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    Wayne Gray
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Wayne's Poems - 15. Exalt

Terrified of how it feels,
of this new, soulful song.
It is that which captured me,
but I'll pay if I'm wrong.

A terrible thing you've done,
I can't forget your face.
Your dark brown eyes, sweet full lips,
my heart a manic pace.

In my mind the memory,
your smell, tough hands and skin.
I just need you back with me,
to kiss your lips again.

Exalt what they call sin.

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I like this. You have a knack for capturing the emotional essence of an event or situation, and you do it beautifully. 

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15 hours ago, pvtguy said:

I hear themes of Bluegrass in the last two poems.  Beautiful!

 

Hey, Tony.  Thank you.  🙂

Home is definitely rooted in Bluegrass.  This one... well, this one goes out to a California man.

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14 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

I like this. You have a knack for capturing the emotional essence of an event or situation, and you do it beautifully. 

Thanks, Parker.  I was inspired, and I wanted to share it.  🙂

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1 hour ago, mollyhousemouse said:

there's heat, and want, and need in this one Wayne
i like it very much!

Well, that pretty much nails it, molly.  All of those, yes.

Thank you for commenting!  🙂

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1 hour ago, Thorn Wilde said:

This made me sad... But it's a good poem.

Don't be sad.

We'll see him again.  😉

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Wonderful sin! Excellent sin!  Fun, but better with a man you like and who likes you. So many people are afraid of life and sex and sharing openly beyond their little group twosome. 

We've talked about this .. live your life my friend … we are loving, sexual beings. Enjoy it. 

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6 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Wonderful sin! Excellent sin!  Fun, but better with a man you like and who likes you. So many people are afraid of life and sex and sharing openly beyond their little group twosome. 

We've talked about this .. live your life my friend … we are loving, sexual beings. Enjoy it. 

Thank you, Mike.

I actually sort of look forward to the questions should they come.

We have talked, and I appreciate that.  Thanks for your perspective, and for your and tim's example.

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To the poem's protagonist: If he had left you, just forget about him. You'll get better lips than his, you'll get one who's hands are gentle instead of tough!

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