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I Spy With My Little Eye Psionic Corp

   (7 reviews)
Genres: Action/Adventure, General Fiction, Mystery, Science Fiction,
Sub-genres: Soft Sci-Fi, Light Mystery, Action Fiction, Spy-Fi, Campus / School Life

Allan just wanted to get a bit of rest, get closer to his roommate, but the world had other ideas.

Copyright © 2023 Myr; All Rights Reserved.
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  • 10/19/2023 (Updated: 10/19/2023)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 2,600 Words
  • 5,541 Views
  • 15 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

Story Recommendations (7 members)

  • Action-Packed 0
  • Great Pacing 3
  • Great Characters 7
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 6
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 6
  • Counldn't Put It Down 5
  • Suspenseful 2
  • Gave Me Chills 2
  • Funny 0
  • Feel-Good 3
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 0
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 0
  • Like 8
  • Love 5
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    • 2,600 Words
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    • 15 Comments

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Bill W

Bill W 63,975

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

You'll get drawn into this unusual universe of intrigue and quickly form a strong attachment to the two main characters, Mark and Allan.  In fact, when you reach the end of this short story, it's going to leave you wanting more.  If you're looking for a sci-fi mystery, thriller, then you need to check out this story.    

Response from the author:

Bill, thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the world I've created. :) 

  • Like 1
  • Love 4
drown

drown 8,152

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

This is about two people who find each other, and while there are ulterior motives, their abilities make them the perfect match. Time to take a leap of faith.

This is a short story that establishes an intriguing world that leaves me wanting for more. Riveting.

Response from the author:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, drown. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) 

  • Love 3
Daddydavek

Daddydavek 47,700

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Another story by Myr that begs for further expansion.  Set in the world of psionics, young adults and a university setting it sets the stage for an in depth look at the two leading characters as well as the disappearance of Mark's uncle Paul.  Perhaps this anthology piece will picque our busy host's muse to provide more. 

Response from the author:

Dave, thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed this story as well as the larger world.  :) 

  • Love 3
astone2292

astone2292 39,879

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

As someone who hasn't immersed in this universe, this was an interesting tale of two men who balance each other. Absolutely enjoyed reading this short tale!

Response from the author:

astone, thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you took the chance of reading and that you enjoyed it! 

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  • Love 3
raven1

raven1 70,333

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A brief look into an intriguing new universe.  I sincerely hope we will be treated to a much longer look.  This is an excellent anthology piece that left me wanting much more.  

Response from the author:

raven, thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I do plan to write more in this world and probably more with these characters in the future. :) 

  • Like 1
  • Love 2
ReaderPaul

ReaderPaul 21,661

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is a story where we discover more as we progress.  Allan and Mark help balance each other to some extent, with Allan at this point seeming more grounded.

A short tale which is both intriguing and enjoyable.

Response from the author:

Paul, thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

  • Like 1
  • Love 3
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