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To Poetry Prompts - 1. Tanka

Alone on the plate

Ripe and red, juicy better

Round and round it goes

There, away. Oh no! "Come back!"

Lonely I sit, nothing left.

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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Aditus

Is it bad that I laughed out loud when I read this? Don't know about the direct speech, but I really like it. :)

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On 09/05/2014 12:20 AM, aditus said:
Is it bad that I laughed out loud when I read this? Don't know about the direct speech, but I really like it. :)
How could you after so much angst? (referring to the last line)

Thanks for the review. I was tired of feeling gloomy and I needed a change. If I made you laugh, then it must have served its purpose :)

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On 09/05/2014 02:29 AM, Irritable1 said:
Ha ha ha! That's awesome! And you did such a great job changing up the pace!
Thanks Irri :P
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On 09/05/2014 02:29 AM, Irritable1 said:
Ha ha ha! That's awesome! And you did such a great job changing up the pace!
Thanks Irri :P
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Valkyrie
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LOL Now I have "On Top of Spaghetti" stuck in my head. :P (Even though I assume you are talking about a tomato and not a meatball). LOL

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On 09/05/2014 04:47 AM, Ron said:
"Oh no!" :o:lmao: Indeed, that cracked me up. Thank you . . . that was fun. Love it!
Thank you, Ron. I enjoyed writing it.
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nostic
On 09/05/2014 06:03 AM, carringtonrj said:
neat job. you should post more poems.
Thanks r. It can never be so touching like yours, I'll still try. :P
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On 09/05/2014 06:31 AM, Valkyrie said:
LOL Now I have "On Top of Spaghetti" stuck in my head. :P (Even though I assume you are talking about a tomato and not a meatball). LOL
Meatball? :o I wasnt even thinking of a tomato. I had something more sensual in mind like an apple or a peach :P Thanks for reading.
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On 09/05/2014 12:51 PM, joann414 said:
How funny! Enjoyed this so much. :)
:D Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review.
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