A Ticklish Thriller

Hey guys, I've made a style change to the first chapter. Instead of astericks, I'm using the character names for separation. If it's not too much to ask, can you guys check it out, and see if it makes a difference? I've made the changes to the original documents on my laptop, and am using the new style for the third chapter. To me, I found it easer to read, and the story seems to be more fluid. 

Thanks,

Love y'all

I also made an update with the second chapter. Please, let me know, if y'all think it flows better, and isn't as choppy. 

Thanks

I really enjoyed this story.  I'm not sure if that's the final chapter? I'm hoping that we get to hear of the witch's comeuppance.

A nice, cozy story with lots of tickling🙂

52 minutes ago, Luke Past said:

I really enjoyed this story.  I'm not sure if that's the final chapter? I'm hoping that we get to hear of the witch's comeuppance.

A nice, cozy story with lots of tickling🙂

Thanks Luke, I really appreciate it. 

It's not the last chapter, I think I can get another couple chapters in. I wasn't planning on anything else with Janice, other than someone asking Lance, and Mikey how they're dealing with everything. I have no idea how to begin creating a courtroom situation.

Besides, I don't think it's necessary. What's more important, is the family moving forward. There's Christmas, New Year's, and then the Stalker's final act. 

I hope you're not disappointed. 

I just wanted to let you guys know, I am still writing this. I'm just taking a short break from this, and Love Of Family, to get a couple more chapters done on my other two stories. I promise, it won't be too much longer before this is updated. After all, I have been posting quite rapidly. Thanks to everyone who's been enjoying this. 

I wanted to give everyone an update. I'm not dropping this or the other stories I've been writing. However, I'm not working on a new chapter of this or the other stories, until I'm done or close to being done with Love Of Family (Revised.) I just don't have the concentration to focus on more than one story at a time. After I started the LOF revision, and even more after running it through Grammarly, I noticed how much the story was suffering, and not getting the attention it deserved. So, my focus will be on LOF. 

14 minutes ago, Ajbt2001 said:

I wanted to give everyone an update. I'm not dropping this or the other stories I've been writing. However, I'm not working on a new chapter of this or the other stories, until I'm done or close to being done with Love Of Family (Revised.) I just don't have the concentration to focus on more than one story at a time. After I started the LOF revision, and even more after running it through Grammarly, I noticed how much the story was suffering, and not getting the attention it deserved. So, my focus will be on LOF. 

 

That makes perfect sense, one perfect story at a time.

Okay guys, thanks for sticking with me. I wanted to let y'all know what I did with Love Of Family, I'm doing with Thriller. I've just finished running the first chapter through Grammarly, and I'm revising the storyline a bit. So, you'll be seeing more of a few lesser characters in the revision. I'm hoping you guys enjoy the new offering.