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Just a Milk Run Terran Confederation

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Travis needed to do a standard pickup and move some scientists from one planet to another.  Except, this was not just a quiet little milk run.

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  • 10/12/2023 (Updated: 10/12/2023)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 1,207 Words
  • 1,898 Views
  • 21 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

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  • Action Packed 6
  • Addictive/Pacing 5
  • Characters 4
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 7
  • Compelling 5
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 1
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 4
  • World Building 3

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Tim Hobson

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

The story took us directly into a series of "jumps," i.e., hyperspace intrusions that defy the laws of physics and the limitation of the speed of light. The mission was dangerous and became instantly deadly, and then

 

 

 

a cliffhanger, of course!

Response from the author:

Thanks Tim! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  The 'laws' of physics are more just guidelines. :)

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raven1

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A great beginning to an adventure in space.  True to the anthology's theme, there is a leap...followed by a cliffhanger.  Myr is such a tease!  I did have fun reading this tale.  It is a quick fun read that I can heartily recommend.

Response from the author:

Thanks Raven! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  You never know as to what the future holds for this story.

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Bill W

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

If you're into science fiction and are looking for a thriller, then you need to read this story.  It begs for a follow-up, which may come later, but this is still worth reading as it stands now.  

Response from the author:

Thanks Bill! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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ReaderPaul

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

As my country rural roots might say, "Awright, @Myr -- just because this is marked "Complete" doesn't mean you can't post a sequel in 24 hours."

Great story.  Sometimes normal protocols MUST be ignored in an emergency.

Response from the author:

Thanks Paul!  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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