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Piece by Piece - 2. the beast

Its kinda dark

Deep inside my head,

It lurks endlessly whispering,

It tells me what I know,

Tells me how I hurt.

 

Deep inside my head,

There is a beast,

Its big and black,

It cuts and cause's me to bleed.

 

Deep inside my head,

The words have bound,

Together they are strong,

Together they bring me down.

 

Deep inside my head,

The feelings are stagnant,

Hate and malice are all that have survived,

The trials of time and life.

 

Deep inside my head,

It grows with every secound,

Wanting to break free,

I takes control of my being.

 

Deep inside my head,

Its all over there is no end,

It grew so big it broke the chains,

The chains of sanity that held the beast.

 

Inside my head,

My sanity is in pieces,

Across my mental floor,

Unable to piece them together again this time.

 

Deep inside my head,

The last of my soul exists,

Caged by the beast,

Thus i've only one choice.

 

From deep inside my head,

I see the beast at work,

It hacks and it claws at my important ones,

Takeing it to pieces UNTIL!

 

Deep inside my head,

I see i must end it,

For thoes I love,

thoes I hate.

 

From deep inside my head,

I break!

Its all over now there's no mistake,

I take him down the beast inside my head.

 

Who knew that from deep inside my head the beast would break,

Who knew that from deep inside my head all I could do was hate,

Who knew that from deep inside my head I would turn my life to ashes,

Who knew that from the start of the beast deep inside my head,

Would leave me rock hard in this underground bed!

Copyright © 2012 Freddyness; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Awww Freddy :hug::wub:

 

They say love conquers all. Well feel our love first Bee and then me and then the whole of GA We all love you

 

Freddy let us be your army to fight the beast. Wonderful poem Well Done Freddy :wub:

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On 09/12/2011 03:44 AM, Foster said:
Words are powerful things. Strong poem.
But are words more powerful than feelings?

And

Do are words really express our feelings as they should?

Or

Would Primal Instints of Screaming in Rage, sadness, happiness or another emotion get our point across better?

 

((I'm feeling Hrmmmm, It is inexpressible in are controlled form of comunnication.))

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