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Buried Treasure - 15. Chapter 15

Craig and I were woken by banging on the door, again! This was starting to form a pattern.

“Ah!” Craig muttered and dragged the covers further over his head.

I chuckled at him and pulled on some sweat pants on the way to the door. I opened it to find Cade lounging against the door frame holding a covered tray.

“I come bearing breakfast,” he said, jiggling the tray slightly.

“I suppose you’d better come in then,” I waved him into the room and threw some pants at Craig so he could use the covers as a shield if he wanted.

“I do hope I didn’t interrupt anything,” Cade said, leering at both Craig and I.

I glared at him, but he just smirked. “The only thing you interrupted was us sleeping,” I stated and turned my back to put on a t-shirt. “Anyway, how could you have brought breakfast, its nine o’clock at night.”

“This is when the night shift people and the vampires are just getting going,” Cade answered, while placing the tray on a table by the bed, “to avoid confusion they just call their first meal breakfast, next one lunch and last dinner. It makes things easier and everyone knows what they mean.”

“I suppose that makes sense,” I said as I headed to see what was on the tray.

Breakfast was a feast of pancakes and honey. There was a choice of tea, coffee and juice to drink.

After polishing off the food we all sat on the bed sipping our drinks and talk turned to recent events.

“Why can’t you use your abilities to find Basil? You both have the same abilities so shouldn’t you be able to sense each other?” Cade asked after Craig and I had updated him on what had happened the night before.

“It’s harder than you believe,” I answered, “We both have the ability to shield much better than anyone else. Although he is a druggy and drunk, he has lots of practice in shielding himself and using his abilities for his own motives. He probably used them to make people forget him when he wanted to buy or steal alcohol…” I trailed off as a thought came to me. “You know I hadn’t thought of that,” I must have spaced out because the next thing I knew Craig was silently shouting at me.

“What didn’t you think of? Is there another danger?” He asked worriedly.

I shook myself out of my thoughts. “No nothing like that,” I smiled apologetically, “I was just thinking that Basil has to be getting his booze somewhere. If we get all the off licenses to do a stock take, I’ll bet that at least one has a substantial amount of stock missing.”

“Why didn’t we think of that earlier?” Craig lamented, “If we can find out where he is buying his booze then we can set a camera up or see if the shop has a camera. I assume he can’t change digital footage?”

“Well I can’t, so I am assuming that he can’t either.” I said.

“Well let’s get going and try and see who we can find to get in touch with the shop owners,” Cade jumped up off the bed, then turned to look at Craig still sitting shirtless, “you may want to put something on, you’ll catch your death of cold.”

He ducked just in time to miss the pillow Craig threw at him. Unfortunately Louis chose that moment to open the door and the pillow hit him in the face. As it fell to the ground he was staring at us and we all cracked up.

“I’m sorry Louis,” I tried to say, but I don’t know how much was understandable when I was still laughing.

Louis seemed to shrink into himself but he also smiled and shrugged.

I finally got control of myself, “Sorry Louis, honestly we do all know how to behave like civilized humans, most of the time.”

He shrugged again and gestured to the tray, Cade handed it to him and he headed for the door.

“Wait,” Cade called, Louis turned with the door partly open, “I wanted to talk to you about some things if you have time.”

Louis looked at Cade and his expression seemed sad before he shook his head and left the room.

“What is it with him?” Cade burst out, “every time I try to talk to him, he runs away.”

“Cade, he’s probably busy. Craig here is not the only patient that needs to be tended to.” Cade seemed to accept what I said, and after Craig had found a t-shirt to wear, we headed out to find someone who wasn’t busy.

Hi, any suggestions or comments please leave a review or head over to the discussion forum.
Prompts used: “It's harder than you believe…” + “Put something on, you'll catch your death”
Thanks to Tim for the continued editing.
Copyright © 2015 Caz Pedroso; All Rights Reserved.
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one thing I am wondering, after reading all of the stories I think there are I this great world you created has to do with the way that world is set-up in reference to the other beings in it.

Are these communities made up of only paranormals for the most part? were they created to protect the non-humans? Are humans allowed in them? or were the created more as an answer to living on the same schedule which is backwards to that of the human world? I am just wondering a bit about that.

It was also a good thing to include the man's need for alcohol as a way to possibly catch him. I can't imagine finding him will be the hard part...it will be stopping, catching and keeping him that makes it a real challenge. I feel badly for the guys starting a relationship in the middle of this, but I can't help but think that they may have the necessary hand up with their connection as they are fighting this guy. Yes, Jay is the one who will have to sense him and has the same powers, but Craig's calming force will help and who knows what he might sense while along for the ride.

I'm looking forward to more. I do want to know what is up with Louis and Cade. What is Cade? He is human like Jay and Craig, right What is his power? And when do you plan to do Casey and his vamp's story? I REALLY wanna see that one happen.

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On 11/10/2014 10:50 AM, Cannd said:
one thing I am wondering, after reading all of the stories I think there are I this great world you created has to do with the way that world is set-up in reference to the other beings in it.

Are these communities made up of only paranormals for the most part? were they created to protect the non-humans? Are humans allowed in them? or were the created more as an answer to living on the same schedule which is backwards to that of the human world? I am just wondering a bit about that.

It was also a good thing to include the man's need for alcohol as a way to possibly catch him. I can't imagine finding him will be the hard part...it will be stopping, catching and keeping him that makes it a real challenge. I feel badly for the guys starting a relationship in the middle of this, but I can't help but think that they may have the necessary hand up with their connection as they are fighting this guy. Yes, Jay is the one who will have to sense him and has the same powers, but Craig's calming force will help and who knows what he might sense while along for the ride.

I'm looking forward to more. I do want to know what is up with Louis and Cade. What is Cade? He is human like Jay and Craig, right What is his power? And when do you plan to do Casey and his vamp's story? I REALLY wanna see that one happen.

Right starting from the top. I am adding an introduction soon to all my stories explaining the world and how it is set up. i am hoping to have it up by the end of the week, but no promises.

Cade is just a supporting character in this story and so i am afraid you will have to wait for his story to find out more about him. but i am already planning it and He and Louis will get their story soon. all i will say is that Cade is a Psychic but as to whether he is completely human, well!!!

Casey and Jackson's story i am in the process of writing and am trying to write it for NaNoWriMo. i hope to start posting it in the new year.

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Cade is like an annoying sibling. His timing and sense of humor suck. It is obvious that there is a connection between him and Louis. I still don't know if psychics have lifemates or are longer lived. I too am anxious to read Casey and Jackson's story. Cheers...Gary

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On 01/10/2015 06:52 AM, Headstall said:
Cade is like an annoying sibling. His timing and sense of humor suck. It is obvious that there is a connection between him and Louis. I still don't know if psychics have lifemates or are longer lived. I too am anxious to read Casey and Jackson's story. Cheers...Gary

Cade is like a big kid. He is based on a friend of mine. But he will be serious and helpful when needed.

 

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Story caught on slow pace in this chapter. The plan to catch Basil, the tirade of Louis and Cade's uncomfortable encounters. I would say, I can understand the limit on number of words and prompt themes. Moving on to the next chapter...

 

~Emi. 

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On 6/4/2017 at 10:56 AM, Emi GS said:

Story caught on slow pace in this chapter. The plan to catch Basil, the tirade of Louis and Cade's uncomfortable encounters. I would say, I can understand the limit on number of words and prompt themes. Moving on to the next chapter...

 

~Emi. 

 

As I've said before the balancing act is hard and when I wrote this I was still very new. I'm still learning new ways to write things even now, and I'm sure I'll learn even more in the future. 

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