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    Emi GS
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  • 06/09/2016
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Emi's Poetry Prompts - 1. Poetry Prompt 1 - Tanka

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">This Tanka given under circumstances of the first look on my new pet Citrine, a Fish, in the morning.

Astounding factum
that sparkled with summer glee.
Dainty and comely;
fixed on a wood vanity.
The house of Citrine —A fish.

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">Thank you all for reading my poem. Please leave a Review before you leave... :)
Copyright © 2016 Emi GS; All Rights Reserved.
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AC Benus

It's a very visual poem, and that's lovely. One element not to forget with Tanka is that it's okay to talk about "I" and "my" and "me". That makes it different from Haiku, where only scene painting is allowed, and all personal references are eschewed.

 

I look forward to seeing more Tanka from you!

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On 06/11/2016 09:47 AM, AC Benus said:

It's a very visual poem, and that's lovely. One element not to forget with Tanka is that it's okay to talk about "I" and "my" and "me". That makes it different from Haiku, where only scene painting is allowed, and all personal references are eschewed.

 

I look forward to seeing more Tanka from you!

Thanks for all the help and lovely review. I have learn more from the knowledge you have shared on Tanka. And I'll be glad for that. More!!! Deifnitely... :thumbup:

 

~Emi.

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On 06/09/2016 09:49 PM, Parker Owens said:

Citrine. - a lovely name, and a well-crafted Tanka to go with your new aquatic friend. Very nice.

I am sorry, I don't know where slipped it and forgot to reply this.

 

Citrine. She is quite little Beauty. I've never shared anything about her than this. And she is always a quite special. And this contribution for it is worth something.

 

Thank you for the Review... :)

 

~Emi.

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