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  • Bumblebee
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  • 01/16/2012
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Big Plans For Not Understanding - 1. Chapter 1

It hurts to know that your alone,
Yes I know people are online,
I see people every day,
people whom I’ve known for years now.

I’m sorry but you’re not my friend.
You may know things about me,
but you don’t care,
That’s what friendships all about,
isn’t it?
I wouldn’t really know…
See I’m not much of a people person.

I told you in the beginning,
I’ve been burnt before,
That I couldn’t handle it again.
You promised you wouldn’t,
But you did,
and I can’t.

There’s big plans for you,
me?
I’m without the chance to prove myself.
You’re already famous in some circles.

My heart races as I see your name light up,
Maybe today?
No... You’re busy…
That’s okay,
I don’t really understand,
but it’s okay,
I understand.

Long after you’ve made you excuses,
The same comforting thoughts linger,
Turning into those icy, yet so nice plans.
Deliciously, brutal plans just for you,
Don’t worry…
I’ll find time for you all.

It makes me tremendously happy,
You won’t be able to look at yourself,
without seeing what I’ve done,
What I’ve accomplished on such a small canvas.

I’m hoping you won’t function properly,
that you dwell on what happened,
to relive every horrid detail,
be able to see it like a video playing back,
to have your screams haunt your dreams.

One day it might dawn on you who did this to you,
While you’re remembering your youth,
but I’ll be long gone by then.

It was fun while it lasted…
Wasn’t it?
You don’t have to agree right now,
But I will have the last laugh,
without seeing what I really created.

Copyright © 2012 Bumblebee; All Rights Reserved.
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Bumblebee
On 01/17/2012 03:41 AM, Mark92 said:
Very deep and emotional Bee :hug:

Looks a lot better posted. I told you so :P

Well done :hug:

Lol.. i can see you doing the "i told you so dance".... :P:hug: Thanks Mark
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Bumblebee
On 01/17/2012 06:05 PM, Foster said:
See, that is why I think you are good at this poetry thing.
Thanks Sammy, sometimes I feel like I'm writing a short story more then poetry... and it just turns out like this :P Thanks for reading and reviewing Sammy :hug:
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Nephylim

Very powerful stuff. I'm impressed. Even though it does leave me feeling sad. Yay... you made someone feel something from your writing.., you're a REAL writer now :)

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Bumblebee
On 01/26/2012 06:57 PM, Nephylim said:
Very powerful stuff. I'm impressed. Even though it does leave me feeling sad. Yay... you made someone feel something from your writing.., you're a REAL writer now :)
Oh wow Nephy reviewed one of my stories :D YAAAAY :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

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intune

Like Mark said.. very deep. I felt emotions bubbling up while reading so it struck some sort of chord. I liked it :)

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Bumblebee
On 01/27/2012 08:18 PM, intune said:
Like Mark said.. very deep. I felt emotions bubbling up while reading so it struck some sort of chord. I liked it :)
Thanks Intune for reading and reviewing :)
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acht-acht

Bee, you´re a scary thing - and I mean in the best possible way. I liked the "You don´t have to agree with me right now", it sounded so sinister. Sweet!

Clara

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Bumblebee
On 02/06/2012 07:28 AM, acht-acht said:
Bee, you´re a scary thing - and I mean in the best possible way. I liked the "You don´t have to agree with me right now", it sounded so sinister. Sweet!

Clara

LOL thanks Clara! :hug: Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
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Frostina

:hug: oh beebee!

you're GOOD at portraying dark thoughts so lightly, i agree with the reviewers, that it indeed sounded sinister!

made me shiver and rethink...

but, you know... even though the friends on the internet are literally miles apart, some of them do care a lot more than the ones physically close and call themselves friends.. :/

:hug:

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Bumblebee
On 02/06/2012 10:24 PM, Frostina said:
:hug: oh beebee!

you're GOOD at portraying dark thoughts so lightly, i agree with the reviewers, that it indeed sounded sinister!

made me shiver and rethink...

but, you know... even though the friends on the internet are literally miles apart, some of them do care a lot more than the ones physically close and call themselves friends.. :/

:hug:

Aw Frosty.. you've gotta be one of my best friends on here, always a kind nice word at the right moment.. and for editing all my other poems when I didn't understand spelling or grammar LOL, Thanks very much for reading and reviewing :hug::)
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