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    Bumblebee
  • Bumblebee
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  • 05/20/2011
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 

Trust me, I know - 1. Chapter 1

The nerves take over,
The shaking starts,
Ragged breathing,
The thoughts taking over.

Swimming through me,
Constantly nudging me towards temptation,
What would they all think of me then?
If they could see me now, would they still come near me?

I prefer disgust and hatred on their faces,
Over the crushing look of pity and sympathy.

It chases down my legs in pin pricks,
Tickling my cold feet,
Quickly wrapping around my heart.

The beat of my heart,
I can feel it pulsing through my still body,
My breathing come out ragged,
Slow and deep then quick and shallow.

I can feel them laughing at me,
Talking about what a worthless fuck I am,
I understand why everyone would say that.
Stupid,
Dumb,
Ugly,
Fat,
Horrible,
Worthless,
Selfish,
Disgusting,
Useless excuse of a human being.

Trust me when I say,
I understand,
I've been told it enough.

The shame of knowing that strangers and family alike,
knows about this,
Is crippling.

It sunk in a few years ago,
That it’s all true.
You can add dyke to that list.
Everyone seemed to know that before me.
So who’s to say,
That everything else is a lie?

Copyright © 2011 Bumblebee; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Toast

Powerful and honest and innately strong. Original because the voice rings so independent, true.

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Bumblebee
On 05/20/2011 05:19 PM, Foster said:
Powerful and honest and innately strong. Original because the voice rings so independent, true.
Thank you Sammy :)
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wildone
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The anger and pain comes through in the forefront. Not many words were needed to portray the message, yet it came through loud and clear. Well done :hug:

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Marzipan

Thank you Bee for another honest poem. It made me think again. What is wrong with people!

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Bumblebee
On 05/21/2011 03:38 AM, wildone said:
The anger and pain comes through in the forefront. Not many words were needed to portray the message, yet it came through loud and clear. Well done :hug:
Thank you Captain :chris:
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Bumblebee
On 05/22/2011 04:39 PM, Marzipan said:
Thank you Bee for another honest poem. It made me think again. What is wrong with people!
I ask myself that question everyday Maria, Thank you for reading :)
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jian_sierra

This is my first time to read a poem of yours (sorry, I've just reorganized my daily life so as to put in a little bit of reading) and I must say, I'm very much impressed. There's something about this poem which rings true that's why I was moved. Thanks for sharing!

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Bumblebee
On 05/31/2011 02:59 AM, jian_sierra said:
This is my first time to read a poem of yours (sorry, I've just reorganized my daily life so as to put in a little bit of reading) and I must say, I'm very much impressed. There's something about this poem which rings true that's why I was moved. Thanks for sharing!
Hey no probs Jian... I need to reorganise my life so I can read some of your stories! :hug: Thanks for reading :)
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comicfan

Lord I hate labels. They never tell you the full story and they attempt to limit and box the one they are applied to. Strong piece here Bee. :hug:

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Bumblebee
On 06/20/2011 11:01 PM, comicfan said:
Lord I hate labels. They never tell you the full story and they attempt to limit and box the one they are applied to. Strong piece here Bee. :hug:
Labels help when I want to fit in, Thank you for reading Wayne :hug:
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JOeKEool

Hi Bee

Joe here. Very powerful verse. I get the sense you are believing all the labels others put on you.

Please don't take their hate and own it. It is not you .It is them.

It will take work and time but please learn to separate from the hate.

I LOVE you Bee. Be good to yourself OK.

Joe

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Bumblebee
On 01/22/2012 01:39 PM, JOeKEool said:
Hi Bee

Joe here. Very powerful verse. I get the sense you are believing all the labels others put on you.

Please don't take their hate and own it. It is not you .It is them.

It will take work and time but please learn to separate from the hate.

I LOVE you Bee. Be good to yourself OK.

Joe

Thanks for reading and taking to time to review Joe :hug:
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Mark92

Wanna hug you Bee, I didnt know poems were actually posted here :hug: Thank you for sharing. Please do more :)

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Bumblebee
On 05/01/2012 03:16 AM, Mark92 said:
Wanna hug you Bee, I didnt know poems were actually posted here :hug: Thank you for sharing. Please do more :)
Thanks for reviewing
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