As I said in my prior blog, I was going to write a more erotic story, but I wanted to go against the traditional nifty erotic story format of quick sex.

I don't know how many of you guys actually still read Nifty, when I was a teen in the early 2000's, Nifty was the place to read both the sexiest and fun gay stories on the web. I recently re-read some of my old favorites and I looked into the older writers work. The erotic element in their stories were more pronounced and most of them had some kind of meaning behind the gay sex.

My story In Touch at first seems like a homage to the older gay stories from nifty, even though it's more extreme, but it is still the same kind of story. Gay kid gets bullied, then gay kid takes revenge and make the bullies pay in kind.

Then, you get more modern outtakes for turning straight boys gay in my second act. I know how I wrote it seems less than perfect, but I am going more with an eye to inexperience straight boys trying to be gay. Also, I look at the consequences such actions will bring.

Finally, a final realization about what gay erotic fiction has become in my final act.

You can jack off it on the first read, but after finishing it and reading further, you will regret it. I wanted to write a story that encompasses a decade of gay erotic fiction with classic plots, but my own twists and turns.

One thing I dislike about modern gay erotic fiction is that there is less stress on the consequences of the characters actions and more stress on the sex. We all want to get off more quickly and without thinking about the actions these characters engage in. Question on consequences never answered like: Is it right to turn a straight guy gay by force? Few really cares about that, but as a gay writer, I at least do care about the consequences in such a situation.

As a sci-fi writer, I also like to frame my stories within a modest science fiction framework to establish a commentary on the events that led up to it.

Well, I will let you guys review my work.

http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/story/w-l/intouch