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A Room with a View (of the Brooklyn Navy Yard) - Prologue. Prologue

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A Room with a View

(of the Brooklyn Navy Yard)

— an Irreverent Tale

 

 

   

 

Amid the darkest of times,

Some books shine through

With warmth, love and optimism.

 

Those are the works I

Treasure most.

Anaïs Nin

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

by

AC Benus

 

 


 

Prologue.

Fated for Greatness

 

 

There are those of the opinion, gentle audience, that proximity equals influence, and one particular young man’s father is often heard telling his wife “I told you, Marta, didn’t I? We should have moved to Flatbush before it was too late!”

But, he is only kidding, for his son’s a person he’s always taken immense pride in, and especially so in the light of a recent family tragedy. No, the love he feels for his boy will not change, no matter the amount of joking in which he allows himself to indulge.

These things cross our young hero’s mind as he pauses at the mailbox near his Brooklyn apartment building. Sights and sounds of the busy street fade around him, for in his hands fidget an eight-and-a-half by eleven-inch envelope. At last, he lifts it one final time to kiss for luck. Soon the creaky bin door is pulled, and his manuscript is sent off to meet its fate.

Likewise, perhaps unbeknownst to him, our inexperienced writer is also destined to meet an incredible fate, and I shall leave it up to your judgment to say if – by the conclusion of it – this tale is one fated to stay within your heart and memory.

 

 

 

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On 11/2/2023 at 8:37 PM, Gary L said:

A dear friend of mine has finally this year got the first book published.  The image of the “finality” of posting the text off resonates.   Good stuff, I am hooked

Thanks for reading and sharing, Gary L. The narrator of this tale has a little bit more to say than usual, so I hope his little contributions continue to add to the narrative's arc of development.

Thanks again!

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On 11/5/2023 at 1:39 AM, raven1 said:

A quiet start with an interesting hook.  I like that.  There are not many stories about writers.  

Thank you, Terry. I'm not sure Patrick has any idea what's in store for him, but like him, we'll uncover it (and enjoy it, I hope) together. I appreciate your support and comments   

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Flatbush, Brooklyn is my hometown so that was enough of a draw to this story….your evocative way with words is another equally compelling lure.

This is a great intro. 😊

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On 12/14/2023 at 12:49 AM, FanLit said:

Flatbush, Brooklyn is my hometown so that was enough of a draw to this story….your evocative way with words is another equally compelling lure.

This is a great intro. 😊

Thank you, FanLit, for your kind encouragement. I hope you will enjoy this little Irreverent Tale of mine  

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