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    Nephylim
  • Nephylim
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  • 01/05/2011
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Looking back... Far Back - 1. Ishtahar's Song

The moon was bright

The night you died

The night I wached the dying of the light

They would not let me come to you

The swords were bright

The night you died

When I watched your soul take flight

They would not let me come to you

Your eyes were bright

The night you died

Before they tore you from my sight

And they would not let me come to you

The moon was bright

The night I died

The blood pooled on the ground and dried

And I did so want to come to you

The stars were bright

The night I died

Orion's belt, too great a height

And still I could not come to you

The moon is bright

On this night

Bonds break, stars fall

And you come to me

Copyright © 2011 Nephylim; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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On 06/04/2011 09:12 AM, carringtonrj said:
lovely. reminds me of 'the dead' with the "would not let me come to you"
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. It is very symbolic, but just to me :) I am So glad you posted a review Thank you
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TheLotus

That must have been a terrible experience, I’m sorry you had to go through this. If you don’t mind me asking, who are „they“, and do you have any idea where your beloved one is now?

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