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  • 09/30/2018
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Poems of K - 1. I still care

Hard

hard to do, hard to follow

hard to even say it out

hard to even think about

hard to try to love yourself

 

Weak

weak as a prey, bleeding out

crying out

dying out

too weak to stand up, too weak to sit down

too weak to care for yourself

 

and

 

Life goes on, no mercy for the forsaken

No one cares, no one wants to be the forgotten

Teardrop falls, losing hope that was never there

 

but

 

You should know, that I still care

This is my first "content" post ever in GA. Thanks for reading, and any comments/critiques/questions are always welcomed. 😊

Edit: a helpful site admin told me about the indent button, and now this poem is shaped a little bit more like how I intended it to be. Yeay.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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c081huang

The shape of the poem is not up to what I want it to be, yet. I'm still trying to figure out how to fix this. ☹️

Edit: fixed it...kinda. Whew.

 

On 10/1/2018 at 4:39 AM, MacGreg said:

Thanks for sharing these. We always welcome poets around here.

 

Thanks a lot! I've been on the edge whether to post my stuff here or not, but a little bit of push was what I needed. There's more to come.

 

On 10/1/2018 at 4:41 AM, Parker Owens said:

Thank you for posting these. I like them. Please consider posting again. 

 

Thank you! I definitely will post more in the near future.

 

On 10/1/2018 at 4:45 AM, Valkyrie said:

Poetry can be highly personal, and I get that sense with these.  Thanks for sharing.  I hope  you continue to post on GA :) 

 

It is indeed quite personal. Thanks for reading and commenting! I have more stuff to put here, just simmering slowly until it's ready.

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AC Benus

An intriguing poem. I do hope you will share more of them with us.

 

Our GA poets' community is supportive and welcoming. To get orientated a bit, please see our own little town square, "Live-Poets Society." You can get a feel for who is who, and the areas of interest we each like to explore in our poetry postings. It's also a bit of a workshop forum to test out projects you are working on, but maybe would like some help and feedback.

 

Please consider checking us out and say hey :)    

 

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c081huang
On 10/2/2018 at 11:19 PM, AC Benus said:

Our GA poets' community is supportive and welcoming. To get orientated a bit, please see our own little town square, "Live-Poets Society." You can get a feel for who is who, and the areas of interest we each like to explore in our poetry postings. It's also a bit of a workshop forum to test out projects you are working on, but maybe would like some help and feedback.

 

Please consider checking us out and say hey :)  

 

That sounds nice. I'm definitely gonna check it out. Thanks! 😊

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