peter rietbergen
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A Room He Could Have Crossed Yesterday
peter rietbergen commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in A Room He Could Have Crossed Yesterday
What he wanted was the trail.... But that would have been an abdication of responsibility, a return to a life really managed by another person, by others. There won"t be any future for O, or for both O and J in the trail. It was, or should be, an instrument, only. -
Where the Trail Ended
peter rietbergen commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in Where the Trail Ended
Obviously, this mishap is an absolute condition for Oliver's change. Without it, his learning process , his self-discovery would never continue. -
The Man by the River
peter rietbergen commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in The Man by the River
A harrowing tale. Expanding it would be a crime against all the emotions it contains, reveals, and does not reveal. -
Talking about cozy enmity...
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Chapter 1- Where We Came From
peter rietbergen commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 1- Where We Came From
The first part, about the two: comfortable. As well as, on s different level, moving. Then the diary. I understand the plot/narrative need of ending this chapter with the first diary entry. But is it "logical"? Wouldn't you open a book you found on, precisely, the first page? Oh well, no matter. In general lines, we know what will transpire, later. But it is beautifully written, and will keep me reading! -
A powerful chapter. Food for thought, too, about the essence of wanting, demanding, giving, witholding.
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A closeted Jack? I don't,t think so. But obviously both K and L are more than "normally" interested in N. Enough wood for a blazing fire.
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Indeed: a declaration of sorts. And not even a foolish one. Love without occasional annoyance would be torture.
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More houses & drawing a line
peter rietbergen commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in More houses & drawing a line
Given the garden, the various, separate spaces, and Russ's money, this sound perfect.- 17 comments
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Frightfully spot on....
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Now awaiting they moment they both agree on saying - at the same time, too: I love you. Violins will weep and angels will sing.
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Complications galore ahead. I.e.: much fun.
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There are several psychological terms for this personality disorder. Difficult to live with. Not easy to contain, let alone remedy. If a person perseveres, that is real friendship. But in daily routine...???
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Short but pointed moments. Steps towards a certain conclusion.
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The Furnishings of Staying
peter rietbergen commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in The Furnishings of Staying
Of course they stay in the apartment. It is (going to be) the test of their togetherness, for they have to gauge the depth of a distance that they yet need to bridge while, assumedly, they will also need to retain that distance for that togetherness to become a foundation.
