest of the story to find out who it was.
The next chapter will be up really soon. My editors and I have been working on it, but it has been a slow process since we are all super busy. Don't worry though it will get posted and after that there will only be a few more chapters. :)
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