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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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A Bastard Named Sleep - 1. Chapter 1

After months of struggling, sleep finally claimed me.

Sweet! Peaceful! Drifting!

It didn’t matter that the sun was still shining or that the rest of the world was awake… I belonged to him.

I lulled in a dreamless bliss.

He sat on the edge of the bed watching me.

I could feel his eyes on my skin.

His fingers ran through my hair.

Lips softly touched my cheek.

I heard my name on his breath, a hushed whisper against my ear followed by his evil laughter.

“Wake up!” He shouted and slapped my face with his cold hard hand.

His rejection stung like a million heartbreaks.

Startled! Shocked! Awake!

Sleep had eluded me once again.

Copyright © 2011 K.C.; All Rights Reserved.
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On 07/15/2011 02:26 AM, Frostina said:
OH DEAR GOD!!

:hug: i couldn't have said them any better!

Thank you Frosty! :)
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Well put. I used to have problems sleeping but not recently. I wonder why! Finally happy, maybe! Anyhow, you have a way with words. Respect!

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On 08/01/2011 07:55 AM, carringtonrj said:
Well put. I used to have problems sleeping but not recently. I wonder why! Finally happy, maybe! Anyhow, you have a way with words. Respect!
Awww thanks, RJ. Sleep has always been an issue for me.
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On 08/05/2011 10:43 AM, ceelow said:
Sleep can be over rated
When you get sleep you think it is, when you dont it can be a whole nother story. :P thanks for reading!
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Personification of Dream. I love how you played with the idea here. I liked that alot. Hmm. Wonder what I can do with that. Thanks KC, you just started the next Inspired By.

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On 08/10/2011 03:46 PM, comicfan said:
Personification of Dream. I love how you played with the idea here. I liked that alot. Hmm. Wonder what I can do with that. Thanks KC, you just started the next Inspired By.
Glad to inspire you- now go write! :P Thanks for reading!
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Been there, done that KC Sometimes I might get six hours a week. :hug: My nightmares are all female so a slight difference so i'll say the bitch that is sleep. Nice work :)

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On 10/05/2011 11:28 PM, Mark92 said:
Been there, done that KC Sometimes I might get six hours a week. :hug: My nightmares are all female so a slight difference so i'll say the bitch that is sleep. Nice work :)
I've had sleep issues my entire life so I feel for you. On a good day/night I get maybe 2 hours. I'm glad you liked my evil little bastard :P
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On 11/23/2011 04:31 AM, AKernina said:
i empathize with u.....brilliant idea thothumbsupsmileyanim.gif
Thanks for reading. I know that sleep is a difficult issue with a lot of people, glad you can relate :D
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On 12/12/2011 11:22 AM, charlieocho said:
Very well crafted. Clever, too. You'll be sorely missed.
thank you.
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