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I Spy With My Little Eye Psionic Corp

   (7 reviews)

Allan just wanted to get a bit of rest, get closer to his roommate, but the world had other ideas.

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  • 10/19/2023 (Updated: 10/19/2023)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 2,600 Words
  • 1,739 Views
  • 15 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

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  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 3
  • Characters 7
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 5
  • Feel-Good 3
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 6
  • World Building 6

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Bill W

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

You'll get drawn into this unusual universe of intrigue and quickly form a strong attachment to the two main characters, Mark and Allan.  In fact, when you reach the end of this short story, it's going to leave you wanting more.  If you're looking for a sci-fi mystery, thriller, then you need to check out this story.    

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drown

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is about two people who find each other, and while there are ulterior motives, their abilities make them the perfect match. Time to take a leap of faith.

This is a short story that establishes an intriguing world that leaves me wanting for more. Riveting.

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Daddydavek

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Another story by Myr that begs for further expansion.  Set in the world of psionics, young adults and a university setting it sets the stage for an in depth look at the two leading characters as well as the disappearance of Mark's uncle Paul.  Perhaps this anthology piece will picque our busy host's muse to provide more. 

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astone2292

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

As someone who hasn't immersed in this universe, this was an interesting tale of two men who balance each other. Absolutely enjoyed reading this short tale!

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Sherye Story Reader

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

The balance these 2 give each other are special. They need each other to get by. A must read for anyone who loves the connection these 2 give off!

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raven1

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

A brief look into an intriguing new universe.  I sincerely hope we will be treated to a much longer look.  This is an excellent anthology piece that left me wanting much more.  

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ReaderPaul

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This is a story where we discover more as we progress.  Allan and Mark help balance each other to some extent, with Allan at this point seeming more grounded.

A short tale which is both intriguing and enjoyable.

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