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Capt vs Goofball Carter

   (5 reviews)
Genres: Comedy,
Sub-genres: Comedy Modern
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Steve's a wrecking ball of boredom, intelligence, and drama... except no one believes him. At all.

Especially not straight laced, Baptist, All-Canadian repressed jock Kenny Jensen who is convinced Steve is out to pull a prank on him.

Lydia, Steve's sister, all around smartest girl in the room, and utterly fed up with Steve's BS, sees the truth. But will the two boys? No chance, Lydia's going to have to fix it. Uggh, boys, why are they so dumb?

Copyright © 2025 Topher Lydon; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (16 members)

  • Action Packed 8
  • Addictive/Pacing 12
  • Characters 14
  • Chills 3
  • Cliffhanger 7
  • Compelling 11
  • Feel-Good 12
  • Humor 14
  • Smoldering 7
  • Tearjerker 4
  • Unique 13
  • World Building 6


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Seraph28

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

In this story Mr.Lydon attempts to answer what happens when an unstoppable force of chaos meets an immovable object of order. We are introduced to Steve, a young prodigy, who thrives on chaos and Kenny ,a jock, who is the epitome of order. What follows is beautiful chaos as two opposites try to find middle ground. The pacing , the humour in this piece and the multifaceted characters are captivating . This is a highly recommended piece of work for those who like a laugh!

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chris191070

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

We have Steve the master of chaos and Kenny who is a straight laced bapist.

Then we have Lydia, the smartest girl out to fix the problems.

But there is much more to this story it is a story full of comedy, entertaining situations and some interesting situations 😄 

Give it a read you will not be disappointed.

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