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In The Arms of an Angel 1. Wednesday Briefs

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Genres: Fantasy, General Fiction, Horror, Mystery, Thriller/Suspense
Sub-genres: Suspense, Drama, General Fantasy, Horror - Modern, Light Mystery

One dark and stormy night Pasha and his brother Lukas accidentally run over an angel, and things go to hell fast.

You can thank Cia for this story. I would never have thought to post it here if she hadn't done so with hers. Cia and I are both members of a weekly flash fiction group. I have a few chapters start on her so I've posted them all to date and I will post new as i write each Wednesday. Head over to my blog for news and my other flash story, which is now complete, Luke and Rune.

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  • Addictive/Pacing 1
  • Characters 1
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 1
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Brayon

Brayon 40,663

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This story itself is good and interesting. Was an enjoyable read. The three primary characters grow and evolve over the course of the story. There are some interesting themes in it as well.

 

The reason why I rated it four stars, is because of the technical issues. Formatting, grammar, spelling changes of the several words a few times, missing words and other issues were distracting from the over all flow.

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