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Again, you are such a good writer. I don't know if it's a gender thing or what, but as a female you capture details, emotions, etc. differently than other authors. You make me feel like I'm reading a real story. When time is precious, to decide to read something worth it is a big decision. Is there anything on this site that can let us know when you update with a new chapter?

The story is marked complete - is that the case? Really liked this story, but it's hard to imagine that was then end. hope not!

Just read ch 24 When I started reading I said really loudly "GRR, ARGH, What?" Had to go back and read it just to make sure you didn't screw with my mind even more. I experienced a variety of emotions. Felt for both Beau and Leng as they experienced the roller coaster of emotions and events. ...I need to go hug my puppy now. Really looking forward to the final chapter. No, I take that back, I'm not looking forward to the story to end. In advance, thanks for a great story with infectious characters, plot, and style, etc.

I'm craving some Indiana Summer. Wanted to let you know that the anticipation is high. I'm checking the site almost everyday hoping there's a new chapter. I think I'm addicted.

This is the line - am I confused? Annie to David --- "I guess that

Made my day to see another chapter of Indiana Summer posted! Annie said Billy was happy when William was around - wondering what that's about. William and Chris seem to have a 'close friendship'. Does Chris know why William won't talk? Does anyone? Unless something goes horribly wrong at the river/pond (water) I would guess Billy might be in a pretty good mood tonight. Wonder what Annie would think of that? Can't wait for Billy to hug David and not let go!

Need to add. I not convinced that Billy understood what David was trying to say. Billy still might not think there's a chance in hell that David could be gay. So, I'm not sure if it was supposed to be a little bit ambiguous, but to me it was. ...and I'm ok with that. Makes me more eager for the next chapter.

Chap 6 and 7. Wow. I hope Billy realizes what good friends he has in Walker and Sam. Good fight. Great emotions. I didn't expect David to react the way he did at the end of chap 7. But I'm glad he didn't kiss him or anything, to predictable. He's leaving it up to Billy to man up. Should be interesting evening for the both of them. Can't imagine that they can avoid talking about this one.

I love this story--is chapter 18 coming soon? (no pun intended)

This is my favorite story right now. Here's why, a lot of stories have two major characters and alternating POV. But with many stories, one of the characters is fleshed out more than the other. You've created two, independent characters, both lovable, in pain and have their flaws. Another thing, instead of the cliche misunderstood mysterious city boy, you choose to have the country boy being the cutter. Gives both of them more depth. Billy might think he's the only one cutting but David might have some understanding. Love the tension between the two and their own internal struggles. Awaiting for the next chapter--please post soon!

Just finished reading the chapters. It's really a good start. Oliver makes me laugh. He has really great goofy thoughts. Eager to see how the story plays out. I'm not a writer so I don't have any feedback or hints, it's just a good story.

I really like this story. I'm eager to see if (and how) you cover the guys going to camp, etc. A couple of author Q's for you -- (forgive my ignorance if this has been previously covered) As a straight female, do you have any challenges getting inside the head of a gay male teenager? If so, what are they? And how do you do it? (...you do it well btw) Seems like some female authors have a unique perspective, not only on their gay protagonists, but their ability to craft a group of friends that are more realistic than their male counterparts. Any thoughts? Really looking forward to a new chapter!!

I LOVE this story. I feel a lot like Jonathan. Have had some of the same experiences, lots of therapy and 'casting out demons' stuff. It's been great for the self esteem. I like that Christian has no idea of what Jonathan's life is really like, he has no way to relate to his upbringing. It's like both are aliens in their own way. Both will grow as they explore each others lives. I was surprised that mom was so insistent that jonathan call his dad. I didn't understand it. And it seemed out of character for her. I thought she would be more understanding, etc. So, that whole thing was confusing for me. Anxious to see what happens when jonathan goes in the house. Are there options other than than dad being predictably pissed, hits jonathan, punishment is declared, and complications ensue, etc.? What plausible option would really surprise us? make us go 'huh'? Note to Krista: so, (maybe this is obvious to everone but...) you're a girl and you have a boyfriend. How do you write so brilliantly from a teen boys perspective? And why did you start writing about gay boys? I've wondered that about Robin Reardon too. You have the same rare talent.

I really like this story. Here we are at ch 8 and no one has confessed their love or jumped each other, etc. Instead, we are getting to see more than just a glimpse, but a deep dive into what each of these guys are made of. I feel like they are my friends. Or friends that I've had, or most likely, a friend that I'd like to have. The depth of their friendship plus the baggage of the past is very real. They share a history and their lives are intertwined. Obviously, I liked when they jumped in the shower together. I've done that several times with best friends, gay or not, it's just a level of friendship that most people can't understand if they haven't experienced it. It's awesome. It shows trust, sacrifice, deference, submission and respect. And soon that ritual becomes a dance I'm not going to place a bet as to when one of them drops their defenses and confesses what's going on. I can say at this point, it's not predictable. It doesn't seem like that is to happen right away or later. I guess what I'm trying to say is that the foreshadowing is there, but it's not predictable. Looking forward to ch 9.

First post ever on GA. I love this story. It's a bit like holiday every time you send an update that a new chapter is ready. I actually clear the schedule and get myself ready to read a new chapter, etc. It's that good. When ch 16 became available, it's been so long that I was afraid I'd forgotten details, I started back with ch 14 to get back into the pacing. I'm trying to picture what Ryan looks like. I hope he comes around a bit more and isn't so freaked out by Jake being gay. I like the pacing of how Jake and Shane's relationship have progressed. But I'm now ready for a bit more...as they are too? Cemetery scene was surreal. I've been in that situation with a friend who's mum died of cancer a month after he turned 16. For a couple of years, we would go to the cemetery and he wouldn't say anything, not even cry. Then one year, he was ready to talk...and cry. Did not expect Colin to be "the baseball player"! However, earlier in the story, I was getting a bit of a gay vibe from his friendship with Ryan. Like, he was about to repeat the past. The bedroom scene with Coin and Shane was masterful. Pacing was spot on. Could feel the tension. Interjecting Ryan at the right moment was so key to not letting all the dialog and details out of the bag. I could also feel for Colin, he knew that his world was about to come crashing down. So anxious to see: Shane and Jake do at the ice cream date--will they get outed? How Shane deals with Jake knowing about Colin. How will Ryan react to Colin? Even though he knows nothing, will Colin out Jake just to strike first? ...and a hot scene with Shane and Jake. Again, this is by far my favorite story out of the hundreds on GA. Thank you. Your quality of writing is much appreciated.